He Yun smiled, put the manuscript in his hand on the table, was silent for a moment, and said: "I see that the story you wrote is based on the panda as the protagonist, and it integrates the elements of martial arts, plus the elimination of violence and peace, after many hardships and dangers, and finally defeating the king of the forest, Tiger Batian, as the main story line, why don't you call it Kung Fu Panda Adventure?" ”

"Kung Fu Panda Adventures? Teacher He, your name is so suitable, it's much better than mine, Cheng! Mine is named after Mr. He, can you see it? ”

"Of course, didn't I promise you to get one for you? Since you think the name is appropriate, then you can use it! He Yun smiled, nodded at Li Yan and said.

Then, he looked at Li Yan and asked casually: "By the way, what is your own name?" Can the teacher listen to it? ”

Hearing He Yun's question, Li Yan smiled awkwardly, shook her head and said, "Teacher He, I still don't say it, compared to the one you gave me, Teacher He, the name I gave, even I can't say it myself." ”

"It's okay, just say it! Teachers won't laugh at you. He Yun encouraged her.

"That'...... Okay, Mr. He, in fact, I ...... I also thought about it for many days, but I never thought about it, and later, I felt that since the protagonist was called Fat Xiaoer, and he was chivalrous all the way and saved a lot of people, I thought of a name for "The Legend of Fat Little Erxing...... But compared to the one you took, I myself don't think I'm right, or Mr. He, the name you took is good, Kung Fu Panda Adventures, it sounds catchy, and at the same time, it also summarizes the characteristics and main lines of the protagonist in me. ”

"It's good that you're satisfied, but it's really a bit inappropriate for you to take this name, Li Yan, the teacher suggests that if you choose another name in the future, don't restrain your thinking, you have to enlarge your thinking infinitely." He Yun nodded, and after telling Li Yan his opinion on the name, the conversation changed and continued.

"Of course, the teacher doesn't want you to make the name as weird as possible, but to take into account the subject matter you write at the same time, for example, what you wrote this time belongs to children's literature, so the name should be vivid and lively, but also visual, try not to mix with some esoteric words that you can't understand, to be close to reality, simple, colloquial, do you understand what I mean?"

"Got it! Teacher He, I understand what you mean, the specific subject matter is specifically analyzed, just like the "Legend of the Seven Heroes of the Rainbow Cat and Blue Rabbit" you wrote before and the "Kung Fu Panda Adventure" you just gave me, which is good to listen to and easy to remember, and not awkward, it summarizes the main line of the story, and the most important thing is that it is vivid. ”

Li Yan's words made He Yun on the side nod his head again and again, and he understood that Li Yan really understood the meaning of his words this time.

In fact, these experiences taught by He Yun are also bloody lessons that were learned after dozens of online articles were "hit the street" in later generations.

For example, the fantasy online literature of later generations, at the beginning, the name must be tall or very awesome, so that there is hope to become popular, such as "The Emperor", "Heavens", "Emperor Wu", "Firmament", "Martial God" and the like, and later after the style of online writing changed with the market, the names of various "demons and monsters" also came out, what "sign-in", "system" and other fantasy themes prevailed, and the fantasy name that started with the word "I" was out of control.

It can be seen that the criteria for choosing a name are not immutable, but must be analyzed in detail on a specific subject, and it also depends on the changes of the times.

Of course, these are actually far away, so let's get back to the point.

After He Yun helped Li Yan choose a good name, he looked at Li Yan again and said, "Li Yan, your name is good, so have you thought of your pen name?" The teacher advises you not to use your real name, so that you can avoid a lot of trouble. ”

"This ...... Teacher He, I've already thought about it, and I've thought about several, can you help me see which one is more suitable......"

"Still no, Li Yan, you can decide the pen name yourself, and the teacher won't help you choose." As soon as she heard Li Yan say that she had thought of a few pen names and asked herself to help her choose, He Yun politely refused.

Then, he continued: "Li Yan, the matter of pen names, let's talk about this first, let me introduce you to the two submission platforms for this submission!" The first submission platform is the children's literature publication "Juvenile Literature and Art" located in the magic capital, which is the earliest publication in our country and a platform dedicated to publishing children's literature, and the other is "Children's Literature", which is a submission platform located in Kyoto, and it is jointly organized by our National Writers Association and the Central Committee of the Youth League. ”

When He Yun said this, he couldn't help but glance at Li Yan, and when he saw her looking at him vigorously, he immediately smiled and continued: "The teacher suggested that you submit a manuscript for both of them to try, what about your own ideas?" ”

After saying this, He Yun immediately looked at Li Yan.

Li Yan saw He Yun looking at her, hesitated for a moment, and asked He Yundao: "Teacher He, I think, it's not impossible to vote for two families, but what should I do now that I only have one manuscript, do I have to copy another ......?" ”

"What do you say?" When He Yun heard her say this, he smiled, looked directly at her with his eyes, and immediately interrupted her and said.

"Uh...... Okay, Mr. He, I'll make another copy when I go back! Li Yan lowered her head and whispered to He Yun.

"That's right, right? Actually, when the teacher submits more than one draft, he is like you and doesn't want to copy another copy, but Li Yan, you must know that opportunities are reserved for those who are prepared, and you can't be complacent just because you write well, let alone feel that everything will be fine if you write such a good story, you have to continue to work hard, understand? The teacher's expectations for you are very high, and the teacher hopes that you will become a great writer in the future. ”

After He Yun said such words of encouragement to her earnestly, he stood up again and said: "Okay, you take the manuscript and go back, proofread it yourself first, and then show it to me, if there is no problem, you can start transcribing, you keep the manuscript yourself, and I will send the two copies of the transcription for you!" ”

"Thank you, Mr. He, then I'll go back first...... That's right! Grandpa said that the day after tomorrow I invite you to come to my house for dinner, which is my grandfather's birthday. Li Yan was just about to leave, but suddenly remembered something, and turned to He Yun again.

"Okay, I'll definitely go to your house the day after tomorrow to celebrate your grandfather's birthday!" He Yun smiled and agreed to Li Yan.

…………

Two days later, early in the morning, He Yun carried the sorghum wine he bought from the entrance of the village, and rode on the 28 bars to go to the house of the head of Li Township.

Unexpectedly, as soon as he went out, there were "guests" at home.