Unconsciously wrote 400,000 words, ending the first volume of the book. Looking back, there are many unsatisfactory places, and there are still some roughness compared to Lao Zhu's expectations. Thinking about it later, that's it, after all, it's an online article, and writing 6,000 words a day is a test for Lao Zhu, although in the team of writers, this speed is not even the last stream.

Even if he can't put all the spirit into it like a short story, Lao Zhu still wants the words to have a vivid beauty and chewable texture, which is more time-consuming than simply pushing the plot.

For example, if a character has a pronoun title, Lao Zhu generally likes to alternate the character name with the pronoun, and the two names are used in turn, and the three names are used in cycles. This is not only for the clarity and fluency of the writing, but also a certain eccentricity of Lao Zhu, seeing the name of the protagonist in some small white texts appear five times in just one sentence, Lao Zhu will feel creepy.

Like what:

At this moment, the head of the Guards decided to face up to his fate.

"Are you ready, mate?" Chope snapped his mask and raised his gun and shield.

"Again!" the dragon knight charged again, charging towards the enigmatic Otherworldly King.

As for the many names that appear in the book, even for the dragon characters, Lao Zhu has a huge database of classified names as a backup, because names are an important part of the character's personality traits.

For example: Chop, the leader of the Guards, Adrian, the dragon knight of the Golden Land, and the two scum supporting characters Bizier and Marshall, the two scum supporting characters in Chapter 46, these names are more typical common names in the British Isles, and they hope to show the tradition and obedience of the golden hammer when they are named.

Back to the text itself, Lao Zhu himself is very fond of musical language, and the words with a beautiful sense of rhythm are pleasing to the eye, see the works of the master Wang Zengqi; Lao Zhu's things are 108,000 miles away, but he also tries to adjust the end of each sentence and paragraph to create a sense of harmony in the rhythm.

For example, this sentence does not appear in the text: the friends are waiting in the drizzling rain with their bags on their backs, and the cherry ferry looks a little gloomy in the light rain, and Jonah takes Siby's luggage, knowing that this will not be an easy journey.

Having said all this, I just want to implore you not to look at ten lines like reading Xiaobaiwen, and to look slowly to find a lot of small interesting details, and it is also a confession to the slow update speed. Lao Zhu spends a lot of time on books every day, and the yield is very low, because Lao Zhu does not want to pursue something excessively and lose his devotion to himself. Is it bitter? But seeing the slowly rising number of favorites and subscriptions, I can't help but feel comforted.

You can see that you are all real readers, thank you for your continued support! Your subscription and various votes are the greatest encouragement to Lao Zhu, with your support, Lao Zhu can continue to walk on the road of tangled alternative online texts, thank you!

In the second volume, a grand stage will unfold in front of Jonah, but Gu Tie will fall deeper and deeper into the mystery, and more and more negotiations will occur between the two worlds, please pay attention to the second volume of "The Throne of the Starry Sky": Sonata?