After He Yun and Wang Ruoyun chatted for a while, he looked at his watch and saw that it was already past ten o'clock, and he wanted to rush home for lunch, but in the end, he really couldn't resist the enthusiasm of the couple, so he had to stay and eat lunch, and then returned home.

When he returned, he immediately wrote a reply letter and sent it the next day.

However, when he returned to his house from the town, he suddenly heard a burst of laughter coming from inside the hall.

Immediately afterwards, he saw two men running out of the hall.

These two are Li Yan and the sixth sister He Xiaolian.

"Fourth brother, you come back, Sister Li Yan is looking for you." Sixth sister He Xiaolian said as soon as she saw He Yun coming back.

"Hmm...... Li Yan, you're done? ”

After He Yun put the 28 bars against the wall, he immediately turned to look at Li Yan who followed up, and asked casually.

But then, he seemed to think of something, and immediately congratulated her: "By the way, the teacher hasn't congratulated you on being admitted to the county No. 1 middle school!" I heard that your results this time ranked fifth in the town and first in the school? ”

"Teacher He, in fact, is tied for fifth, and there is another classmate with the same score as me."

"Hahaha...... That's also the fifth place! Xiaolian, you have to learn more from Li Yan, look at others, the first place in the whole school, the fifth place in the town, you have to work hard! Next semester, I hope you can be in the top five in the class, if you can get into the top three in the class, what gift do you want, as long as I can buy it, how about I buy it for you? He Yun smiled at Li Yan, then turned his head to the sixth sister He Xiaolian and said a word.

"Fourth brother, this is what you said, let's pull the hook!" As soon as the sixth sister He Xiaolian heard He Yun's words, she immediately stretched out her little thumb happily and said.

"Okay, pull the hook, pull the hook, pull the hook and hang it for a hundred years."

After He Yun hooked up with her, he continued to look at Li Yan.

At this time, Li Yan smiled slightly, and then stretched out her hand from behind her back, and a stack of manuscripts appeared in her hand.

"Here, Mr. He, this is what I wrote during this time, a total of more than 13,000 words, I have changed it several times, but I haven't finished writing it yet, I'm afraid that the writing is still not good enough, so I'll take it for you to see immediately!" With that, Li Yan handed the manuscript to He Yun.

After He Yun took the manuscript, he nodded at her, sat aside, and looked down seriously.

Time passed little by little, and at first, He Yun felt that the fairy tale she wrote was too bland in terms of plot.

Because the first few pages of manuscript paper are all around how the protagonist Panda Fat Xiaoer learns martial arts to unfold the plot, such as practicing sticks in the deep pool, meditating on the top of the mountain, and cliff climbing, these small scenes of martial arts practice are described in great detail.

But it was precisely because it was too detailed that He Yun felt a bit of putting the cart before the horse, a feeling of being anticlimactic.

But as he looked down little by little, reading the manuscript page by page, the smile on his face became more and more obvious, and the frowning brow slowly relaxed.

At this moment, Li Yan was standing in front of He Yun, she almost held her breath, looked at He Yun nervously, and waited anxiously.

As for He Xiaolian, she was sitting on the side, eating watermelon, while looking at the silent He Yun and Li Yan.

It wasn't until half an hour later that He Yun finished reading all the manuscripts.

He immediately grinned, put the last page of the manuscript in his hand on the table, then sorted it out, handed it back to Li Yan, and said, "Give!" Take back the manuscript! ”

Hearing He Yun's words, Li Yan instantly lost and said, "Okay, Mr. He, thank you for helping me read the draft, then I'll go back and revise the draft first!" ”

After saying this, Li Yan was about to turn around and go back to her home.

But at this time, He Yun immediately stopped her: "Modify what?" You're very well written, huh? I mean let you keep writing this story to the end. ”

"Ah...... Teacher He, you ...... Are you telling the truth? Am I really writing well? At this moment, Li Yan was suddenly overjoyed, and she looked at He Yun with disbelief on her face.

"Of course it's true!" He Yun nodded and continued to say to Li Yan: "I thought you wrote it relatively reluctantly, but after reading the plot you wrote later, I have to admire you, teacher, your plot design is indeed very ingenious." ”

As he spoke, He Yun deliberately paused, and seeing that Li Yan was still a little confused, he continued to explain to her.

"For example, the few small scenes of learning martial arts you wrote earlier seem redundant, but in the later plots, you took the way of echoing the beginning and the end, forming a closed loop of the plot, it can be said that this is a series of foreshadowing for the follow-up plot, and for the main story line, it is also very clear, and the main story supporting characters are all quite good, vivid and lively, especially the unique character characteristics of their respective animals."

After listening to He Yun's series of praises, Li Yan was a little embarrassed, she smiled at He Yun, and hurriedly said: "Teacher He, in fact, I was also inspired by reading the "Legend of the Seven Heroes of the Rainbow Cat and Blue Rabbit" you wrote before. ”

"No, no, no...... You have surpassed my in terms of plot design, and you have a lot of original things in this story, which greatly exceeds the teacher's expectations, and the teacher feels that you have surpassed the teacher in the field of children's literature, and the teacher hopes that you can continue to keep it up. ”

After He Yun waved his hand and said something to Li Yan, he stood up again, and continued: "I see that you didn't write your name this time, haven't you thought about it yet?" ”

"Uh-huh! Teacher He, actually, I also felt that the previous name was not very suitable, but for a while, I couldn't think of a more suitable one, so I simply left it empty. Li Yan nodded and replied.

Then, she looked at He Yun again, and pleaded: "Teacher He, can you help me too......

"You want me to come up with a name for you, right?" After He Yun continued her words, he looked at her and nodded.

"Cheng, I'll help you think of one, but you have to think about it yourself, seriously, your story is really good, the teacher thinks that this time it is very promising to be approved by the magazine, so you have to think about it, after all, a good name is also the key to success."

"Okay, Mr. He, I understand, when I go back, I will definitely think about it."

After speaking, Li Yan left happily with the manuscript.

At this moment, He Xiaolian on the side looked at He Yun and asked, "Fourth brother, is Sister Li Yan's writing really that good?" Or tell me how to write ......."

"Stop, stop...... Stop, girl, I don't know you yet, you always do things with three points of enthusiasm, you better improve your academic performance first! After He Yun replied to her, he looked in the direction of the door and continued.

"The story Li Yan wrote this time, although the main line is very simple, but she wrote vividly and intelligently, this may be the true meaning of children's literature, it seems that I was fundamentally wrong before."