It's finally finished~

The last chapter is a little late, because the last chapter is very long, and I want to write a testimonial and post it together, so it's so late.

It was supposed to be longer, it had to be more than 10,000 words, but I didn't want to continue to drag it out, so I cut off part of the plot.

The cut part.,I'll write it as a side story when I may have time in the future.,Let's talk about it.。

Let's talk about the book.

This is the first book I signed a contract on, and the results can be described as disastrous.

How miserable is it?

The average is 70, which means that on average only 70 people subscribe to each chapter.

And this,It's still based on the subscription of the first few chapters that are relatively high.,The later chapters are basically subscribed to no more than 10 people per chapter.。

It can be described as a mountain of blood.

The reason for this is probably because starting from the paid chapter, I wrote Zhang Xingyao, the heroine, and then wrote the plot of arresting criminals, attacking Lin'an with Warcraft, and the southwest drill around her, which led to the explosion of results.

Zhang Xingyao, the heroine, can be said to be very unpleasant.

But the reason why I think it's unlikable is not that I designed her to be a tsundere and black-bellied character, but because the plot arrangement is unreasonable.

I'm missing one point - readers have put up with a lot of things in their lives just to relax.

But what did Zhang Xingyao do to the protagonist after he appeared?

Threats, all kinds of wearing small shoes, tricks, fooling him in women's clothes, the protagonist has always been suppressed in front of her.

Even if I write these from a funny point of view, maybe the writing is not in place, and it does not achieve the effect of joy, but makes the reader feel a sense of "this woman is really disgusting, why suppress me" after substitution.

So much so that everyone ignored that Zhang Xingyao immediately protected Chen Qing when he encountered danger and asked him to go first. And other things like that, Zhang Xingyao is good to Chen Qing.

I should have written it differently, I shouldn't have let Chen Qing join Zhang Xingyao's team, I should have joined Shen Nanxi's side.

Then let Zhang Xingyao target Shen Nanxi's team, but every time he was deflated. She is proud, she has always wanted to take revenge, but she has been deflated, and then slowly shows her delicate side.

Tsundere, who is suppressed by the protagonist from beginning to end, may make this character likable.

Probably, I don't know how the reader market will react.

So I wanted to try to focus on "suppression" and write about a heroine with an unpleasant personality.

As a result, there was the later Wanruo dream.

She is rude and willful, does whatever she wants, has no face and no skin, and her thoughts are wild, either in trouble, or on the way to trouble, she is still a salted fish who does not seek progress, and she is the sister of Wan Fusheng, a villain male partner.

The debuffs were stacked, but she was suppressed by Chen Qing all the time, spanking and screaming, and she also lost the first time in the prank.

I don't know if this character is likable or not, because at that time, my subscription was already miserable, and I couldn't tell through the data that the results were collapsing, and there was really no collapse.

But I personally like this heroine.

Her out-of-the-box thinking patterns are playful.

Although she has all kinds of shortcomings, she digs out her heart and lungs for those who recognize.

When Zhang Xingyao was about to be eaten by the demonic beast, she was so scared that she died, but she trembled and ran to dig her out of the rubble;

When she and Song Ningning fell into the desperate situation of being rounded up, she was still scared to death, but she said to Song Ningning, I will be the bait, you take the opportunity to escape;

When the catastrophe of the destruction of the world was shrouded, she was also very afraid, but she said to Dong Qingcheng, I will not leave, I will accompany you to live and die together.

"Afraid" is human nature, she never thinks of herself as a glorious person, but she has been making glorious choices, I feel that writing like this will make her seem more real.

The same truth is also reflected in her three-minute heat - every time she says that she wants to work hard, she doesn't want to do anything more, but as soon as she turns her head and returns to a stable environment, this thing has become a salted fish lying flat again.

That's what people are, aren't they?

It doesn't matter if she's likable or not, I like it anyway, anyway, the book's grades have already collapsed, anyway, I'm generating electricity for love, so I'm going to write like this, so friends who read it all the way will find that Wan Ruomeng really has a lot of scenes, haha.

Speaking of which, I've talked about the two heroines, so let's talk about the other heroines.

Song Ningning, this heroine has almost no sense of existence.

I even wanted to hide her directly, because there was really no role for her. It is probably that Chen Qing can appear in the plot of his junior year with his younger brothers and sisters.

But because of the grades, this book is really not profitable, and I am a part-time author, so I am busy, so I don't want to write too many small task storylines to lengthen the length.

Therefore, she has no role.

But there are readers who have always remembered her, and some mentioned it in the comments, hey~

Originally, there weren't many readers, so I naturally had to consider the readers' opinions, so I rearranged her in the plot of Liberty City, and later accepted it.

Shen Nanxi, the scene where Senior Sister Nanxi was included in the harem was quite abrupt, and some readers complained, that's it?

In fact, her plot was not like this, mainly because the outline was changed.

Remember that villain force? ○○Teach.

Do you remember the Holy Girl Tong?

She lurked beside Shen Nanxi, and there was originally a big plot.

But, at that time, I was suddenly blocked a chapter. I asked the editor, and the editor said that the reason was that it involved endoscopic oblique teaching. (It's not a typo~)

Good guys, my god......

How dare you continue to write this?

So everyone has also seen that after chapter 254, the villain force will be hidden, alas~

This is what caused Shen Nanxi, a heroine who appeared very early, to have no drama for a long time.

But a person like Senior Sister can't just quit, right? So later it was more dog-tailed mink.

It's not my reason, it's really helpless.

Let's talk about Elvia, in fact, I want to write it according to Connor in "The Dragon Maid of the Kobayashi Family", three no Lori, snacks.

Originally, I wasn't going to let the protagonist take her.

But after all, I still accepted it, which can be regarded as letting go of myself and satisfying my love for the dragon lady.

Even, I was going to take the queen in.

Mother and daughter are coming to eat rice~

Eating is mostly a beautiful ...... Ahem, am I such a perverted person?

Of course not! (Awe-inspiring)

So confiscated.

Finally, let's talk about Dong Qingtang.

She should be the most likable heroine in design, and the personal tips she receives are the most of all the characters, far more than the others.

As the heroine of the first order, she undoubtedly has the appearance of a country and a city, but at the same time, she is a blind person.

Beauty + blindness, which makes her naturally have a feeling of being pitied by readers.

But the blind man itself is a kind of handicap, which will become Dong Qingtang's shortcoming, so there is a setting that a fifth-order non-human can reshape the body.

This setting was set up for her, and with this setting, her shortcomings are gone.

It can be said that as soon as she appeared, she was a heroine template full of positive buffs.

This also led to the fact that some readers abandoned the book one after another when they found out that there were many heroines in the book.

Even, Zhang Xingyao's unlikability is inseparable from Dong Qingtang.

Readers may think that I subscribed to see Dong Qingtang, and you suddenly inserted a Zhang Xingyao in, inexplicably, who is this woman?

So I still have to admit my mistake again, I should put Chen Qing into Shen Nanxi's team and go through various tasks with Dong Qingcheng.

Zhang Xingyao's appearance at that time was really inappropriate, alas~

Another point that Dong Qingcheng is flattering is that after a long period of love, she took the initiative to confess, well, or rather, forcibly let Chen Qing confess herself.

It's tiring enough to chase girls in reality.,Of course, I want my sister to chase the protagonist.,That's cool.,There's a sense of substitution.。

Finally, let's talk about this book.

More than 1.6 million words, the first time I wrote such a long book, the first time I persevered and finished a book.

Although it is a horse, it can't make any money.

But at least there is still some thinking and harvest on how to structure a long book, how to design characters, and how to ambush the pen.

For example, the foreshadowing of the tear crystal has been buried for so long, did anyone think of its real role before the finale was revealed?

Do you think that opening the passage in the Three Saints Kunlun Palace is its real function?

Do you think that suppressing the high-dimensional consciousness in Dong Qingtang's body is its real effect?

Hehe, I didn't expect it, it's the key to saving the world!

(Forked waist, bullish coaxing.) Don't tell me you've thought of it a long time ago, I don't listen, I just want to be self-absorbed)

That's all that's been said, it's longer than a chapter, so that's it, we'll see you in the next book.

The next book should be the Reiki revival class in a modern context.

The reason why there is a "should" is because I am too busy to know if the editor will give me a manuscript, and the manuscript may be killed.

But no matter what the subject matter, I still have to write more heroines, but it won't be as many as there are 6 in this book.

Greedy and chewy, too much, in fact, the pen and ink scattered on each heroine are not enough, whether it is character building or plot development, it is actually a restriction.

Well, see you in August, well, if nothing else.

If you like this book, if you like my style, remember to support it when the time comes~