"Clumsy and extraordinary: Big man, do you remember to keep my trumpet secret this time."

"Pen and Ink: ......

Bimo: Okay, I know. When will your new book be released? ”

and the editor again mentioned the matter of confidentiality,

Ji Zhuo nodded with satisfaction, as for the second half of the editor's sentence,

As long as I don't reply, I don't see it, and as long as I don't see it, I don't have to reply, hmm......

Putting down his mobile phone, Ji Zhuo stopped a taxi on the road and went back to his residence.

……

"Thunderbolt Crackling ......"

The sound of keyboard tapping sounded intermittently in the quiet study,

Again a sunset and sunrise.

Ji Zhuo spent another afternoon in the study.

"Hoo ......"

Wait for Ji Clumsy to stop the action of tapping on the keyboard, and end today's code words,

It's dusk again outside the house,

Only the afterglow of the setting sun shines through the gaps in the tall buildings in the distance, reflecting the shadows of the branches and leaves of the trees under the walls outside the windows.

Ji Zhuo let out a long sigh,

Looking at the new chapters on the codeword software that are filled with the content of the body of the words,

I'm still very satisfied, today's yard is quite smooth, the same as yesterday,

Three more chapters were written.

Plus yesterday's three chapters and six chapters, it seems that it is almost enough to be submitted and released.

thereupon

Skillfully copied and pasted, saved the six chapters of the manuscript into a docx document, and sent it to the editor's pen and ink.

"Clumsy and extraordinary: Submit "Night Tour to the Capital City". docx”

While waiting for the editor to reply to the message, Ji Zhuo also stretched his somewhat sour arms and back,

Do you want to find a master to pinch it later?

When Ji Zhuo was pondering about this, the editor replied to the message.

"The recipient has downloaded the file."

"Pen and Ink: Is the beginning of the new book written? The contract is just as it was before, right? ”

"Clumsy and extraordinary: yes. Big guy, take a look and give some advice. ”

Ji Zhuo and Fei Mo have previously signed a long-term contract for online serialized works.

The term is five years, and within five years, Ji Zhuo is to serialize the work on the Internet, and under the same conditions, Ji Zhuo needs to be serialized on the Internet in non-ink or the first reading,

Ji Zhuo enjoys 80% of the online revenue share of published works, as well as all copyrights.

Correspondingly, the conditions are too generous, so there are no guaranteed recommendation resources for other great or better contracts.

Of course, this contract only involves online serialized works.

On the other side,

Non-Ink Editorial Department,

Bimo looked at the message sent by Ji Zhuo, and was a little complicated,

Give some advice, then you have to listen too, when did you seem to have listened to my opinion,

However, in view of the peculiarity of Ji Zhuo's writing style and type, it is better to stick to his own ideas, and his opinion as an editor is not necessarily correct.

"Bimo: Well, I'll take a look at your new book first."

With this complicated mood, I replied with a message,

Then I opened the opening document of this new book sent by Ji Zhuo and read it.

"Night tour of the capital city?"

"Is this a suspense?"

Pen and ink nodded, this type seems to be okay,

Although the suspense is not very good, it is much better than the fairy tales serialized on the Internet before Ji Zhuo.

Then the pen and ink clicked open, and when he saw the introduction, he felt that Ji Zhuo gave him a stick.

"Genre: Mythology, Classical Mythology."

"Introduction: Take Huangquan Road, cross the ...... of Nai He Lechuan"

It's not because of the introduction, but this introduction is still a little interesting.

It's the one on top of this profile.,Ji Zhuo's contribution unique logo.,Type description,

makes his mood more complicated, that is, he wants to say something but can't say it,

It feels uncomfortable in my chest, and it's really hard to put into words.

"Hoo ......"

"It's okay, the fairy tales are all written, and there is nothing that can't be written."

"The mythological genre is always closer to the attributes of the Internet than fairy tales, isn't there a classification of classical mythology in the Xianxia classification."

Pen and ink sighed,

With a history of discipline, this subject and genre don't seem so difficult to accept.

Although the classical mythology of Ji Zhuo is certainly not the same thing as the classification of the site.

With this mood, the pen and ink slide down, and it looks like the text.

“…… When I fell asleep, there was a violent storm outside the temple, and the wind was ...... with raindrops."

I took a deep breath, calmed down, and looked at the text carefully.

Looking at the text, the mood of pen and ink gradually calmed down,

The more you look at it, the slower it becomes, and the more you immerse yourself in it.

The first feeling when I started to look at the pen and ink was,

This author's writing seems to have grown again,

The description and processing of some details are really good.

Every book is like this, and it's scary to see obvious improvements.

Looking at it now, I think the writing is very good at a glance.

But then I looked down, and the pen and ink lost so many thoughts.

The world and stories described in the book attract attention and gradually become completely immersed in it.

The thoughts extended with the author's brushstrokes, and the fingers that swept the text of the chapter unconsciously fluctuated again and again.

That's all I have to say about the first chapter,

And then the second chapter,

The pen and ink can be seen more finely,

watched the protagonist Zhang Cheng follow the land lord down to the first stop of the Netherworld, Jinji Mountain, Vicious Dog Ridge.

The author's description of the vicious dog ridge vicious dog and the golden rooster is really in place, and it seems that people can feel the feeling of wistfulness and blood through the text.

In the heart-rending screams and wails of the souls on the Jinji Ridge and the Vicious Dog Ridge, the protagonist followed the land lord through the two mountains.

Then the plot goes to the third chapter,

The protagonist arrives at Wangxiangtai.

On the platform of looking at the hometown, the soul stopped, the soul wept, looked back at the homeland of the yang world, and was reluctant to leave for a long time.

This is going forward, that is, completely separating yin and yang, all dust to dust, and earth to earth.

Ren'eryang is so prosperous, it is difficult to turn back here.

Here, the protagonist Zhang Cheng saw a lot of souls who were unwilling to leave.

Some are young, some are old, some are sick and some are dead, and some are dying in vain.

Some wore brocade clothes, and some wore old clothes.

There are people wearing longevity clothes in front of the vicious dog golden rooster bite and scratch,

There are also those who are dressed in ordinary clothes, but they are still intact here.

Most of the ghost pawns standing on the edge of the Wangxiang platform did not urge much, allowing the dead souls on the stage to cry and shout at the Yang Shi who looked back, and their liver and intestines were broken.

It's just that it's been too long, so I stepped forward to urge and continue on the road.

On the Wangxiang platform, Zhang Cheng saw a boy who was soaked in water and soaked.

The boy lay on the ground, facing the outside of the lookout platform, looking back at the yang world, crying and shouting for his parents, very sad.

Every time he raised his hand and grabbed it in front of him, under Zhang Cheng's eyes, the boy was just empty in front of him.

This scene makes people feel compassion,

The author also has a number of sentences to describe.

The land lord next to him also said to Zhang Cheng,

"On this Huangquan Road, there are many people who die of illness, vain, evil, and crime, but these dolls who die early are the most uncomfortable."

"When you are young, most of you don't have too many sins, and your life has just begun, and then there should be joys and sorrows, joys and sorrows...... I don't know which family it is. ”

These words silenced Zhang Cheng.

This is the end of the third chapter.

……

The pen and ink have been immersed in the plot of this book,

Then look down and look carefully, for fear of missing the details.

Chapter 4,

The plot continues to unfold.

Zhang Cheng didn't know if he felt pity for the boy who was obviously drowned,

Walked behind the boy,

The land lord helped Zhang Cheng see the yang world that the boy was looking back at,

It turned out that the scene of the boy's hometown was a meandering river.

On the banks of the river, there are couples.

It was night, and the couple were guarding the lamp and were along the riverbank, calling a name.

"Nannan, come back, come back."

"Nannan, come back...... Mom and Dad are here to take you home, Nannan ......"

The woman in the couple cried out, her liver and intestines were broken, and from time to time she would be out of breath, and she would fall on the riverbank.

"Nannan, come back...... Mommy is here to take you home......"

"Nannan, don't be afraid, follow your mother's light, your mother will take you home......"

"Woo woo woo ......"

The cry was the boy on the lookout platform, and the boy was babbling and crying,

Reaching out and clutching the vision in front of him,

It's just that the yin and yang are separated, and they naturally catch a void.

“…… This doll, bewitched by someone, playing in the water by the river, accidentally slipped into the bottom of the river, and was dragged down by the water ghost at the bottom of the river. ”

"There was a person by the river at that time, the one who bewitched the doll, but he was also afraid, so he also stood and watched the doll drown, without helping, and he didn't call for fear of taking responsibility."

The land lord seemed to know the situation and said to Zhang Cheng.

When the drowned boy heard the words of the land lord, he turned his head and threw himself on the ground and begged the land lord to go back.

The land lord just sighed again and again when he heard it,

To the drowned boy,

"Yin and yang have been separated, don't let your parents worry, go on the road early, maybe you can still give birth to this family in the next life."

When the boy heard this, he got up and followed the ghost on his way.

The land lord also took Zhang Cheng and walked forward,

The fourth chapter ends in a conversation between the land lord and Zhang Cheng,

"Lord Land, what about the water ghost who dragged the male doll into the water?"

"Up front."

"What about the man who tricked the boy into the water?"

"It's in the back."

And then chapter five,

Chapter 6,

The plot continues to progress,

Zhang Cheng followed the land lord to another stop on Huangquan Road,

Outside the city of Xudu, the city of vain death,

In the vain city, there are many dead souls stopping,

Those who died unjustly, those who died in vain, stayed here for a long time and did not want to leave,

The dead soul naturally doesn't eat or drink, but it's just muddy, waiting for the grievances to be settled,

Waiting for the resentment of vain death to subside.

In the city of death in vain,

Zhang Cheng saw many dead souls again,

Some have mutilated limbs, and some have iron faces.

Some died by natural disasters, and some died by disasters.

There are those who fall to their deaths by accident, and there are those who are scared to death.

Zhang became puzzled by the souls who stayed and stayed in this vain city,

Just ask the Lord of the Land,

"Lord of the land, doesn't the underworld allow people who die in vain to be reincarnated?"

The land lord replied to Zhang Cheng,

"The underworld embraces the six realms of sentient beings, how can it not tolerate poor people who die in vain."

"It's not that the underworld doesn't let them be reincarnated, it's these people who died in vain, and they don't want to leave."

"Here, there are still many souls who have been reincarnated, but they have left some resentments in the city of vain death, and these resentments are gathered together and waiting for a result."

"Like ...... here"

As he spoke, Lord Di pointed to Zhang Cheng a figure in the dead city,

The figure had wounds on his head, his eyes gouged out, his lips cut off, his hands cut off, and his body covered with scars.

It's just a muddy nightmare wandering in the city of vain.

"This is the resentment of a wicked person in the yang world who killed and mutilated several people, and several people have already decided that they will go to reincarnation in this life, leaving only resentment waiting here."

"Only when the grievances are reversed, karma is retribution, and the soul of the wicked man comes here, and the pain of this body will be reflected on the soul of the wicked man before it will be dissipated."

"Like here, the guest dies in a foreign land, and I am unwilling, I am afraid that I will have to wait until the corpse is buried in the ground and return to my hometown before I gnaw and reincarnate."

"And here, I was angry to death by my own heirs, but I was still unwilling to rest assured, and I was willing to be a wandering ghost in the city in vain, wandering in a daze, and I didn't want to leave."

The land lord pointed to a few dead souls next to him and said to Zhang Cheng,

Zhang Cheng nodded,

But he was also in the city of vain death, and when he saw a drowned ghost, he also wandered in the city of vain death,

"Lord of the land, those who died unjustly for no reason are already pitiful, but I heard that those who drown need to find a substitute ghost to escape the calamity and come to reincarnate."

"The one who was caught to die in place of death is pitiful, and he still needs to be caught and replaced by the dead ghost, this continuous reincarnation, when will it end?"

"That person is the water ghost you saw catch the boy for his death earlier, when he first went into the water, he was entangled in the water and grass at the bottom of the river, and there was no one around to rescue him, and he struggled repeatedly when he died, and he was very happy,"

"After death, I feel resentment, jealousy of the living, and linger at the bottom of the river, so that others can also taste the pain of life and death. arrested three people to die before walking on Huangquan Road. ”

The land lord explained for Zhang Cheng,

"It's not that water ghosts need people to die in order to be reincarnated, but that water ghosts die painfully, often have resentment, and want to protect the living."

"It's not that the water ghost can't leave the waters of the river to come to the underworld to be reincarnated, it's really because of resentment, and he refuses to leave."

Zhang Cheng understood, and he understood.

Turning his head again, Zhang Cheng saw a woman next to him wearing a plain manuscript with an iron face, wandering around the city in vain with pus-like things in her mouth.

“…… If you are curious, you can go and ask. ”

Lord Land smiled.

Zhang Chengcheng followed the land lord over,

When they came nearer, they heard a woman with pus in her mouth spitting out a muffled ballad.

“…… Even ...... You and I agreed to ...... for a hundred years"

"If anyone dies at the age of ninety-seven, why should he wait three years on ......the bridge?"

And then......

This is the end of the plot at the beginning of the six chapters.

Seeing that the pen and ink that were originally immersed in this story were forced to pull out,

This feeling is like falling asleep with a full sleep, and then being struck by a gong in the ear,

I just ate two bites of delicious food, and I was about to take a big bite of it, but it turned out that it was gone.

This uncomfortable heart has a distorted face!

This damn broken chapter dog!

The pen and ink were a little nervous, and I couldn't help but curse psychologically.

But I still exhaled twice,

Calm down,

Try to put the editor's point of view at the beginning of the book, not from the reader's point of view.

Honestly,

These six chapters already contain a lot of content,

changed the way it was written, and it is estimated that it is still in Jinjiling after six chapters.

But...... This does not contradict the broken dog at all!

Rubbing his brows, he felt panicked in his heart.

It's just looking good, and it's gone.

He doubted that the author had done it on purpose.

"Hoo ......"

Pen and ink exhaled a few more long breaths, trying to calm down the mood again,

Looking at the beginning and the end,

Seriously began to think about what this film was like at the beginning,

The first feeling is quite in line with his taste,

The second is that this myth is really worthy of his classification,

The writing style is obviously closer to publishing, and the style is not as refreshing as the Internet.

It's a very calm narrative style, like listening to stories told by adults when I was a child.

It's funny, though.

But is this style suitable for the web?

That's the question,

But this problem is not a problem for Ji Zhuo,

It seems that Ji Zhuo's book has fit the style of the Internet,

Just look at it as a physical book, this book is still very good,

If only it could be updated sooner later.

Make a judgment,

Pen and ink nodded,

Then he sent a message back to Ji Zhuo.

"Pen and ink: the style fits the genre quite well."

When these words came out, I thought it was really nice to say it.

"Bimo: If you think it's okay, just say it.

Bimo: Your market judgment is sharper than mine, and I won't say much about your own characteristics. ”

This way

Ji Zhuo looked at the message sent by pen and ink, and felt a little depressed,

What do you mean that my market judgment is more keen, how do I feel that I am scolding?

It also has its own characteristics...... Ji Zhuo felt even more depressed,

This evaluation is not good for the teacher.

"Clumsy and extraordinary: Okay, thank you, big guy.

Clumsy and extraordinary: That big guy I built a trumpet and sent a book. ”

Ji Zhuo replied quickly, and ended the chat with Bimo,

When you open a new book, let's listen to less 'frustrating words'.