As a realism, the word "real" must be put in the first place.

In addition to the real plot, the thought-provoking strong sense of substitution and rich emotional rendering are also the most commonly used writing techniques of realism.

He Yun's this one is naturally no exception.

For example, the main place of the plot in this film, He Yun is set in two villages.

One of these two villages is called Sanzhouba Village, while the other is called Dongling Village.

The former is a village surrounded by a lake, while the latter is a small mountain village just by hearing the name.

The two small villages may not sound like much of a connection, but in this book he wrote, the two villages are inextricably linked.

Because in his setting, many of the villagers of these two villages are related.

It was a few decades ago, some villagers of Dongling Village were forced to leave the village due to the war and chose to hide in the reeds in the lake area where Sanzhouba Village is located.

In addition to the place where the story takes place, He Yun is also very particular about the setting of the protagonist and supporting roles.

For example, the protagonist Xu Fei's family, their ancestors came to Sanzhouba Village from Dongling Village to escape the war.

And the heroine Long Haitang is a native of Dongling Village, the ancestors of the two families are friends, and later for various reasons, the two families have a bad relationship, and finally the two young people are happy with each other, but because of the family's obstruction, they had to break up.

Of course, for the main theme of this realism, love and hatred are just "seasonings", and the real "main course" is, of course, to show how the protagonist Xu Fei and a group of supporting characters lead everyone to make a fortune and become well-off in the process of reform and poverty alleviation, which is the main line, and its time span line will also resume the college entrance examination in 1977 to the end of 1986.

However, in order to better make up for some regrets in the plot, He Yun finally added a plot of the male protagonist Xu Fei and the heroine Long Haitang's yearning for future life at the end of the preliminary outline.

The purpose of this is nothing else, in addition to making up for the regrets in the plot, it is also He Yun to pave the way for writing the second part in the future.

As for whether it will be written in the future? Then I don't know, because even He Yun himself is not sure about this matter.

In terms of specific plot settings, the two key words "poverty alleviation" and "getting rich" are the main cores, and other side plots must be developed around these two core points.

This, as far as the preliminary outline that has been written so far is concerned, He Yun has completely achieved it.

The most important thing now is how to write these plots well, which is what he needs to seriously consider at the moment.

For this reason, he plans to spend more than half a month writing and sorting out the detailed outline of the entire book, and maybe he may go to Meishan County again halfway.

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On this day, at about three o'clock in the afternoon, He Yun did not go back to the dormitory immediately after class, but continued to wait downstairs.

After a while, Gao Yunyan walked over slowly, and when she saw He Yun standing not far away waiting, she hurriedly walked over.

"You've been waiting for a long time, haven't you? Let's go! Gao Yunyan smiled and said.

"No, it's just a while, Yunyan, are you still used to class?" He Yun shook his head slightly, and asked her casually.

"It's okay, although the teachers are teaching relatively fast, most of them can still understand, as for what I don't understand, I have already taken notes, and when I have free time, you have to help me make up for the lessons." Gao Yunyan said, nodded involuntarily, and then turned her gaze to He Yun again.

"Okay, no problem!" He Yun responded with a smile, and walked with Gao Yunyan to the girls' dormitory.

Along the way, he and Gao Yunyan always maintained a certain distance, and Gao Yunyan also seemed to understand what He Yun was afraid of, instead of being angry, she felt very warm in her heart, because she knew that He Yun did this for her own good.

A quarter of an hour later, He Yun sent Gao Yunyan back to the dormitory, and he also turned around and went back to his dormitory.

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At the moment, inside the dormitory.

He Yun sat at the table, he spread out a few pieces of manuscript paper one by one, looked at them, and then solemnly wrote the three big characters "Lake and Mountain Love" in the middle of the top of the first page of manuscript paper.

In the past two days, he has been perfecting the detailed outline, and the process is relatively smooth, but there is one thing that makes him a little nerve-wracking.

It turned out that in order to write as realistically and as immersively as possible, He Yun almost racked his brains to think of a detailed outline, but he always felt that the plot setting was a little worse.

For example, in the first part, at the beginning, the hero and heroine did not have any intersection, but because they happened to take the college entrance examination in the same examination room, the heroine was in her menstrual period on the day of the exam, and finally almost fainted in the examination room.

It is precisely because of this that the heroine Long Haitang shook the table and chair, and then alarmed the invigilator, who thought that the male protagonist Xu Fei sitting behind her was answering with the heroine, and finally called both of them out.

Although the misunderstanding was quickly clarified, both of them were greatly affected in their exams, which eventually led to both of them falling off the list.

This paragraph of the appeal is the outline originally set by He Yun, but after thinking about it, he found that this setting was a bit too coincidental and deliberate.

But if he was asked to change it, he didn't know where to start.

There is also the plot later, after the hero and heroine "grudge" because of this, they both gave up the college entrance examination for various reasons, but their reasons for giving up the repetition were a bit unreasonable, but for a while, he couldn't think of a reasonable reason.

In addition to the above two places, which are somewhat unreasonable in terms of plot handling, there are more than a dozen places, He Yun feels that there are some problems, and after repeated deliberations, he only revised three or four places in the end, and most of them have not yet thought of a more reasonable modification plan.

There was no way, He Yun could only give up for the time being and continue to revise, and chose to write a follow-up outline.

For the later plot setting, He Yun divided it into three parts, namely "becoming the leader of soft-shelled turtle farming in the village", "building a large-scale aquaculture base", and "leading the villagers to embark on the road of making a fortune and getting rid of poverty". ”

Of course, this is only a rough division, in fact, these three parts also contain many side plots to get rid of poverty and become rich, such as the male protagonist helping the heroine to plant tea in the whole village of Xiling Village, so that Xiling Village also embarked on the road to making a fortune, and in order to find a market, the male protagonist even went to the provincial capital and even the coastal area alone to find customers.

He preliminarily estimated that this film is at least 150,000 to 200,000 words, and it is even likely to be written longer, which should be regarded as a proper long-form realism.

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Two more days had passed, and it was already mid-September.

In the past two days, He Yun found that when writing the outline, it was obviously much smoother than before, no, in the past two days, he not only revised some of the previous unmodified places, but also wrote one-third of the outline in one go.

This was something he hadn't thought of before, after all, he originally planned to spend more than half a month writing and sorting out this detailed outline, but now, he suddenly found that it didn't seem to take so long?

However, he rejoiced too soon!

On the fifth day of his syllabus, he suddenly got stuck.

And the stuck place is in the writing of tea planting in Xiling Village, Meishan County.

You must know that He Yun is not a professional tea farmer after all, and he doesn't know much about tea-related content, such as how to grow tea? How to pick tea? How do you fry tea? He didn't know anything about it.

But it is precisely this professional knowledge that is necessary for him, and he cannot make it up.

In fact, in addition to these tea-related professional knowledge, there are also some places where he also needs to collect information, such as soft-shelled turtle breeding technology, black fish breeding technology, etc., which must strive to be true and cannot be brushed aside, otherwise, the whole plot will lose many highlights, and some contradictions and conflict points will also lose support and become a plot injury.

"Looks like I'm going to have to go to Xinhua Bookstore."

After He Yun muttered a sentence secretly, he immediately stuffed the manuscript into the drawer, he looked at the watch on his wrist, and found that it was still early, so he took a notebook and a pen and immediately left the dormitory, and walked towards the outside of the school.

His destination is Xinhua Bookstore, after all, if you want to find out the relevant breeding technology, only Xinhua Bookstore has books on this subject.

It can be said that in order to write this realism well, he must make up for the breeding technology class this time.

Half an hour later, he came to the bookstore, chatted with Lin Lao for a while, and then searched in front of the bookshelf, and soon, he found more than a dozen books on breeding, such as "Postpartum Care of Sows", "Fish Farming", "Black Goat Breeding Technology", "Poultry Incurable Diseases" and so on.

To be honest, although at present, there are very few books such as teaching aids, but there are quite a lot of books on workers and peasants in Xinhua Bookstore, and He Yun found so many books when he looked for them casually.

He took these books, found Lin Lao, and asked him to help arrange a table, so he flipped through these books and recorded them in his notebook.

In order to be in a hurry, he could only select some of the things that might be used to record them, and as for some things that were unlikely to be used, he gave them up one by one.

Two hours passed quickly, and He Yun had already copied more than a dozen pages, and his eyes were dazzled, so he put down the pen in his hand.

At this time, he looked at his watch, but he was stunned for a moment and said, "Oops, I still have class!" ”

After muttering a word secretly, He Yun hurriedly got up and put the borrowed book back in its place, said a word to Lin Lao again, and hurried to the school with a pen and notebook.

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In this way, after three days of excerpting and studying, He Yun finally perfected this part of the outline.

The next step is to go to Meishan County again and find local tea farmers to learn about "tea culture".

He didn't plan to go tomorrow for the reason that he had a class tomorrow and the morning after tomorrow, so he could only find a time to rush over without class, and he had to rush back that day or the next day.

He looked at the class schedule as requested, and soon made a decision.

"On Monday next week, there will only be one class in the morning, and on Tuesday next week, there will be a class at three o'clock in the afternoon, so let's go for these two days."

He Yun looked at the class schedule, but made a decision in an instant.

However, after a moment, he suddenly frowned again: "It's just that how to get there then?" By shuttle? It seems that it is too late! ”