Whether it is online literature or traditional literature, He Yun has a whole set of his own evaluations, and in his creative career for so many years, he has been constantly improving his whole set of things.

Therefore, in this series of review and scoring, his speed is very fast and accurate.

He did not let his works be shortlisted solely because of the novelty of the subject matter, but evaluated a literary work based on various factors.

(Repeated below)

Teacher's Office.

He Yun was sitting at the desk, he had just opened one of the two homework books, but suddenly heard a knock on the door.

He couldn't help but turn his head to look towards the door, only to see a little girl standing in the doorway looking at him.

"Huh? Isn't this Li Yan, the granddaughter of Township Chief Li? How did she get here? ”

Although he was quite puzzled in his heart, He Yun still put down the homework book in his hand, beckoned to Li Yan who was standing at the door, and said, "Li Yan, why are you here?" Do I have something to do with a teacher? ”

Facing He Yun's inquiry, Li Yan walked over slowly.

At this time, He Yun noticed that she was still holding something in her hand, and when he looked closely, he seemed to think of something, smiled, and said jokingly: "You don't want me to help you straighten it out again, do you?" ”

"Teacher He, you really guessed right, I did come to you to help me read what I wrote." Li Yan held the manuscript in both hands and handed it to He Yun, and replied very sincerely.

She looked at He Yun with expectant eyes like this, and saw that He Yun had no reason to refuse her at all.

So, He Yun had no choice but to take the manuscript and began to read it.

Before that, in fact, he had already given her detailed advice.

He thought that Li Yan would vote out immediately after the change, but he never expected that so far, not only did she not submit it, but she brought it to him again and asked him to help her take a look at it.

"Huh...... Seems interesting? Seems like a brand new story? It's just that...... Why is this routine a little familiar, as if I have seen it somewhere? ”

After reading a few pages of the manuscript, suddenly, He Yun's eyes suddenly lit up, and his face was full of incredulity.

Although the name has not changed, it is still called "The Legend of the Yue Female Swordsman", but the content of this is completely different from what he saw before, and there are many fewer characters in the plot.

Of course, the most important thing is that the plot written here, where did he always feel that he had seen it?

"By the way, I remembered, isn't this the big heroine Mary Sue routine?"

At this moment, He Yun suddenly thought of something, and he recalled that he seemed to have really mentioned such a stroke in the opinion he wrote to her last time.

Although, he just used it as an example at the time, and didn't really ask her to write any plot of the big heroine Mary Sue, but he never expected that this Nizi actually took this as a new entry point, and modified the plot at great length, making the whole film from a dry "martial arts style" to a strong "big heroine Mary Sue style" in an instant.

And in terms of the overall plot, the plot of this version of "The Legend of the Yue Female Swordsman" has also changed dramatically.

Not only is the plot much simpler than the previous version, but the characters, including the male protagonist, male supporting role, female supporting role, etc., and even the enemy, are all as if they have greatly reduced their intelligence, and they have all become the "brush experience" objects of the female protagonist Yue Nu Aqing.

As for the background of the main line, this Nizi is directly based on the famous Wu Yue hegemony in history as the main line of the plot, and the characters include Wu Wangfucha, Yue Wang Goujian, Wu Zixu, Sun Wu, Fan Li and others.

Of course, the famous historical event of lying on the salary and tasting courage was naturally written by her.

Not only that, but some plots even made He Yun happy.

For example, Sun Wu, the god of soldiers, actually gave up Wu for the Yue Nu A Qing, as well as Fan Li, Wu Zixu, etc., including Yue Wang Gou Jian and Wu Wangfucha, they all surrounded Yue Nu Aqing.

On the contrary, Xi Shi, one of the four beauties of ancient times, and Zheng Dan, another great beauty, became the opponents of Yue Nu Aqing.

How big do you think she should be?

To be honest, this made He Yun, an online bookworm who has read countless articles, feel a little ashamed.

"Li Yan, is this really what you wrote?" After reading the manuscript, He Yun couldn't help but look at Li Yan and asked in surprise.

"Of course I wrote it! Mr. He, how is it? My version has enough soul for the work, right? This is something that I wrote after reading more than a dozen magazines, including "Story Club", "Bosom Friend", and "Harvest", after referring to your advice, and wasting a lot of thought. ”

"Uh...... Did you buy so many magazines to write this? He Yun was stunned and said.

At the same time, he sighed in his heart: "It seems that Township Chief Li really loves her granddaughter!" ”

"Yes, I spent all my pocket money to buy these magazines." Li Yan replied, nodded immediately, and then turned her gaze to He Yun.

She continued: "Teacher He, do you think I can publish this? ”

"Uh...... Still...... Okay, with a little bit of revision, I think you can try to contribute! He Yun hesitated for a moment and replied.

Li Yan, who heard this, suddenly jumped up happily: "Yay! I knew I could make it! ”

"That's right! Mr. He, if I want to submit an article, which magazine should I vote for? After Li Yan finished being happy, she seemed to think of something, and then asked He Yun.

When He Yun heard this, he couldn't help but hesitate for a moment, and replied to her: "I think "Bosom Friend" is good, you can give it a try, but I suggest you change the name of this, and the background, you need to set it up." ”

"As for the names of the characters in it...... I think we have to deal with it as well...... In this way, you wait for me for two more days, and this manuscript will be left with me first, and I will give you some revisions, and you will come to me again the day after tomorrow, and after you have finished revising according to my opinions, I will help you send it to the "Bosom Friend" magazine, do you think it's okay? ”

"Okay, then thank you, Mr. He!" As soon as Li Yan heard He Yun's words, she readily agreed.

After Li Yan left happily, He Yun took the manuscript in his hand, but he couldn't help but shake his head slightly, turned around and sat back at his desk.

He hid the manuscript at the bottom of the drawer, picked up the textbook and the new textbook, and got up and left the teacher's office.

When he came to the door of the first class of junior high school, the class bell rang at this time.

He was just about to go in, but he was suddenly stunned for a moment, stopped, and whispered, "Hmm...... I seem to have forgotten to bring my winter vacation homework. ”

"Forget it, let's finish this class and go back to the office!" He Yun muttered again, and finally walked in with the textbook and new textbook.

It's just that what makes him a little strange is that as soon as he stands on the podium, he finds that the atmosphere under the podium is a little weird.

Many of the boys looked down at their feet, as if there was something under the seat.

"What's wrong with all of them? Like a frosted eggplant, wilted? ”

Teacher's Office.

He Yun was sitting at the desk, he had just opened one of the two homework books, but suddenly heard a knock on the door.

He couldn't help but turn his head to look towards the door, only to see a little girl standing in the doorway looking at him.

"Huh? Isn't this Li Yan, the granddaughter of Township Chief Li? How did she get here? ”

Although he was quite puzzled in his heart, He Yun still put down the homework book in his hand, beckoned to Li Yan who was standing at the door, and said, "Li Yan, why are you here?" Do I have something to do with a teacher? ”

Facing He Yun's inquiry, Li Yan walked over slowly.

At this time, He Yun noticed that she was still holding something in her hand, and when he looked closely, he seemed to think of something, smiled, and said jokingly: "You don't want me to help you straighten it out again, do you?" ”

"Teacher He, you really guessed right, I did come to you to help me read what I wrote." Li Yan held the manuscript in both hands and handed it to He Yun, and replied very sincerely.

She looked at He Yun with expectant eyes like this, and saw that He Yun had no reason to refuse her at all.

So, He Yun had no choice but to take the manuscript and began to read it.

Before that, in fact, he had already given her detailed advice.

He thought that Li Yan would vote out immediately after the change, but he never expected that so far, not only did she not submit it, but she brought it to him again and asked him to help her take a look at it.

"Huh...... Seems interesting? Seems like a brand new story? It's just that...... Why is this routine a little familiar, as if I have seen it somewhere? ”

After reading a few pages of the manuscript, suddenly, He Yun's eyes suddenly lit up, and his face was full of incredulity.

Although the name has not changed, it is still called "The Legend of the Yue Female Swordsman", but the content of this is completely different from what he saw before, and there are many fewer characters in the plot.

Of course, the most important thing is that the plot written here, where did he always feel that he had seen it?

"By the way, I remembered, isn't this the big heroine Mary Sue routine?"

At this moment, He Yun suddenly thought of something, and he recalled that he seemed to have really mentioned such a stroke in the opinion he wrote to her last time.

Although, he just used it as an example at the time, and didn't really ask her to write any plot of the big heroine Mary Sue, but he never expected that this Nizi actually took this as a new entry point, and modified the plot at great length, making the whole film from a dry "martial arts style" to a strong "big heroine Mary Sue style" in an instant.

And in terms of the overall plot, the plot of this version of "The Legend of the Yue Female Swordsman" has also changed dramatically.

Not only is the plot much simpler than the previous version, but the characters, including the male protagonist, male supporting role, female supporting role, etc., and even the enemy, are all as if they have greatly reduced their intelligence, and they have all become the "brush experience" objects of the female protagonist Yue Nu Aqing.

As for the background of the main line, this Nizi is directly based on the famous Wu Yue hegemony in history as the main line of the plot, and the characters include Wu Wangfucha, Yue Wang Goujian, Wu Zixu, Sun Wu, Fan Li and others.

Of course, the famous historical event of lying on the salary and tasting courage was naturally written by her.

Not only that, but some plots even made He Yun happy.

For example, Sun Wu, the god of soldiers, actually gave up Wu for the Yue Nu A Qing, as well as Fan Li, Wu Zixu, etc., including Yue Wang Gou Jian and Wu Wangfucha, they all surrounded Yue Nu Aqing.

On the contrary, Xi Shi, one of the four beauties of ancient times, and Zheng Dan, another great beauty, became the opponents of Yue Nu Aqing.

How big do you think she should be?

To be honest, this made He Yun, an online bookworm who has read countless articles, feel a little ashamed.

"Li Yan, is this really what you wrote?" After reading the manuscript, He Yun couldn't help but look at Li Yan and asked in surprise.

"Of course I wrote it! Mr. He, how is it? My version has enough soul for the work, right? This is something that I wrote after reading more than a dozen magazines, including "Story Club", "Bosom Friend", and "Harvest", after referring to your advice, and wasting a lot of thought. ”

"Uh...... Did you buy so many magazines to write this? He Yun was stunned and said.

At the same time, he sighed in his heart: "It seems that Township Chief Li really loves her granddaughter!" ”

"Yes, I spent all my pocket money to buy these magazines." Li Yan replied, nodded immediately, and then turned her gaze to He Yun.

She continued: "Teacher He, do you think I can publish this? ”

"Uh...... Still...... Okay, with a little bit of revision, I think you can try to contribute! He Yun hesitated for a moment and replied.

Li Yan, who heard this, suddenly jumped up happily: "Yay! I knew I could make it! ”

"That's right! Mr. He, if I want to submit an article, which magazine should I vote for? After Li Yan finished being happy, she seemed to think of something, and then asked He Yun.

When He Yun heard this, he couldn't help but hesitate for a moment, and replied to her: "I think "Bosom Friend" is good, you can give it a try, but I suggest you change the name of this, and the background, you need to set it up." ”

"As for the names of the characters in it...... I think we have to deal with it as well...... In this way, you wait for me for two more days, and this manuscript will be left with me first, and I will give you some revisions, and you will come to me again the day after tomorrow, and after you have finished revising according to my opinions, I will help you send it to the "Bosom Friend" magazine, do you think it's okay? ”

"Okay, then thank you, Mr. He!" As soon as Li Yan heard He Yun's words, she readily agreed.

After Li Yan left happily, He Yun took the manuscript in his hand, but he couldn't help but shake his head slightly, turned around and sat back at his desk.