Chapter 201: Evaluation

"My favorite is the arrogant chapter in 'The Seven Sins', and the main character of the chapter is called Noveiler. I also found a word with a similar sound, as I had done in the author's previous chapters. 'Humble', 'inconspicuous'.

The story of such a name is placed in the arrogant chapter, somewhat ironic, but also very justified, as the lowest level, like dust, the man who will not deliberately give him a bullet even if two gangsters open fire on the street, Novele is really humble to the dust...... also suffered the most 'arrogance'. After reading the whole story, I felt unusually depressed and uncomfortable, and I felt an inexplicable anger, and I didn't know if it was Novele or myself in the book. ”

"I want to see Novile rebel angrily, scolding the homeless man who occupies his dwelling, driving him out, saying no to his oppressors...... But at the same time, I know that this is too much for a man like Novelle.

He's just a humble character, he can only think about arrogance in his heart, he doesn't have the ability to resist, he doesn't have the courage to resist, he has always been so ......"

"It's not just the story of this chapter, but when I look at the whole book, I don't see the seven original sins that the author wrote on the title of each chapter."

"Rather, war, hunger, poverty, disease, class...... Hal in Gluttony ends up dying of starvation, or death from the dirt, and a food seller dies because of poverty and war. ”

"In the Lust chapter, why did Senash die like this in the end, is it because she didn't redeem herself? No, she simply didn't have the ability to get out of her old living environment, and at the same time, there was no one else to help her.

Her mother was a prostitute, she grew up in a prostitute den, can you expect her to love to learn, hate the skin trade, and end up on a different path? She seems to have a choice, but she never has a choice, but can she be blamed for that? Who would think that when he saw the director of the private welfare home pressing on the prostitute and talking about his ambition to make the business bigger. ”

“…… Looking back at the introduction of the whole book, it is no wonder that it feels so ironic when I read it, it turns out that the reason why the devil can tempt so many people is that he knows that some people need people. ”

"Then if the protagonist in this story is tempted by the demon again, can it be the fault of these people, do they have another choice?"

“…… As most readers do, this is a good book, and one that should not be missed this year. If you haven't read it yet, I recommend taking some time to read it. But it's also a depressing book......"

This is a post on the Internet,

A long review of "The Seven Sins".

It was Xi Yuan who once again finished reading the arrogant chapter,

It feels like there's a lot to say, or a post with a comment,

But it's not all his words, his roommate in Great Britain finished reading the arrogant chapter,

was still uncomfortable, seeing Xi Yuan's relevant comments, he also asked Xi Yuan to help him add a few words of his words.

……

And when Ji Zhuo saw this comment, he was finishing a meal with Yun Qingmu,

When you come back from outside, you can enjoy the shade under the gazebo of the community.

Looking at this long comment, Ji Zhuo paused, and then a smile appeared on his face,

Simply because the reader likes the work.

"Big brother, what does this string of English mean?"

The little chubby fan is placed on his lap, holding a bowl of ice cream in one hand and a spoon in the other.

Spoonful by spoon, he glanced at Ji Zhuo's mobile phone screen by the way, and asked with some curiosity,

"It's weirdly exciting."

"How can you see the excitement?"

"There's a bunch of exclamation points, and there's an exclamation point on the next line, aren't you excited?"

Little Chubby Dun said casually.

When Ji Zhuo heard this, he smiled,

Then he replied,

"It's an evaluation of a book, maybe I have some thoughts after reading it."

"Evaluation? I thought it was a reminder. Like the bottom of the comment area of the dog author, most of the comments that are so excited are urging. ”

“……”

Chubby Dun ate another spoonful of ice cream and said casually.

Ji Zhuo fell silent, raised his head again, and looked at Xiao Chubby Dun.

The little chubby dun is a little hairy for Ji Zhuo,

tentatively handed over the ice cream in his hand a little,

"Eat...... Take a bite? ”

“……”

"Eat it yourself."

"Oh."

It's easy to say anything if you don't eat his ice cream, and the little chubby dun continues to eat by himself.

Ji Zhuo turned his head and looked at the comment post on the screen of his mobile phone again.

After the comment is sent,

Soon there were some of the same comments on "The Seven Sins",

Most of them agree with the views of this post, and explain their own views by the way.

“…… I listened to a friend's suggestion, bought the book, didn't sleep all night after reading it, and got up the next day and beat him up. It's a good book, but it's so depressing that I now have it at the top of the shelf. ”

“…… Purchased, not yet available. Some look forward to the full content. ”

glanced at it, and Ji Zhuo gave a thumbs up to the first post,

He got up from the bench and put away his phone.

"Big brother, are you leaving?"

"Gone."

Ji Zhuo waved his hand and went back to his residence.

……

… Congratulations to the host for achieving the goal of the main career task in this issue, creating a work with a physical sales volume of no less than 150,000 (within three months of release), and the number of words in the finished book is not less than 200,000. ”

"Congratulations to the host for getting: Story +1, Inspiration +1, Freedom Attribute +8"

"Congratulations to the host for creating a work, and the main class experience is +1"

Lying on the sofa, Ji Zhuo looked at the reminder on the system interface.

Sure enough, as he expected, "Seven Sins" achieved the mission goal of the main profession in this issue.

And a little faster than he expected, it seems that today "Seven Sins" sold at least tens of thousands of copies.

At this time, looking at the reminder of the settlement of the current mission goal, Ji Zhuo was in a very calm mood.

After all, did you expect it?

But Ji Zhuo was thinking about something else.

I wrote another book at the same time, "Hour Leap to Death" is almost finished, can I also gain a little experience in the main profession after finishing this book?

If you can get it, you will be able to upgrade your main class level again.

After thinking about it, Ji Zhuo gave up for the time being, and could only look at it when the time came.

Looking at the system panel again, Ji Zhuo easily divided the few free attributes of this reward.

The stats of the main class in the system panel become like this.

"Host: Ji Zhuo.

Main occupation: Writer.

Primary Class Level: Level 3 (4/5)

Subclass: Screenwriter (Level 2) (0/2)

Subclass: Not yet available.

Class Attributes:

Writing: 16

Plot: 17

Speed: 18

Inspiration: 17

Script: 15

The current task goal of the main profession: According to the level of the main profession and previous works, the requirements are: to create a physical sales volume of not less than (20W-30W) or online orders of not less than (5W-10W), and the number of words in the completed book is not less than 200,000.

(The specific requirements are determined according to the theme and type of the new book in the current issue)

Rewards: Writing +1, Speed +1, Free Attribute +8.

Current encouragement: 6 million/month.

Sub-occupation: screenwriter's current goal: ......"

Ji Zhuo added all four free attributes to the script attributes, and the remaining four free attributes were divided into one point each.

After adding it, Ji Zhuo naturally didn't feel anything, and the attributes of the writing plot strengthened Ji Zhuo's sensitivity and ability to use the rhythm of the text and plot.

He didn't pour any knowledge into his head.

Looking at the current attribute panel, Ji Zhuo is still quite satisfied.

It can be said that the attributes of the script have caught up and made up for the shortcomings.

But conversely, it can also be said that script attributes have slowed down the overall growth of attributes.

Wouldn't it be nice if you were ready to pounce then?

Then there is the main career task goal of the current period, and the requirements have increased a lot again,

may also be out of practical considerations, after all, the mission goal is too low, and there is really no pressure on Ji Zhuo now.

In this regard, Ji Zhuo is also quite satisfied.

Whether it's for the sake of wool picking, or for the sake of earning manuscript fees,

He can't wait for the system to be able to reach the sky, and it's best to set a goal that he can't reach.

If you can't reach the best in that way, you can take the system wool directly, and if you do, you will also earn the manuscript fee.

It's a pity, the system target increase is okay, but it's still not very powerful.

Dog system, can you be a little more atmospheric,

It's a bit of a pattern!

With sales of two or three hundred thousand in three months, who do you look down on!

Ji Zhuo may be a little floating.

And the system is naturally undisciplined,

The system panel is maintained as usual.

muttered for a while, Ji Zhuo felt the meaning,

As soon as the system panel is turned off, it will be paralyzed on the sofa again.

Just looked out the living room window at the hazy night, lazy.

Blowing the wisps of evening breeze into the house, looking at the lights of people near and far outside the window,

The surroundings were quiet and enjoyable.

Obviously, it would be more comfortable to lie back on the bed, but Ji Zhuo really didn't want to move at this time.

Looking out the window at the wind,

Ji Zhuo thought about something again.

Supposedly, it's time for him to start thinking about his next book.

After all, although "The Hour Hand Leaps to Death" has not yet been completed, he has already finished writing it.

But he still wanted to wait and see.

After waiting for the completion of "Hour Leap to Death",

Will the system give a little experience to increase the level of his main class,

If the main class level is increased, then the wool and goals of the system will definitely be different.

Now it's six million a month, and it's one level higher...... There's room for imagination.

So Ji Zhuo prepared to wait and see.

It's not that he's lazy, and he's going to rest for two days after finishing his book.

He's industrious.

Otherwise, if you read a few of them, you can finish writing two works in less than three months, and you're still done!

Ji Zhuo thought about it and continued to collapse on the sofa.

Until the night was dark, the wind blowing in outside was a little cool.

Ji Zhuo yawned again, got up and walked to the bedroom.

……

"Canyon Grass: Did you read the update of the dog author today? I feel like I'm almost done with this book.

Once in the sea: I didn't see it.

Canyon Grass: ???

Canyon Grass: Can you resist not looking, do you have any secrets, teach me, teach me!

Zeng Canghai: It's because the dog author's book is almost finished, that I don't read it. Think about the history of the dog author, and the new book will be sent for at least half a month after the old book is finished.

Zeng Canghai: Now that I've finished reading it, I have to keep what I watched in the past half a month, and I'll watch it when the time comes.

Canyon Grass: ...... Big guy, I think of an idiom about monkeys, four at sun, three, okay! Three days and four days, no......

Canyon Grass: Think about it, you can read two more chapters then, and now you have to read two fewer chapters a day...... This is something you don't see now, it's clear that there are too few dog authors, and new books are being released too slowly!

Once upon a time: Hmm...... Kind of makes sense......

Once in the sea: the author of the dog! You're playing monkey here! Hurry up and update! Get up!

Eight Immortals Crossing the Sea: ......

300,000 per second: ......"

In the readership, a group of sand sculpture readers are still chatting.

In the author group on the other side, it is still Versailles and the Cheche Party who are rereading there, and occasionally there are bigwigs haunting, and then the rainbow fart of rereading.

"The New Book Has Opened: Imitating the Dog Author...... No, the clumsy and extraordinary boss, wrote a horror, hey, it's on the shelves today, the first order is not good, and it feels like it's going to pounce.

Half-pounced: How much?

The new book has been opened: just three thousand, what do you say?

Half-pounced: ......

In writing:......

Octopus: It is recommended to cut it.

Salted fish turnover: It is recommended to cut +1

Half-pounced: It is recommended to cut the ...... But recently, the dog author has written a horror theme, which is quite popular.

The new book has been opened: This is right, which theme written by the dog boss is not popular, two changes a day, hundreds of thousands of readers' eyes are as red as red, looking for similar themes all over the world...... I'm one of them.

Octopus: The dog author is almost done with this book, and I don't know what the new book is. I really want to follow suit!

Salted fish turned over: I advise careful consideration, I followed the trend to write hard sci-fi last time, and I almost nibbled on steamed buns for two months...... The choice of material by dog authors can sometimes be really eye-catching...... A deep experience as a loyal reader of a dog author.

Half-pounced: Hey, the crowd is close to the dog author's lackeys, I'm ashamed of you! ”

"Half pounced, was banned by the administrator for a minute."

"Half-pounced: I'm kidding, big guy, kidding.

Octopus: You're not?

Half-pounced: Yes...... The dog author is too slow to update his mother.,It's made me wait for the update to be unintentional to code words! ”

And at this time...... Ji Zhuo slept soundly.

……

"Everyone is working hard and persevering."

"The "Shepherd Boy Seeking Immortals" anime that we agreed with the audience will start in a month and a half."

"During this period, we will at least produce the first few episodes of "Shepherd Boy Seeking Immortals"."

The person in charge of the animation production team of Pioneer Film and Television Media poured a cup of coffee for the animation production team who were still working overtime.

As he spoke, he yawned again.

The team members of the animation department all have some heavy dark circles on their eyes.

Although even if they work overtime, they still have enough sleep time, but they can't stand the time of sleeping and eating every day, and they all focus on the animation production of "Shepherd Boy Seeking Immortals".

But the people in the animation production team have no complaints,

In addition to the benefits and overtime wages of Pioneer Film and Television and the dividends after the animation is put on the shelves, what is more important is that most of these big cows dug from everywhere are loyal readers of dog authors at this time.

Even now, he still maintains an exhilarating and exhilarating passion.

It almost screamed.

The anime of "Mortal Immortals" is the first anime of this pioneering film and television animation production team,

It is a good start, and this "Shepherd Boy Seeking Immortals" is the most important work to consolidate the influence of the animation production team of Pioneer Film and Television Media.

It is also the most important one that bundles the animation production of Pioneer Film and Television with the label of 'Best Adaptation and Production Team of Dog Authors'.

This group of people in the animation production team all hope that the copyright of other works of the dog author will be relicensed to other film and television companies in the future.

can hear a crowd of viewers and readers say,

"The adaptation of the work of the dog author has to look at the pioneer film and television media".

This is also an important step for Pioneer Film and Television Media to enter the field of animation production.

“…… Alright, it's not too late today, let's stop here, everyone rests. ”

"Wait, I've got something to finish here."

"Just a few strokes, and you're done."

The head of the animation team is busy with the work at hand,

After looking at the sky and time outside, he got up and said hello.

Then the group went back to the house and rested.

Pioneer Film and Television Media arranged a place for the people working overtime in the animation production team nearby, a small suite for one person.

However, the production staff of the animation team were not happy to leave.

"Gone, gone."

"Director, what are you urging, urging you, I'll get these frames done right away."

"That's it, what's the director's urging, I'll do it again here soon...... Director, if you are free, contact the dubbing side, it's the third episode......"

"Hey......"

The person in charge sighed, this is the point at this time, where to go to contact.

"Director, I've cut the PV here, do you want to take a look."

"PV is okay? Okay, I'm going to come over and have a look......"

The person in charge who had just sighed followed closely and walked over.