Not long after the revised "Set Sail" was launched, it suddenly dropped offline, without the slightest warning or any prompt, and it couldn't be opened all of a sudden.

This can't help but make many curious netizens stunned in front of the computer screen.

You know, they're still waiting to see what the revamped "Set Sail" looks like, and now they're okay, and they can't see anything.

At the same time, in the office area of Yunyi Network Technology Company, He Yun also stood stupidly in place.

Wei Bin and the others looked at the backstage maintenance personnel and were also dumbfounded.

"What's going on? Why did you suddenly drop the connection, Xiao Li, Xiao Zhang, you two hurry up to find the reason! Fast! Fast! ”

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After a period of silence, He Yun couldn't help laughing, he patted his head lightly, but whispered: "I actually have a time when I make mistakes, you He Yun is a people's teacher, how can you perfunctory your students?" What kind of writer do you want to be, you don't want to help with this little thing, what kind of writer are you!

Indeed, as a teacher, the most basic duty is to teach and educate people, and now that Li Yan has asked for advice, how can he be so perfunctory.

Thinking of this, He Yun picked up the manuscript again and began to examine it.

As he examined it, he used a red ink pen to write down his comments on her manuscript paper, including grammatical errors, paragraph layout, and typos, all of which he marked with symbols such as circles.

In the margin of the last page of the manuscript paper, he stopped writing, thought for a moment, and then resumed writing.

In the margin, he wrote a large page of personal opinions, and finally implicitly pointed out the shortcomings and advantages of this book.

.........

The next day, He Yun found a suitable opportunity and called Li Yan outside the classroom.

"Teacher He, are you looking for me? ....... I see, did you finish reading mine? Suddenly, Li Yan seemed to think of something, she raised her eyebrows, and looked at He Yun with a happy face, her eyes full of anticipation.

Facing her expectations, He Yun also smiled suddenly, nodded and said: "Well, after reading it, I have marked some of my own personal opinions, you can take a good look, of course, this is just a little bit of my personal advice, you can use it as a reference, but you don't have to completely follow my advice!" ”

"Teacher He, how can that be! You are a great writer, how can I not listen to your opinions, don't worry, I will read it carefully! Li Yan hurriedly shook her head and said immediately.

However, He Yun listened to her words, but said: "No, no, no, Li Yan, you are wrong, I am a writer, yes, but not a great writer, not to mention, a great writer is not entirely right, if you really want to become a writer, you must remember not to copy the same thing, not only to learn the good side of those excellent writers, but also to have your own things, otherwise, your works will have no soul, because other people's works are always other people's works!" ”

He Yun is deeply aware of this, and he naturally doesn't want Li Yan to go astray.

"Ah...... Mr. He, what did you say..... I got it, I will..... Do what you say! Li Yan listened to He Yun's words, and seemed to understand a little, she nodded, and then said.

"Hmm...... Remember not to read my opinion during class when you go back, so as not to be distracted during class. ”

Speaking of this, He Yun seemed to think of something again, he hesitated, and then said to Li Yan seriously: "Li Yan, the teacher also wants to tell you two sentences, if you really want to become a great writer in the future, you must not give up your studies, there is no problem with creating your own, but your studies are equally important for you, if you can be admitted to university in the future, you can continue to pursue your dreams, the teacher suggests that when you go to college in the future, you can apply for a Chinese major or a literature major." ”

"Teacher He, I understand! I won't disappoint your expectations! ”

Li Yan understood He Yun's advice, and she nodded solemnly at He Yun, feeling very moved.

"That's good, the teacher still has class, let's go first, you take your things and go back to the classroom!"

After saying this, He Yun turned around and left, leaving Li Yan standing in the corridor of the classroom, she looked at He Yun's back, and there was a trace of crystal clear in her eyes.

..........

More than ten days have passed.

Just when He Yun was helping the students review and collecting new materials, the People's Literature magazine sent him a sample issue and a reply letter.

As a national-level magazine, "People's Literature" magazine is different, although the cover looks plain, but there is a lot of things inside.

He Yun looked through it, and he found that there were many classics of "bigwig" level writers published on it.

And He Yun's sci-fi short story "Dream of the Future" is also impressively listed.

Although "Future Dreams" was placed at the bottom of the middle page of the magazine, it was enough for He Yun, a rookie writer.

"Huh? The magazine didn't use my real name? ”

He Yun suddenly wondered, but muttered to himself.

It turned out that at the beginning of the submission, he did not think that "Dream of the Future" would be approved, so in terms of signature, he did not use the new pen name "Man Jianghong", but used the real name "He Yun".

But now, the magazine actually helped him change it and changed it to the pen name "Man Jianghong", which made him a little puzzled.

However, when he read the reply sent with the same issue, he understood.

It turned out that the editor-in-chief of the "People's Literature" magazine considered that using his real name might bring him unnecessary trouble, and most writers used pen names, so the other party helped him sign the pen name "Man Jianghong" without authorization, and the other party also made a special statement and apologized at the end of the letter.

In this regard, He Yun naturally has no opinion, this is originally his own negligence, others help him to correct it, he is grateful that it is too late for others, how can he be angry about this.

.........

In the afternoon, he received another letter with a remittance slip and a reply.

After he opened it, he first picked up the remittance slip and looked at it, and found that there were 235 yuan on the remittance slip, which was 35 yuan more than the manuscript fee sent by the "People's Literature" magazine.

"Tsk...... This "Science Fiction Literature and Art" magazine is really wealthy, and the manuscript fee paid is actually more than that of "People's Literature" magazine! ”

Gu Heyun sighed, but picked up the other reply, glanced at it hurriedly, and put it down.

As he expected, the other party explained all the doubts raised in the last letter he sent in the letter.

Especially this year's Galaxy Awards, oh no! Now it should be called the "Chinese Science Fiction Galaxy Award" (the name was changed later), He Yun realized that the "Galaxy Award" was actually jointly organized by two major units at this time, in addition to the "Science Fiction Literature and Art" magazine, there is also the "Wisdom Tree" magazine.

As for the number of award-winning works, it has not been determined, but the announcement time of the award-winning works has been set, which is about the end of October to the beginning of November this year.

"Huh? How can I still have a request for further submission? Long-form sci-fi? Where did I write this? I still have to write "Qin Shi Mingyue's Sweep of the Six Kingdoms"

After a period of silence, He Yun couldn't help laughing, he patted his head lightly, but whispered: "I actually have a time when I make mistakes, you He Yun is a people's teacher, how can you perfunctory your students?" What kind of writer do you want to be, you don't want to help with this little thing, what kind of writer are you!

Indeed, as a teacher, the most basic duty is to teach and educate people, and now that Li Yan has asked for advice, how can he be so perfunctory.

Thinking of this, He Yun picked up the manuscript again and began to examine it.

As he examined it, he used a red ink pen to write down his comments on her manuscript paper, including grammatical errors, paragraph layout, and typos, all of which he marked with symbols such as circles.

In the margin of the last page of the manuscript paper, he stopped writing, thought for a moment, and then resumed writing.

In the margin, he wrote a large page of personal opinions, and finally implicitly pointed out the shortcomings and advantages of this book.

.........

The next day, He Yun found a suitable opportunity and called Li Yan outside the classroom.

"Teacher He, are you looking for me? ....... I see, did you finish reading mine? Suddenly, Li Yan seemed to think of something, she raised her eyebrows, and looked at He Yun with a happy face, her eyes full of anticipation.

Facing her expectations, He Yun also smiled suddenly, nodded and said: "Well, after reading it, I have marked some of my own personal opinions, you can take a good look, of course, this is just a little bit of my personal advice, you can use it as a reference, but you don't have to completely follow my advice!" ”

"Teacher He, how can that be! You are a great writer, how can I not listen to your opinions, don't worry, I will read it carefully! Li Yan hurriedly shook her head and said immediately.

However, He Yun listened to her words, but said: "No, no, no, Li Yan, you are wrong, I am a writer, yes, but not a great writer, not to mention, a great writer is not entirely right, if you really want to become a writer, you must remember not to copy the same thing, not only to learn the good side of those excellent writers, but also to have your own things, otherwise, your works will have no soul, because other people's works are always other people's works!" ”

He Yun is deeply aware of this, and he naturally doesn't want Li Yan to go astray.

"Ah...... Mr. He, what did you say..... I got it, I will..... Do what you say! Li Yan listened to He Yun's words, and seemed to understand a little, she nodded, and then said.

"Hmm...... Remember not to read my opinion during class when you go back, so as not to be distracted during class. ”

Speaking of this, He Yun seemed to think of something again, he hesitated, and then said to Li Yan seriously: "Li Yan, the teacher also wants to tell you two sentences, if you really want to become a great writer in the future, you must not give up your studies, there is no problem with creating your own, but your studies are equally important for you, if you can be admitted to university in the future, you can continue to pursue your dreams, the teacher suggests that when you go to college in the future, you can apply for a Chinese major or a literature major." ”

"Teacher He, I understand! I won't disappoint your expectations! ”

Li Yan understood He Yun's advice, and she nodded solemnly at He Yun, feeling very moved.

"That's good, the teacher still has class, let's go first, you take your things and go back to the classroom!"

After saying this, He Yun turned around and left, leaving Li Yan standing in the corridor of the classroom, she looked at He Yun's back, and there was a trace of crystal clear in her eyes.

..........

More than ten days have passed.

Just when He Yun was helping the students review and collecting new materials, the People's Literature magazine sent him a sample issue and a reply letter.

As a national-level magazine, "People's Literature" magazine is different, although the cover looks plain, but there is a lot of things inside.

He Yun looked through it, and he found that there were many classics of "bigwig" level writers published on it.

And He Yun's sci-fi short story "Dream of the Future" is also impressively listed.

Although "Future Dreams" was placed at the bottom of the middle page of the magazine, it was enough for He Yun, a rookie writer.

"Huh? The magazine didn't use my real name? ”

He Yun suddenly wondered, but muttered to himself.

It turned out that at the beginning of the submission, he did not think that "Dream of the Future" would be approved, so in terms of signature, he did not use the new pen name "Man Jianghong", but used the real name "He Yun".

But now, the magazine actually helped him change it and changed it to the pen name "Man Jianghong", which made him a little puzzled.

However, when he read the reply sent with the same issue, he understood.

It turned out that the editor-in-chief of the "People's Literature" magazine considered that using his real name might bring him unnecessary trouble, and most writers used pen names, so the other party helped him sign the pen name "Man Jianghong" without authorization, and the other party also made a special statement and apologized at the end of the letter.

In this regard, He Yun naturally has no opinion, this is originally his own negligence, others help him to correct it, he is grateful that it is too late for others, how can he be angry about this.

.........

In the afternoon, he received another letter with a remittance slip and a reply.

After he opened it, he first picked up the remittance slip and looked at it, and found that there were 235 yuan on the remittance slip, which was 35 yuan more than the manuscript fee sent by the "People's Literature" magazine.

"Tsk...... This "Science Fiction Literature and Art" magazine is really wealthy, and the manuscript fee paid is actually more than that of "People's Literature" magazine! ”

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