“…… The second stunned man stared straight at the black roof made of thatch and mud, and the old quilt covered with his body ......"

Ye Linhan held the mobile phone in one hand and looked carefully at this book "Mortal Cultivation of Immortals" from the beginning.

This is the first sentence of the opening chapter of mortal immortal cultivation, and this second stunned person is the protagonist, named Han Li.

The plot unfolds from here.

This year, Han Li was just ten years old, and his parents, brothers, and sisters. A total of seven people live in a small village on the edge of a mountain.

However, the second stunned child is naturally not really stunned, but second to none smart among children of the same age.

After all, it's the protagonist.,Naturally, there are some differences from other children of the same age who go to the trees and go down to the river in the mountain village.,

Han Li has lofty ideals and longs to see the wider world outside.

On this day, there was a 'distinguished guest' in the house, who was the third uncle of the protagonist, a person who was the big shopkeeper in the restaurant in Qingniu Town.

The restaurant where the third uncle is the shopkeeper belongs to the 'Seven Xuanmen', one of the best Jianghu sects in the vicinity of hundreds of miles.

The third uncle's intention was to recommend Han Li, a child of the right age, to go to this 'Seven Xuanmen' to participate in the selection of inner disciples.

Once selected, Han Li will be able to enjoy martial arts practice and better benefits at the same time.

Then the protagonist was taken out of this mountain village and embarked on the road to the Seven Genmen.

This is the plot of the first chapter of "Mortal Cultivation of Immortals",

Not surprised, not happy, can only be said to be mediocre,

If Ye Linhan is still in a more anxious mood now, it is estimated that he can quit after turning two pages.

However, Ye Linhan, who had already turned to the back before, was more interested in the development of the plot in the back, and continued to watch it patiently.

The plot of the second chapter is even simpler,

The third uncle brought the protagonist Han Li to the Chunxiang Restaurant in Qingniu Town, where he was the shopkeeper.

After staying for three days, a Dharma protector came from the inner gate of the Seven Xuanmen and took Han Li away.

In the process, the situation of the Seven Xuanmen was briefly introduced, and it was said that the Seven Xuanmen was founded by a person named the Seven Absolute Master more than 200 years ago.

Later, the Seven Absolute Masters died, and they fell with it. Within a radius of 100 miles, there is also a rival, called the Wild Wolf Gang.

“…… Seven Peerless Masters? Does this Jianghu sect have a background in cultivating truth? ”

Judging from the name, knowing that this is a novel of cultivating immortals, Ye Linhan looked at the second chapter and had some guesses.

After reading the second chapter of Patience, the only thing that impressed me was that the third uncle stuffed money for the protector of the Seven Xuanmen and asked him to help take care of his nephew, who is also the protagonist.

Let Ye Linhan look at it and feel that these three uncles are okay.

Further on,

Ye Linhan looked a little impatient again,

It's really that the plot is progressing too slowly, and there are no surprises.

I clicked it over a little quickly, and took a cursory look,

talked about the protagonist and other children of the same age to the Seven Xuanmen,

Then the introductory test began.

In the test of climbing the cliff, the protagonist did not pass successfully as Ye Linhan expected,

Instead, it exceeded the time and did not succeed in reaching the top.

“…… Waste firewood flow? ”

Ye Linhan frowned.

Is the genre still popular now?

But it doesn't feel the same way.

The whole test has a complete process, and it's not like in many Xiuzhen novels.

When the hand is pressed on the detection stone, the protagonist is judged to be waste.

There is no such cliché plot that is ridiculed in the flow of waste wood.

The plot of failing the whole test seems to have a kind of ......

“…… Realism. ”

Ye Linhan, a veteran reader, understands where the feeling is different,

The protagonist failed the test, and there was a very logical feeling,

This natural feeling begins to pave the way from the first chapter,

The protagonist lives in a mountain village, and there are seven people in the house, and it's good to have food and clothing at home.

The body bones are definitely not as good as others.

And the process of testing is not so mysterious.

It's not that the protagonist can't do anything, and that's the kind of thing that will be judged as a waste wood directly...... Well, after all, it's a martial arts school.

The protagonist also worked hard in the process, but even if the perseverance was good, the gap between the body and the bones itself was there.

So the reader finally looks at it, and everything is logical.

And when he looks at it, he seems to be able to easily accept the protagonist's failure.

This sense of realism ...... It seems to make people feel more involved.

"Mortals, mortals cultivating immortals......"

Looking at the name of the book again, Ye Linhan seemed to understand what he meant.

Gradually look down.

Although the protagonist didn't pass the test completely, he still became a registered disciple of the Seven Xuanmen with another peer named Zhang Tie.

The plot unfolds further down.

At this time,

The lengthy foreshadowing and depiction of details in the early stages began to do their job,

As a reader, Ye Linhan is more likely to be brought into the world of this novel and the protagonist.

Let him gradually immerse himself in it.

When the noodle shop owner brought all the noodles, he still lowered his head and looked at the novel.

Later, the plot gradually unfolded.

The protagonist and another named Zhang Tie, who were admitted to the Seven Xuanmen as registered disciples, were asked to leave by an obviously abnormal Mo doctor.

Then he gave the two of them a nameless mantra for people to practice

The protagonist who cultivated the nameless mantra and Zhang Tie, who had no effect, both passed the test of Doctor Mo and became Doctor Mo's disciple.

One continues to practice the nameless mantra, and later I learned that this is an exercise called Changchun Gong, and Zhang Tie was taught a practice of refining the body, and at the same time, the protagonist accidentally obtained a mysterious vial in the forest.

Then, the protagonist spent a few years of time that was not bad,

By the time Han Li was twelve years old, Zhang Tie had disappeared.

The foreshadowing and exposed clues,

has already made Ye Linhan, a reader, guess that there is something wrong with this Doctor Mo.

And the plot behind it is true.

When the protagonist is fourteen years old,

first got acquainted with a man named Li Feiyu and saved his life.

But after saving this person, he almost wanted to kill him, which changed the character of the protagonist to a certain extent.

In the book, it is said that the protagonist becomes unprofitable and unprofitable, and he loses the innocence of the original mountain village boy.

Then he accidentally discovered the effect of the mysterious vial's catalytic medicinal plant, and Changchun Gong also cultivated to the fourth layer.

Doctor Mo came back from outside and brought back a man called 'Qu Soul',

At the same time, Dr. Mo also bared his fangs.

Further on,

It's the first climactic plot.,

With the effect of the mysterious vial to promote medicinal plants, the protagonist is diligent and hardworking,

In the end, by chance, he killed Dr. Mo by luck, and also discovered that the 'Qu Soul' was the original Zhang Tie, but he was refined into a puppet.

The protagonist's first master, in a way that directly makes the protagonist understand the deceit and cruelty of the cultivation world.

Ye Linhan was a little excited when he saw the climax here.

The long foreshadowing in front gives the protagonist a strong sense of realism when he fights back.

This feeling of striving for success gives a strong sense of refreshment.

Unlike the kind of protagonist who is invincible from the beginning, that kind of coolness often comes purely from the protagonist's realm name, and it is also consuming other classic novels to create an impression set in the reader's mind.

The coolness of this "Mortal Cultivation of Immortals" is supported,

This kind of support starts from the first chapter of the mountain village kid.

From the boy in the mountain village, to the registered disciple of the Seven Xuanmen, and then to being accepted as a disciple by this ill-intentioned Doctor Mo,

Everything has been vented in this desperate counter-killing.

This refreshing feeling, finally a happy feeling, made Ye Linhan excited,

Looking at the phone screen, my face turned red.

It's like what I said in the comment area before,

He seems to have regained the feeling of reading Xianxia novels!

“…… Whew......"

After watching this climactic plot, the plot is a little smoother again.

However, with the support of the previous plot, Ye Linhan felt that he could also watch these excessive plots.

However, he didn't continue to look at it for a while.

Instead, retreat to the comment section and prepare to write a comment,

This kind of good novel, how can you not give a good review, how can you not recommend others to read it.

“…… Good! It's so well written! It is recommended that readers who come in from other points must take a look, as long as they get through the first few chapters, the back will get better and better! ”

Excited, he made mistakes several times in a row, and Ye Linhan first sent this comment in the comment area.

Immediately after,

I felt a little unpleasant again, calmed down again, and began to write a long review.

"I once wanted to be angry with horses and flowers, and fight the sword world!"

"I don't know when I have forgotten that I used to be a teenager and had the dream of a hero.

But reality is always mundane and boring, not so mysterious and novel.

Here, I would like to thank the author, thank you, for depicting a mysterious and magical world for me, and for most of us—the yearning ...... of 'mortals'."

Some emotions are not stretched in my heart, Ye Linhan read the novel, and then finished reading the excitement of the climactic plot of the novel, writing about the excitement and other emotions in his heart.

……

And in the noodle shop.

Ji Zhuo's mobile phone was placed on the edge of the dining table,

The screen is also lit up from time to time because of the message of the penguin chat,

But Ji Zhuo really didn't want to look at it.

In the group of book friends, the discussion of 'mortal cultivation of immortals' was stabbed in his chest at once.

Maybe this is murder.

Why is it that in the 'clumsy and extraordinary' book friend group,

Books to discuss 'epochal coincidences'!

Aren't you afraid of being "clumsy and extraordinary" and uncomfortable when you discuss other people's books in a book friend group?

Is this appropriate, is this reasonable?

Ji Zhuo held chopsticks in his hand, and the chopsticks picked up the noodles in the bowl, and ate the noodles without a pair.

I didn't dare to look at my phone again, for fear of seeing any bad news again.

Bored and boring, Ji Zhuo turned his head and looked at the noodle restaurant again,

In addition to him, a customer in the noodle restaurant, there is also a customer who has just come in.

It's the young man I met once in the noodle shop before.

“…… Is this again in fiction? Watch so fascinating? ”

Looking at the young man holding his mobile phone as if he was fascinated, his face was flushed, and he was excited from time to time.

Ji Zhuo raised his head and sighed.

I think at the beginning, he also liked to read novels, and he kept reading them all night long.

Right now...... Now he is more concerned about why his novels don't pounce.

Looking at this young man's appearance, Ji Zhuo was a little embarrassed,

Then he glanced at the young man's phone screen with a little curiosity,

I wanted to see what novels made this young man so excited.

So Ji Zhuo straightened his waist, raised his head, and glanced at it,

This reader read it quite carefully, and he didn't turn the page quickly, and it really made Ji Zhuo see some words on the screen clearly.

“…… Well? Got my eyes? ”

I saw some unusually familiar passages,

Ji Zhuo fell into deep thought, simply stood up directly, and walked behind the young man.

The young man was still immersed in the novel, and he didn't realize that there was another person behind him.

However, it also allowed Ji Zhuo to see clearly the novel he was looking at on the screen - "Mortal Cultivation of Immortals".

This made Ji Zhuo a little silent.

Is this reasonable?

Is this appropriate?

How many collections are there in this book?

I met someone reading a novel outside, and I was reading my own novel?

Isn't Mo playing with me?

Ji Zhuo felt that his heart was aching faintly again, maybe he should go and check his heart.

With an expressionless face, Ji Zhuo stood behind the young man,

Watching this young man look at it more and more excited, and then before finishing reading, he also clicked on the collection,

Then start writing reviews, write long reviews,

Finally, I saw that the young man began to open the tip, hesitating between a tip of 1,000 and 500 yuan,

Ji Zhuo was really a little nervous.

“…… Dude, your face is going to be cold. ”

"Thanks for the reminder."

The young man didn't even raise his head, and he was still ready to give a reward.

“…… Dude, is this novel good? ”

“…… Brother, let me tell you, this novel is not ordinarily good-looking, it is good-looking! ”

The young man raised his head suddenly, and began to talk endlessly to Ji Zhuo, who was standing behind him, and frantically asked Ji Zhuo how good this novel is.

He also poured out his excitement.

Listen to this young man's Amway,

Ji Zhuo's face was expressionless, and his heart was like ashes.

wrote a novel that became popular, and occasionally met readers who read their own novels,

It's obviously two such good things, but why is my psychology so uncomfortable?

Ji Zhuo's eyes straightened, and he felt that he had lost his light.

Scold...... Hehe......

Turning around, Ji Zhuo touched the mobile phone on his desk, gave the face money and left.

“…… Brother, I really recommend you to read it, this novel is different from other novels. It's well written. ”

Tell me what's good, I'll change it.

The young man in the noodle shop also tirelessly recommended to Ji Zhuo, who left,

Ji Zhuo wanted to answer like this. didn't dare, for fear of hearing words that would poke him even more in the heart.

The whole person lowered his head and waist, and he stood out and fled.

Ye Linhan watched Ji Zhuo come out of the noodle shop,

I feel like this person is a little inexplicable, but I don't care,

Now he's still focused on novels,

Turning his head, he was looking at his phone, hesitating how much to give to the book.

At this time, he received a WeChat message on his mobile phone.

The boss of his company asked him to go back to work overtime, saying that there were some problems with the project.

Looking at this news, Ye Linhan paused again,

The noodle shop was silent, only the light on the top fell on him,

He looked up,

I'm going to be twenty-five this year.

Is it really going to be like this for the rest of your life?

It seems that looking at this novel "Mortal Cultivation of Immortals" today, the growth of the protagonist stimulated Ye Linhan,

Ye Linhan came up in his mind again, and he used to think about it day and night, but there was still no result.

Do you want to do this for the rest of your life?

Then he saw the title of the long review that he had written himself.

"I used to want to be angry with horses and flowers, and fight with swords ...... the end of the world"

Some of the questions seem to have finally come to fruition.

"Hoo ......"

Ye Lin Han let out a long breath, and a smile appeared on his face,

The whole person is much more relaxed, and it seems that this is the function of a good work.

And then

Ye Linhan made a decision and rewarded "Mortal Immortal Cultivator" with a thousand.

……

Walking out of the noodle shop, the winter wind blows,

Ji Zhuo sobered up a little more, and then gritted his teeth and cheered up a little.

“…… No way! I can't give up! ”

"I can't fall in the moment before the dawn of victory!"

What reinvigorated Ji Zhuo was not that he had hope for "Mortal Immortal Cultivators" to hit the streets,

It's been three weeks since he sent the book, and there is less than a week left before the month.

300,000, 300,000!

Thinking about how to spend the money when he got it, Ji Zhuo gritted his teeth and cheered up.

Gritting his teeth, he quickly cut the phone to the author's backstage.

Quickly edited a single chapter and sent it out,

"Lower the instructions for the update."

"Due to the author's personal reasons, starting tomorrow, the book will be updated every day to two chapters and four thousand words per day."

Seeing the successful release of a single chapter, Ji Zhuo still gritted his teeth.

Slow down the rate of data growth, starting with lower updates. Drag, I'm going to drag it out for a month!

Then Ji Zhuo returned his phone to the writer's backstage.

Well?

Gan!

How can there be an extra league leader reward!

Who is it! What kind of grudge do I have with you, I deserve your 'support' of me like this!