First the whole (alas!) In fact, I only saw more than 100 chapters, and I don't know if it's called the whole) has a very strong feeling, and the characters of the three protagonists in the text are distinct and distinctive, in line with the development of the article, and many supporting characters are only a few strokes, but they give people a deep impression. The ins and outs of the text are very clear, and the development of each story has its inevitable causes and consequences, which is very in line with the psychology and character of the characters.

In the latter part, this article is a traditional martial arts, and the beginning of the verse "The falling sun is lost, who keeps a dream" is very in line with the setting of traditional martial arts, and then the father gets a heavy treasure, and he is killed and killed, all of which are written in accordance with the rules. Then I wrote that Zhu Ziping embarked on the road of seeking revenge (it should be counted), here, I thought that the protagonist was him, I believe this is also the first feeling of most readers, but then I wrote about Wang Hou's encounter in thick ink and color, I was confused, is the protagonist Wang Hou? What kind of person was Zhu Ziping before that? Later, Dao Feng was also written, and Yun Dong was thinking about it, guessing that Brother Bian was going to write about the three Tianlong brothers.

Yun Dong personally feels that there is a small problem here.,Brother Bian set the No. 1 male protagonist as Wang Hou (it should be right.,If it's wrong, it's embarrassing) but it starts with Zhu Ziping's revenge.,Wrote several chapters.,It's a bit noisy (about that.,Because I couldn't see that it was written about three people in the original text) So that I struggled to find his trace in the next dozen chapters and couldn't get it.,It's not good.。

Again, let's talk about Brother Bian's style of writing, tsk! It is not difficult to see how much effort Brother Bian has paid for this article, just in terms of quoting scriptures and classics poetry and songs, it is breathtaking, but the problem is, when the fight is exciting, the enemy (his own) has a new trick, where does the trick come from, why did it get the name Xiang Shu, and then continue to fight, to be honest, this kind of thing can be two or three (personal feelings) at first I felt novel, and then I skipped it directly (hehe), Brother Bian took great pains to collect things that were directly ignored, and it felt like This kind of classical Chinese is really not a few people will read it, less is fine, more will be tired (well, in fact, Yundong is nonsense, don't take it to heart).

Let's talk about a detail again, I remember that when I read the article, there was a place that I was very puzzled about, and it didn't feel very logical, it seemed to be quite front, that is, Wang Hou and Liu Hanyan didn't meet a few times, Wang Hou called people "Smoke Girl", which... Wang Hou is a reader, don't play like this, after that, Wang Hou secretly shot twice to solve the siege, on the bright side, as a weak scholar to protect Liu Hanyan, get her favor, it seems reasonable, think about it carefully and it's not like that, according to the text, Liu is arrogant and willful, from the first time I saw Wang Hou's attitude towards him, he didn't have much affection for people who read, and then Wang Hou secretly shot Liu and didn't know, if you want it, it is also to the "master" Fang Xin secretly promised, and then after all kinds of things, I learned that Wang Hou's identity and fell in love, This is Yundong's train of thought, it feels like the relationship between the two is heating up too quickly, but this is not a romance after all, and it is harmless.

Now traditional martial arts are a bit unpopular, and Brother Bian takes the character of the protagonist and the growing maturity of dealing with people as the main line, rather than the flow of vitality, it is inevitable that there will be some discomfort...

☆☆☆☆☆ author's words: Yun Dongneng insists on seeing more than 100 chapters, which is also very rare, and the evaluation is very good. This article is my first work.,And I haven't been in contact with online texts before.,I don't know that online texts are just a tendon around the protagonist.,That's why there was a multi-protagonist situation that Yundong said.。

I set the story first and then arranged the characters. The battle of the sunset + gang was arranged for the second male lead; The nine-colored lotus + 100-year-old golden melon was arranged for the male number three. Otherwise, all arrangements will be given to the male number one, which will seem too fake. But then I learned that the online text can't be arranged like this, all the events must revolve around the male protagonist, and the others are supporting roles...... A sigh.

The question of moves, in the process of writing, I tried to avoid introducing while typing, and tried to introduce the origin of the moves at the right time, but the first volume may not be able to avoid this problem. The problem of the heroine, the female number one is a Shandong sister paper, her personality is more bold, and she has met the male number one several times to save herself...... Who can guess the thoughts of the sister paper?

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