Inside the hall.

After He Yun put the 28 bars against the wall, he said to Li Yan, who followed up: "Sit down!" Shall I pour you a glass of water and eat watermelon? Why don't I cut you a big watermelon? ”

"No need! No more! Teacher He, I'll just drink water. Hearing He Yun's words, Li Yan shook her head again and again and said.

"Oh well! Then I'll pour you water! He Yun saw her shake her head and refuse, so he said with a smile, and then went into the kitchen, after he poured a glass of water for Li Yan, he moved a bamboo chair and sat down, and then asked, "Think about it clearly?" ”

"Hmm..... Teacher He, I thought about it clearly, so I wrote a fairy tale, by the way, this is a small story I wrote in the past few days, Teacher He. You can help me take a look at it first, and if it works, I'll keep writing! ”

"Oh...... Is it a fairy tale? He Yun took the manuscript paper handed over by Li Yan, looked at her, and asked.

"Hmm.... Almost, but.... Teacher He, let's take a look first. Li Yan nodded, but hesitated again, smiled at He Yun, and replied.

"Okay, then I'll take a look!" Seeing that Li Yan was a little hesitant when she spoke, He Yun couldn't help but ponder for a moment, and then looked at the manuscript paper in his hand.

The manuscript paper is the paper on which credit is usually written, and there are lines of words densely written on it, both on the front and back.

In terms of length, this should be considered a short story, and it has been repeatedly revised in many places.

Fortunately, the changed place can still be recognized, so it doesn't affect him

"Tsundere Panda and Skinny Dog"? Why does this name sound so familiar? Panda? How did this girl come up with the idea of writing this? ”

He Yun looked at the name written on the manuscript paper, but he was a little stunned, but soon, he shook his head slightly, and began to take a serious look at the "fairy tale" she wrote.

"In the forest, there is a village called "Cliff Village", and in the village, there is a respected mountain turtle Venerable, it is the embodiment of wisdom, the highest old man in the village, on this day, the panda fat Xiaoer carried a bamboo pole to find the mountain turtle Venerable, ask it for advice......"

"I ...... Burst...... No way! This Nizi can't be reborn like me! ”

In just over 600 words, he quickly finished reading it, but after reading it, he looked at Li Yan in disbelief.

Although the story was not finished, and even only a beginning was written, from this short beginning, he saw four words

That's right! These four words are "Kung Fu Panda".

All right! I don't know what this Nizi is thinking in her head.

Is it just some coincidence?

Although He Yun has almost forgotten the plot of the movie "Kung Fu Panda", he can still remember some plots in the movie.

For example, Kung Fu Panda's master is a turtle, and the weapon it uses is a stick, and it can also do kung fu, and it is also the one who founded kung fu.

And the content written by this Nizi is almost the same as the plot in "Kung Fu Panda".

Not to say exactly the same, it's just ...... Uh, it's exactly the same.

"You came up with it yourself?" He Yun looked at Li Yan, smiled, and asked.

"Of course I came up with it, Mr. He, I've been thinking about what kind of fairy tale I should write these days, and later, I saw a panda porcelain doll that my aunt bought for me, and I thought about it...... Thinking of Mr. He, there is also a bear in your part, and he also holds a stick, and he will ......"

"You can also do martial arts, right?" He Yun didn't wait for Li Yan to finish speaking, but smiled slightly, and then her words continued.

"Uh...... Yes, Mr. He, I just borrowed from your ...... And I'm ......," Li Yan said, suddenly feeling a little embarrassed.

"Don't be embarrassed, you didn't copy me, you see, I'm writing about a polar bear, and you're writing about a panda, and our protagonists are two completely different bears." He Yun looked at Li Yan, who was a little embarrassed, and immediately shook his head, and comforted her with a smile.

Then he handed her the manuscript and said, "I've read it, and it's pretty well written, but some of the imitations are too deliberate, and as I told you a long time ago, you have to have something of your own in your story." ”

When He Yun said this, he couldn't help but pause, looked at her face, and continued: "Let's take the protagonist you wrote about Fat Xiaoer, first of all, it has always been a panda, so its skin color should not be white, but black and white, and secondly, you set a turtle as the master of Panda Fat Xiaoer, and he can also do martial arts, which is no problem, but why is its weapon a stick?" This is not very reasonable, you can write it like this, this bamboo stick was specially created by Master Turtle for Fat Xiaoer, isn't it more reasonable? ”

After He Yun finished speaking, he said to Li Yan seriously: "However, don't be discouraged, from a literary point of view, your writing is already very good, I have nothing to say, if you still want to continue to write this story, I suggest you write a brief outline according to the beginning of this story, and then give it to me to see, what do you think of this arrangement?" ”

"Okay, no problem, Mr. He, thank you for saying so much for me this time, I'll go back and write the outline right away" Li Yan didn't think much about it, she nodded directly at He Yun, and quickly agreed.

However, when she was about to get up and leave, He Yun immediately stopped her: "Li Yan, you wait, don't be in a hurry to leave, the teacher's words are not finished yet." ”

As soon as Li Yan heard He Yun's words, she hurriedly sat down again, apologized to He Yun and said, "Teacher He, I'm sorry, I'm too anxious, you can continue." ”

"It's okay! But next time, I remember, I can't eat hot tofu in a hurry, and it's the same with writing. He Yun shook his head at her, smiled, and continued: "This is the first step to finish writing the outline, after you finish writing, give it to me, and then you go back and think about the specific details, however, you don't have to write it down, but wait for me to help you read the preliminary outline, make sure that there are no major changes, and then you write the outline, which can save some time, after all, you only have two months in the summer, I hope you can write this story well and finish it during this time!" ”

"Okay, Mr. He, I understand, I will definitely live up to your expectations!" Li Yan nodded again immediately.

"Hmm...... You wait a little longer...... I'll lend you my manuscript, remember, you can only borrow, not imitate, you have to write your own things, understand? ”

He Yun said another word to Li Yan, got up and went upstairs directly, and soon, he handed her the manuscript of "The Legend of the Seven Heroes of the Rainbow Cat and Blue Rabbit".