Chapter 247: The short story "500 Million Yuan Business"!
Dormitory, at the desk.
Looking at the names on the paper, He Yun became more satisfied the more he looked at it.
"$500 million business"
That's right, the name of this article was finally set as "500 Million Yuan Business".
The word "500 million" in it, He Yun originally wanted to put double quotation marks, but after thinking about it, he gave up again.
The word "500 million" here is not a virtual finger, but a real number, and when it is marked with double quotation marks, it will naturally change its taste.
Moreover, He Yun didn't take this name randomly, he completely followed the current naming rules.
Do you want to say that the names published in the magazines today have anything in common?
The answer, of course, is yes!
In fact, the law is just two words, simple!
By "simple" here we don't just mean the literal meaning of the name, but also the simplicity of the number of words.
Because nowadays, many often only have two words, three words, or four words, and no more than six words at most, generally a definite sentence plus a subject.
Just like "500 Million Yuan Business", the former is a definite sentence, mostly using adjectives for modification, while the latter is the subject, mostly nouns or pronouns.
Of course, this is analyzed from the perspective of literary rhetoric, in fact, the name is the title, which needs to summarize the central idea of the whole text or the characters and events that the author wants to focus on, such as the name of the protagonist, occupation, etc.
And the "500 million yuan business" is the core event that He Yun wants to highlight emphatically.
That's right, this 500 million yuan business refers to the transaction of "500 million yuan" canned food for an aircraft of the same value.
Just like the headline party in later generations, you must get two special keywords to attract everyone's attention.
In fact, this is a more common metaphorical technique in writing, and it is almost used in today's newspaper headlines and other literary themes.
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After deciding on the name, He Yun directly picked up the pen and wrote on a new page of manuscript paper.
He first solemnly wrote down the five big characters of "500 million yuan business" in Song style in the middle of the top line, and then wrote in the top box with an empty line.
In the dim light, the shadow of a man was reflected at the table, and cigarette butts were scattered around it. Nan Tiande snuffed out the cigarette butt in his hand, but he took out another cigarette, drew a match and lit it, and then, he couldn't help but take a sharp breath, but then, he snuffed out the whole cigarette again, as if he had made a decision............
For creating this kind of realism, especially short stories, He Yun has long been handy.
No, in a moment, a page of manuscript paper was already full.
Seeing this, He Yun hurriedly continued to write on the new manuscript paper: "500 million business, I make a net profit of 100 million, refreshing, very refreshing, Nan Tiande couldn't help laughing......"
Half an hour later, another page was full.
He Yun didn't think about it, and wrote directly on the third new manuscript paper.
After sprinkling hundreds of words of description, He Yun finally wrote on the fourth manuscript paper: "A few years later, a pair of silver bracelets were buckled on Nan Tiande's wrists, and with the sound of the siren, he was taken away. ”
Writing this, He Yun once again left an empty line and wrote down the word "end".
In this way, this article is finished.
He sorted out the four sheets of manuscript paper and roughly estimated the number of words, which was about 2,500 words.
This is one of the shortest of the short stories.
But it doesn't matter, because at the moment, it's not the number of words that people value, it's the quality.
And the review editors will not despise this article because the number of words is too small, after all, He Yun's "signboard" has already been established in the writer's circle.
Besides, although this article is very short, all three elements can be present.
Moreover, this article is not only concise in writing, but also very profound, and in terms of character building, it is extremely dazzling to portray the role of "Nan Tiande".
"Nan Tiande" is greedy, adventurous, extremely confident, and more righteous, which can be said to show the true character of a businessman.
Of course, as the saying goes, don't stretch out your hand, you will be caught, if you violate the law, you will naturally be judged, this is the same truth since ancient times, therefore, He Yun deliberately used a few lines in the end to explain the ending of "Nan Tiande".
In fact, originally, he was not ready to explain the ending of the protagonist, but when he thought of the characteristics of the current national conditions and the principle that violations must be prosecuted, he finally clicked a little.
However, he only nodded slightly, as for what the future of "Nan Tiande" will be, it is up to the reader to develop a rich imagination.
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At around five o'clock in the afternoon, He Yun finally finished transcribing the two short stories.
After leaving the manuscript, he immediately sent the two manuscripts separately.
When he returned to the door of the dormitory again, he saw Gao Yunyan standing there holding an aluminum lunch box.
"Yunyan, why are you here? Looking for me? Seeing Gao Yunyan from a distance, He Yun couldn't help but glance at her, and then walked over.
"He Yun, give it, this is a delicious food I specially made for you, you can eat it while it's hot!"
"Uh...... Yunyan, what's wrong with you today? Is there something to be happy about? He Yun took the aluminum lunch box she handed over, touched it, and found that it was still hot, obviously, she must have taken it in her arms.
"Let me think about it, birthday? No, your birthday has long passed, and this year's birthday ...... It seems that there are nine months left, if it is not a birthday, it is ......" He Yun muttered, suddenly smiled, and suddenly realized.
"I see! Did you pass the application report you sent to Dean Yu before? ”
He Yun's words made Gao Yunyan nod: "Well......!" Dean Yu had already approached me, and he said that if I could pass his assessment, he would consider helping me get into graduate school next year. ”
"Really? That's great, go! Let's talk over there! When He Yun heard Gao Yunyan's answer, he was suddenly overjoyed, and he immediately took Gao Yunyan's hand, came to a secluded place, and chatted.
However, chatting and chatting, He Yun frowned a little.
And when Gao Yunyan said: "I told all the people in my dormitory about this, but they all said that I couldn't pass the exam, and they all said sour things, I was almost angry with them!" ”
"Uh...... You, wait, you didn't tell them about the approval of the application report, did you? ”
"Of course I didn't tell them about this, He Yun, I understand what you mean, I won't tell anyone else."
"Hmm...... That's good, you can review with peace of mind, usually, if you don't understand, you can come and ask me, if I'm not there, you can also ask Senior Li Hanming, the day after tomorrow, I have to go to the regional writers' association to participate in a meeting, I may not be available. ”