Chapter 175: "Hou Yi Running to the Moon" is finished!
At this moment, He Yun couldn't help but think of the old man he met at the train station.
Grabbing the sting. At that time, he clearly remembered that after he got on the train, he met each other again, and talked to him all the way to Kyoto Railway Station before parting.
It's a little regrettable, maybe he thought that the two met in Pingshui, so he didn't ask the old man's name and other things, and he himself didn't tell the old man some of his personal information, but talked to him about many social topics today.
Seriously, at that time, he felt that it was quite a good match to talk to the old man.
However, he never expected that the old man not only remembered himself, but also knew his name, address, and even knew that he was a writer.
This made him a little incomprehensible, he obviously didn't say this at the time, did he?
How could it be ......?
"Wait a minute, I understand, is it because of the report in the Hunan Provincial Daily?"
"No, no, the photo of that report only took me in one side of the face, and I remember that the report was under my pseudonym, he couldn't have known me through that, could there be any other reason?"
He Yun pondered for a while, and couldn't help but take out the letter again and read it again.
This letter is not long, the full text is only a dozen lines, and the content is not worth studying, probably meaning to encourage yourself to continue to work hard, strive to write better works, and win glory for the people of Hunan Province.
It can be said that if it were not for the letter mentioning that he had seen him at the train station, he would not have remembered him at all.
"Judging from the tone and wording of the letter, he should be a senior engaged in literary work, and he encouraged me to continue to work hard in the letter, and if he can still understand my situation so well, it is very likely that he is the ...... of that unit!"
Thinking of this, He Yun couldn't help but think of a letter he had received earlier.
It was sent to him by the Provincial Writers Association, and it was to inform him that his two works had been recommended to the Xiang Provincial Youth Literature Award Committee.
Later, Dean Yu and the leaders of the regional writers' association also went to the dormitory to inform him that his success was selected for the Hunan Provincial Youth Literature Award, and he remembered that he also received a bonus of several hundred yuan from the regional writers' association.
"It seems that the old man who wrote to me is from the Provincial Writers' Association." He Yun muttered secretly, and then stuffed the letter back into the envelope.
Although it is very likely that he has been "favored" by a certain leader of the Provincial Writers Association, speaking from the heart, at this moment, he has no waves in his heart, as if this is a very ordinary thing.
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"Woo woo woo ......"
Ding Ding Ding. At this moment, the ship shook violently as a heavy whistle sounded.
"Huh...... It's time to get to the town dock! He Yun looked out of the ship through the glass window, but quickly stood up and walked out of the cabin.
More than an hour later, He Yun finally rushed home before sunset.
After dinner, He Yun went upstairs with a puff fan, he sat down at the table, took out the manuscript, and continued to write.
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More than ten days later, in the early morning.
He Yun got up early, he went downstairs to wash up, and went back upstairs.
During this time, he helped his family dry grain during the day, and continued to write this science fiction at night.
And last night, he finally finished writing.
However, he made a few cuts from the original outline, while adding some new plots.
So in the end, he found that the whole book was 115,000 words.
That's more than any book he'd written before.
Of course, the premise is to exclude the first work he wrote to test the waters.
And in addition to the large number of words, this science fiction actually refreshed a record that only belongs to He Yun.
That's right, that's the number of plot reversals!
There are a total of five major plot reversals in this sci-fi, two small plot reversals, and even a big reversal at the end.
For example, the first plot reversal appears after the protagonist goes to the moon base of the two "hostile countries".
And the second plot reversal, the third plot reversal, and even all the subsequent plot reversals all appeared in the lunar day.
It can be said that the plot of the whole film is very compact, and the reversal is also very powerful, so that people don't have time to think about it, and suddenly find that they guessed wrong again.
For example, in the first plot reversal, He Yun wrote on the manuscript paper: "I heard a faint biting sound, I don't know what it was, but when I processed the sound by a supercomputer, I found nothing, it seems that this sound can only be heard by humans, or only I can hear it...... I piloted the "Yutu-3" and soon came to the lunar base of one of the countries, but I found that the original base location was nothing. ”
At this point, the first plot twist appeared, He Yun wrote on the second page of the manuscript: "I arrived, but I was also stunned, in the other lunar base location, I saw the lunar base, and what surprised me even more was that through the "Jade Rabbit III", I found the signal of Alin's lunar rover, but just when I thought that the two major lunar bases in front of me joined forces to hijack Alin and them, I suddenly found that the two lunar bases were empty, but almost all the equipment in them was intact, In addition to the defense system, at this moment, I couldn't help but muttered silently, the people in the base, where did they go? ”
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It can be said that when He Yun wrote these plot reversal points, he used a large amount of space to describe the strong contrast differences before and after the reversal, which made the overall plot reversal look great, and in this way, the suspense was greatly improved.
And in this way, the whole science fiction is no longer a bunch of incomprehensible terms and data, but a suspenseful plot that reverses and reverses.
Of course, in addition to these, the most noteworthy is the finale.
He completely put aside the previous plot reversals that revolved around the core of "who is the culprit who murdered the protagonist's companions", and instead turned the timeline backwards, and continued the plot to the sudden solar storm particle explosion at the beginning of the previous one.
At the end of the manuscript, He Yun wrote: "I fell into the endless abyss, but there was no darkness around me, but overlapping colorful bubbles, these bubbles could not be touched, but I could see them, and the next moment, I seemed to be returning to the world, the surrounding space continued to distort, and then, a dazzling white light flashed, instantly covering my eyes, and when I saw clearly, I found myself sitting in the cockpit, and a voice came from my ears: the engine of the Houyi spacecraft started normally, and it can set sail, and it will set sail by default...... Alarm, alarm, Irresistible Solar Storm Particle Attack, Earth Star is under attack, please set sail immediately, set sail by default......"
On the last page of the manuscript paper, He Yun wrote this, directly empty two lines, and between these two lines, he wrote two rows of ellipsis, and then wrote in the back: "I woke up again, looking at the figure of Alin and a few people, I wanted to say something, but I seemed to have forgotten something, the Chang'e spacecraft landed on the moon base, everything was so normal, the next day, Alin led the team to drive the Yutu No. 1 to leave the base, and at this moment, a siren sounded, and I stayed at the base, suddenly my face changed in shock, and the secret road was not good, That's the solar storm particles......"
After a string of ellipsis, He Yun left a line blank again, and the pen wrote a word heavily on the back
"End"
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PS: Good night.