Chapter Eighty-Three: Changes
In the following time, "Chop! The comic "Crimson Pupil" is also being serialized at a rapid pace.
On April 21, "Chop! The second issue of "Crimson Pupil" was serialized.
On April 28, "Chop! The third issue of "Crimson Pupils" was serialized.
On May 5, "Chop! The fourth issue of "Crimson Pupils" was serialized.
On May 12, "Chop! The fifth issue of "Crimson Pupils" was serialized.
Together, it's quite stable from the perspective of the plot and the painting work, which is better than the previous "Demon Slayer Blade", and has been well received by many readers.
Of course, Lin Yi has also made a lot of changes in this work.
For example, "Chop! When "Crimson Pupil" was serialized, there were actually some bugs in some places.
What made Lin most difficult to see was what was the purpose of the night attack on this organization.
Judging from the laying of the plot, the night attack was sent by the rebels to the imperial capital to do things.
But judging from the plot in this work, compared to an organization under the rebels, Lin Yi felt that it was like a spontaneously organized organization for the heavens.
After all, in the original work, the main job of the night raid was to accept the commission of some ordinary people to take out corrupt officials and evil nobles.
However......
Did these actions do the rebels any good? Did you add something to the empire, killing these people and making a certain institution of the empire not work?
In Lin Yi's opinion, there is none.
After doing so much assassination work, Lin Yi didn't see if they were working for the rebels or just fighting for grievances.
So Lin Yi changed some of the reasons for the work.
For example, in the second episode of the story, Tazmi joined the Night Raid organization and received a commission from the rebels, that is, to assassinate Oka of the Imperial Capital Garrison and Gamaru of the oil store, although this Oka character is still the same as the original work, using his own power to enrich himself, and replace his crimes with innocent people.
It seems to be usually incompetent, but in fact he is the second-in-command of the Imperial Intelligence Agency, and killing him can disrupt the Empire's intelligence on the frontline battlefield to a certain extent.
After taking Okka's head in the second phase, Night Raid transported Okka's head overnight to the rebel base, where there is an imperial tool that can search the memories of the enemy's mind.
It is precisely because of the killing of Oka in the second phase that the memories found out led to the plot of the third issue, that is, the assassination of Okaro, a distant relative of Minister Ernest.
According to Okka's memory, this person's identity is not simple, in order to protect him, the minister specially hired guards from the Huangquan Temple to guard Okaro, because although this Okaro is said to be a distant relative, he is actually the minister's younger brother.
Not only did he kidnap women and torture them to death at the behest of the minister, but he was also the one who helped the minister manage his wealth behind the scenes.
As long as you kill this Okaru, you can get a large amount of ledger from the other party's hands, not only the location of the minister's wealth, but also other merchants and courtiers who are filial to the minister, so that the rebels can replenish their property through physical means, after all, even the rebels need to eat.
So, in the plot of the fourth issue, the rebels and night raids who got the ledger continued to assassinate and loot according to the locations and people recorded in the ledger, which caused the minister to lose a lot of money, and also made the minister's family afraid of the night attack.
This also caused the minister to be even more annoyed, although he regarded his subordinates as leeks, but he was at least the owner of this group of leeks, where could they be bullied like this? And his cute brother who can make money for himself actually died at the hands of the night attack......
This made him so angry that he couldn't eat!
So he went to the prison while biting the piece of meat, and found the serial killer known to everyone in the imperial capital, and beheaded Zanke.
Before he went to prison, he was an executioner, but later due to the excessive number of beheadings, it became his hobby, so he often appeared in the middle of the night, indiscriminately attacked pedestrians, cut off their heads, and the victims were as high as dozens, of which thirty percent were members of the garrison.
Eventually, he was imprisoned.
It's just that in order to kill the night raid that caused him trouble, the minister promised that as long as he could kill the night raider, he would be able to release the beheaded Zank from prison.
The reason why I was looking for the decapitated Zank was because the emperor who decapitated Zank was a five-sighted omniscope observer, who could gain insight into people's hearts and make it easier to find those night raids hidden in the crowd.
It's just a pity that in the fourth issue of the comics, the beheading of Zanke still died at the hands of the Night Raid, so in the fifth issue of the comics, the minister finally decided to recall the Imperial General Estes.
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It can be said that "Chop! The comics of "Crimson Pupil" are all quite good done by Lin Yi, whether it is from the rhythm, or from the style of painting, or the scenes of the fight.
And Lin Yi's comic is also getting more and more popular in "Maya Weekly", from the original fifteenth to the tenth in the first place, which is already a pretty good result.
Not only is the order very good, but there are countless tweets about "Chop! Crimson Pupils.
The highest number of likes was a comment from @Yoda:
"The guy who questioned the inappropriateness of the new comic theme of the old thief in Haicheng before, he apologized to the old thief in Haicheng to me! There should be quite a few more than this guy, right? Hurry up and apologize! ”
And below this dynamic, all the replies are comments that apologize to Lin Yi.
"I was wrong!"
"I shouldn't have questioned the old thief of Haicheng!"
"This comic is so good!"
"My face has been swollen by the old thief of Haicheng."
"Huh? Upstairs, I'm familiar with you, didn't you say you wouldn't read Maya Weekly before?! ”
"That's why my face is swollen, I can't wait!"
"Climb up from where you fall.,I have to say that the old thief in Haicheng is really 6.,If it were me, the results of "Demon Slayer Blade" would be so bad.,I don't dare to draw the same type of comics in the next comics.。
“……”
All the people were praising Lin Yi.
The original doubts suddenly reversed after these few issues, and became Lin Yi's "Chop! Crimson Pupils.
To be honest, Lin Yi's result is actually not worth bragging about, but it is just the tenth in the order.
However, Lin Yi's previous ghost slaying achievements and everyone's ridicule before this work add up, but it makes people feel that "Chop! Crimson Pupils and the old thief of Haicheng are very powerful.
And the peers in the industry were also dumbfounded, especially Yoda, he never expected to let Lin Yi turn over!
But looking at everyone's ridicule, he was not convinced, obviously his popularity in Tsukino Club was in eighth place! Why is it better in the eyes of netizens that guy from Haicheng is the tenth pick?
Unconvinced, he sent this out, but soon the comments came back one by one.
"You, a person who specializes in drawing this type of comics, were chased by an old thief from Haicheng who pounced like that before, and you are only two short of being proud?"
"That's it! I don't know where the confidence comes from. ”
“……”
Yoda, who watched the comments one by one, was furious, and in the end, he reluctantly deleted the news he had posted before.