Chapter 289: Big Guy Liu, how do you imitate my science fiction novel!
In May, if it rains, it will become even hotter and hotter.
No, just after eating at noon, dark clouds began to cover the sky, and after a while, it began to rain lightly.
The rain was getting heavier and heavier, and the "crackling" hit the ground, and soon a stream of water was formed.
He Yun sat at the table, looking out the window, a hot and humid water vapor rushed towards him, and the smell of earth in the air was particularly strong.
He quickly got up and closed the window, leaving only a slit for ventilation.
And it just so happened that at this time, Deng Chengjun hurriedly ran in with an umbrella, he stomped his feet, patted the water droplets accidentally splashed on his body, and couldn't help complaining: "This day is really said to change, and it rained so quickly." ”
"Teacher He, have you heard?" Turning his head, Deng Chengjun looked at He Yun and asked.
"What did you hear? I've been in the dorm today and haven't been anywhere. He Yun turned around and looked at Deng Chengjun.
"It's graduation time! It has been decided, June 30th, and today is May 4th, so it will be more than 50 days. ”
"Really? What about your curriculum? Are you done with it? He Yun was not surprised, he asked another question casually, then turned around and began to sort out the scattered manuscripts on the table.
"Soon, it is estimated that it will be completed in mid-June, this time can exhaust the students in our class, the most class day is full of seven classes, you say that this class is also full!"
"Teacher Deng, otherwise? This lesson must be finished, and besides, there is still a graduation assessment. He Yun said with a smile.
At this time, Teacher Chen also ran into the dormitory like a soup chicken.
"This ghost weather, it's still sunny when I'm eating, and it rains as soon as I go out, and I get drenched all the way back."
"Teacher Chen, your class is almost over, right?" Deng Chengjun looked at Teacher Chen, who had just entered the dormitory, and asked.
"It's still early, at least in late June." Teacher Chen turned his head and glanced at Deng Chengjun and replied.
"What about you...... After getting my diploma, should I go back immediately, or should I stay in school? ”
"Of course I'm going back...... There was something going on before...... Forget it, don't talk about this, Mr. He, what about you? After getting your diploma, will you go back to the countryside immediately? At this time, Teacher Chen suddenly asked He Yunlai.
"...... me? Naturally, I'll have to go back, but I probably won't be back until mid-July. He Yun hesitated for a moment and replied.
"Oh...... All right! Then Mr. Deng and I will go back first. Mr. Chen didn't get to the bottom of it, and after he said "oh", he began to change out of his wet clothes.
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The rain didn't last long, and it stopped in the evening.
The next morning, the sky cleared again, and as for the temperature, it was back above 30 degrees.
Summer in Hunan Province is like this, and He Yun is used to it.
At noon, he went to the guard's room, and without accident, he got some letters from the doorman, Uncle Li.
And, of course, there are several remittance slips.
For example, this one, the manuscript fee sent by "Juvenile Literature and Art" is 1,985 yuan, four cents and three cents.
Not a lot, but not a lot either.
There is also this one, which was forwarded by the "Animation King" magazine, with the words "three thousand nine hundred and eighty-five triangles and six points" on it.
It is estimated that it is the manuscript fee obtained from overseas publications, otherwise it would not be so much.
In addition to these two, there are two more, one is sent by the People's Literature Publishing House, with 1,498 yuan and two cents, which should be the "royalties" of the two works "Spy on the Island" and "Love on the Lake".
One was sent by "Story Club", which is a whole number, a thousand yuan.
It's okay.
After all, "Archaeological Notes: The True and False Tomb of Cao Cao" is only more than 10,000 words.
As for the letters received together, one was sent by the People's Literature Publishing House, and the other was sent by the "Story Club" magazine.
And this last remaining letter was a bit unexpected to him.
"Huh......? He sent it! ”
Looking at the familiar address and sender, He Yun was stunned for a moment, and then tore open the letter and read it.
"Hmm...... He actually asked me to help him review the manuscript...... Wrong! Is it a reviewer? It's just this...... At the beginning of a science fiction story, how can it feel familiar. ”
"That's right! Is it "Supernova Era"? ”
"No, it won't! Did this person start writing this so early? ”
"Wouldn't it be because of me that he started his sci-fi creation in advance?"
Although He Yun only saw the beginning, he could almost conclude that he might have changed "history".
Still, that's a good thing!
After all, this rising star will make the entire continent science fiction world famous.
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After returning to the dormitory, He Yun continued to look at the familiar beginning.
It's just that when he looked behind him, he couldn't help frowning.
Because at this moment, he found some problems from the beginning written by this big guy Liu.
First of all, in terms of writing technique, maybe he has just written science fiction, and many details are not handled in place, which seems a little immature.
Secondly, there are also some deficiencies in the setting of the opening.
Last but not least, this Liu boss seems to be imitating his first few science fiction works.
Especially "Sea Prison", the familiar taste, He Yun can see it at a glance.
"That's not going to work, I'll have to show him it, or ...... He's going astray. He Yun muttered secretly, immediately brought a blank manuscript paper, and began to write a reply to the other party.
"Hello, Comrade Liu Cixin, I have received your letter, first of all, I have to thank you for your trust in me, and secondly, here are my three personal suggestions......
He Yun did not have any extra words in his reply to him, he directly pointed out the problems he found, especially the problem of "imitation", and responded positively.
Moreover, at the end of the letter, he also wrote: "Our country's science fiction community is lacking fresh blood like you, I hope that with your joining, we can write a strong stroke for our country's science fiction community!" ”
Well, the simple translation of these words is: "Young man, I am very optimistic about you!" ”
After writing the reply, He Yun looked at the letter sent by the "Story Club" magazine again.
However, after thinking about it again and again, he took the lead in opening the letter sent to him by the People's Literature Publishing House.
"Hmm...... Kyoto TV is ready to adapt my "Lake and Mountain Love"? They also let me go to Kyoto! ”