"Huh? And then what? ”

"! Dog author, what about the plot behind! ”

Looking at the content of today's update, Ye Linhan was immersed in it, and just subconsciously turned the pages of the book,

Then flick your finger down again...... jumped to the comment area,

That's all for the update.

Ye Linhan's face was distorted, and the mask of pain,

was still immersed in the story, but was forcibly withdrawn,

At this time, I just want to know the address of the dog author, and give the dog author a little kind greeting.

"Hoo ......"

Exhaled and calmed down the mood of wanting to arrest the dog author and put it in the small black room, and if he didn't update the ten chapters, he wouldn't give him food, and he had to whip a few whips a few times a day for two chapters.

After reading the updated content today and some of the scenes in the content I watched before, it came to mind again.

At first, the old man's loneliness and even helplessness, and then the grievances that Honghong showed when she met the old man Yan Xingguo for the first time.

and then to the days that Yan Xingguo and Honghong experienced, as well as the content of today's update......

Thinking about it, Ye Linhan felt an inexplicable twitch in his heart,

I thought that the story was so warm and healing before, how uncomfortable it was now.

I'm so uncomfortable, Made, the dog author!

Thinking back to the plot of today's update,

From Yan Xingguo's inquiry about Honghong in the text,

When Yan Xingguo seemed to understand Honghong's identity, readers basically understood Honghong's identity.

It's just that it's more uncomfortable for the reader.

Yan Xingguo felt sorry for Honghong, Honghong cared more about Yan Xingguo,

And then the reader is both distressed.

But

Today's updates seem to be all about Honghong's identity,

Then can his video also be posted?

Made, the author of the dog!

Scolding the dog author again,

Ye Linhan quickly made the video he had made before - "Red Red and Star Dream." ", delivered to the broken station.

Watching the video enter the review stage,

Ye Linhan returned to Feimo and glanced at the comments in the comment area,

Look for readers who share his hatred.

“…… Made, I'm so angry, I see that this first chapter of the story of the Star Dream is about to be written, and you are here to break the dog author? ”

"Woooooooooo......oo It's okay to break it here, I'm already crying! Friends are right, this is just going to rain knives, I can't stand it, I can't stand this grievance, woo woo ......"

"Star Dream, Star Dream...... Suddenly I found that the title of the book and the name of this chapter are really fucking good, dog author, how do you do it, one name is used in the title of the book and the title of the chapter, and two consciousnesses are used. ”

"When I saw Yan Xingguo asking Honghong, 'Is it cold?', my heart also twitched, and I didn't dare to think deeply, and when I saw Yan Xingguo dreaming of seeing a story in the yellow sand, I didn't dare to think deeply...... I'm afraid to cry, but my eyes are still red. ”

"I never cried when I read the story of love and love, and I burst into tears when I read this kind of story, perhaps, probably, I also love this land deeply."

Ye Linhan found the same enemy and scolded the dog author out of chapter,

I've also seen other comments that I also felt uncomfortable after reading the latest chapter,

"Hey......"

Looking at it, Ye Linhan couldn't stop sighing,

Although the dog author is out of chapter, the dog, but the story of this chapter is really well written.

Originally

Such a 'star' can also be a star, and it is really a dream of stars.

……

“…… Uncle Yu, what's wrong? ”

"It's fine."

Yucheng, in the house.

After listening to today's update of the dog author, the old man sat on the stool and was silent for a long time,

Until the nurse next to him couldn't help but care about the old man.

The old man shook his head first, and then added,

"It's a really good story, but it's so real. That's so well written. ”

The story of the star dream is like a fairy tale, this fairy tale is more for children to see,

Instead, it's for adults to hear.

“…… It's very well written, and I feel like I'm going to be unable to sleep tonight. ”

The nurse also said,

"I feel like my heart is clogged."

The old man nodded, and under the author's ingenious language description,

The scenes that happened in the book seem to be engraved in the reader's mind,

Let the reader also follow the emotional ups and downs in the book, and think deeper, it will be even more uncomfortable.

……

“…… Daddy, is Honghong a star? ”

Capital, New District.

After the release of the dog author's new book, men naturally tell their daughters the story of the dog author's new book.

However, the plot he told his daughter was earlier than the dog author's update, and he deliberately left one or two chapters not to tell.

I'm afraid that one day he talks too much, and the dog author updates less, and then one day he doesn't have to talk about his daughter's grievances,

As soon as today's story was finished, the girl raised her head again, looked at her father, and asked curiously.

"Why do you ask?"

"Because it says in the synopsis that when people need it, the stars come back. Is Honghong a star? ”

Hearing his daughter's words, the men were stunned.

Really......

"Well, probably. Listen to the rest of the story. ”

"Then when will I hear the rest of the story?"

"Tomorrow. Now that today's story is over, is it time for my precious girl to go to bed? ”

"Oh."

The girl nodded obediently, jumped off the couch, stood up, and ran back into the bedroom.

coaxed his daughter to sleep.

The man returned to the sofa, followed his wife, and looked at the content updated by the dog author today,

He hasn't seen it yet......

It's just that as I gradually immersed myself in the story in the book, I gradually followed other readers, and it became more and more uncomfortable.

Especially when I thought of his daughter's question just now,

Is Honghong a star?

……

"Canyon Grass: I'll say it twice, I love dog authors, I love dog authors.

Canyon Grass: But I still have to say, Nima Broken Tone Dog! Dog author, are you worthy of us, rnm return the money!

Eight Immortals Across the Sea: You've been exposed from the moment you called the dog author.

Trumpet: You say, is it possible that the dog author is not maliciously out of context, but just happened to write there?

Eight Immortals Across the Sea: Impossible, Impossible! Dog author stuff, you don't understand! The dog is very ......

Small: ......"

In the comment area of "Star Dream", Ji Zhuo did not admit that he was maliciously out of context.

He just happened to write there, exactly 4,000 words and two chapters.

He is not a card system standard or lazy, he is simply too busy, and there is a Chinese version of the "Imperial Epic" to write.

"Eight Immortals Crossing the Sea: Ahhhh The author is great, you come out! Update. Who dares to rest like this, who dares to rest like this!

Eight Immortals Crossing the Sea: With such a break, the donkeys of the production team will be unloaded and killed!

Canyon Grass: The dog author may be in the group, but he will definitely not come out.

Trumpet: Mm-hmm, I think so too. ”

replied to a message, and Ji Zhuo slipped away,

As for urging, as long as he doesn't look at it, he doesn't see it, and no one urges him.

But before he could turn off the penguin chat,

Someone else sent a message.

"Pioneer Film and Television Editor: Good evening Mr. Ji, take the liberty to disturb.

Clumsy and extraordinary: You're welcome, what's the matter? ”

Ji Zhuo looked at the contact person of this pioneer film and television, and felt that there was nothing good.

"Editor: It's not a big deal...... is that many viewers on the Internet are urging the second season of the mortal immortal anime.

Editor: The animation department has recently made the first season of "Shepherd Boy Seeking Immortals" almost as far as the anime, and there is also time to do the second season of the anime of mortal immortals, which is the script......

Editor: Look at ......"

Ji Zhuo looked at the news and fell silent.

It is said that after the completion of this screenwriting cycle task, he does need a script to write to carry out the current task goal of the screenwriting career.

But now...... Don't anyone in the Pioneer Film and Animation Department need to take a break?