Speaking of this, Dean Yu couldn't help frowning.

Seeing him like this, He Yun hurriedly asked, "Just what?" Dean Yu. ”

"It's just that you're going to be a bit of a stretch and too complicated? You must know that if a good script has too many mixed elements, it will make the whole script look a little nondescript. ”

Dean Yu was afraid that He Yun would not understand very well, so he immediately explained: "The reasoning techniques of your script should be regarded as a combination of physical evidence reasoning and psychological reasoning techniques, these two techniques, I suggest that you still use only one, and psychological reasoning techniques can be used less or less." ”

"As for the reason for this, I think you should understand that the ancients paid attention to physical evidence in the trial of cases, rather than other reasoning techniques, although you are artistic processing, but you can't add everything here, which will ruin your good script."

Regarding Dean Yu's words, He Yun pondered for a while, but nodded.

That's a blind spot!

Indeed, the simpler something, the purer it is.

is like some online dramas in later generations, all elements are added to it, and the positioning is not clear, which eventually leads to the whole drama being filmed into a hodgepodge.

On the other hand, some small-cost dramas, although they are not very good, have a clear positioning, and the elements are relatively simple, just like some so-called "rotten dramas", "sweet dramas", and even "food dramas", and in the end, the audience bought it.

Of course, this is not to say that this kind of drama is worth promoting.

In fact, this kind of drama also has a lot of shortcomings.

However, to a certain extent, a good script, in addition to having a wonderful plot, also needs to find a good positioning, and it must not be too complicated.

"Also, the creative background of your script is also a bit problematic, during the Wu Zhou Dynasty, there were many differences between the civil and military official positions and the Tang Dynasty, I think it is best for you to read the professional historical materials, write well, don't be confused." At this time, Dean Yu took the manuscript and read it for a while, and pointed out the right path again.

"Good! Dean Yu, I have written down both of these points you mentioned, thank you for your correction. He Yun nodded, and then responded.

"Hmm...... You can grasp this matter yourself, I'll go first, and you can continue to create! After saying this, Dean Yu turned around and walked towards the door of the dormitory.

Seeing this, He Yun immediately followed: "Dean Yu, I'll send you!" ”

…………

At the beginning of May, the weather in Hunan Province has become very hot.

On May Day, the school naturally had a holiday.

He Yun originally planned to go home, but when he thought that he would graduate in only two months, he gave up the idea of going back for the time being.

In the afternoon, he slept for a while. It's just that as soon as he woke up, he saw Gao Yunyan standing beside him.

"Yunyan, why did you come to my bedroom?" He Yun was surprised.

Then, he immediately stood up and gave her a chair to sit on: "Yunyan, you sit here, I'll pour you a glass of water, it's too hot." ”

"I'm not thirsty, He Yun, are you free now?" Gao Yunyan hesitated for a moment, but plucked up the courage to look at He Yun and asked.

"Free! Naturally free? How? Yunyan, do you need my help? He Yun nodded, he picked up the hot water bottle and poured a cup into the cup, then took a sip of it himself, and then looked at her.

"I want to ...... I want you to accompany me to see her! Gao Yunyan hesitated for a moment and said.

"She? Yes! When are we going? Now? He Yun was stunned for a moment, and soon understood who Gao Yunyan was referring to, he looked at Gao Yunyan and asked again.

"Hmm......" Gao Yunyan snorted and said, "She should be at home today." ”

"Then I'll bring a little more money, you wait for me." As he spoke, He Yun opened the locked drawer and took out ten sheets of Great Unity.

But Gao Yunyan stopped him in time: "No need, He Yun, I have the money, I don't need you to spend it." ”

"Then what's the matter, you're my girlfriend, how can you spend your money, or I'll come." With that, He Yun locked the drawer, took the money, and pulled Gao Yunyan to walk outside the dormitory.

…………

The two soon came to the downstairs of the tube where Gao Yunyan used to live.

After going up to the second floor, at this time, Gao Yunyan stopped at the staircase for some reason.

He Yun walked ahead, he turned around and saw Gao Yunyan stop, so he walked back to her and asked, "Yunyan, what's wrong with you?" ”

"He Yun, I'...... I'm a little worried......"

"It's okay......! It's all up to me. He Yun took her hand and couldn't help but comfort her.

After saying this, he smiled at Gao Yunyan, holding the gift box in one hand and holding her hand in the other, and continued to walk towards the other end of the corridor.

Before and after the two came to the end of the door, He Yun was about to knock on the door, but saw that the door was suddenly opened.

It was Gao Yunyan's mother who opened the door.

At this point, she looked a little haggard.

However, when she saw that it was He Yun and Gao Yunyan who came, she smiled.

At this moment, she seemed very happy, and immediately welcomed He Yun and the others in.

"Xiaohe, Yunyan, you come in quickly, it's hot outside, sit! Sit! I'll pour you water!" ”

"Thank you, Auntie! We're not thirsty. ”

"I'm not thirsty, then I'll get you some peaches, I just bought some yesterday." Gao Yunyan's mother said a word, then turned around and went to get the peaches again.

At this time, He Yun found that Gao Yunyan's eyes had always fallen on her mother.

"Yunyan, are you okay?" He Yun hurriedly asked.

"He Yun, I'm fine, I'm just ......"

"Here come the peaches, I'll wash a few for you, if you don't like to eat the skin, then I'll peel the ...... for you."

"Auntie...... No need, it's good to eat it wrapped in skin" He Yun interrupted Gao Yunyan's mother's words with a smile, and then handed over the gift in his hand.

"Auntie...... Here's a little bit of canned food I bought for you, and a little bit of pastry, you take it! ”

"How can this make you so spoiled? Just come! Gao Yunyan's mother was polite, but finally accepted the gift.

After all, this is a little bit of He Yun's heart, if she doesn't accept it, it will be bad.

In the following time, Gao Yunyan's mother kept chatting with He Yunyou, without the slightest "coldness" of the past.

What makes He Yun feel even more different is that maybe she has experienced that serious illness, and she seems to be much less optimistic about life and death.

At this time, He Yun also found that although she had been chatting with herself, in fact, at the same time, she was also secretly looking at Gao Yunyan, who was silent on the side.

Obviously, after she experienced that serious illness, her whole person has changed a lot.

"It seems that Elder Gao was right before, Auntie has indeed changed a lot, maybe ......"

He Yun muttered secretly, couldn't help but look at Gao Yunyan, and then said.