I am the author of "Dream of Red Mansions", and I would like to ask the 586 book friends who have collected this book so far to take a leave of absence to change the structure of this book.

The signing of this book is accidental, and the editor greatly sees that my writing is acceptable, and gives me a chance.

But there are indeed many problems with this book so far. Today, I looked at the first comment in the book circle, and the book commented that there are problems such as high opening and low walking in this book, and I deeply agree.

I'm new and this is my first book, and there are a lot of questions.

1. The portrayal of the male protagonist is bland, without any memory points that are beneficial to the reader.

Second, the gold finger is dispensable, and there is no necessity.

Third, the writing is too peaceful, the rhythm is not well mastered, and there is no climax or cool point.

Fourth, and has a good background but no turning point, which deepens the poison point of the collapse of the male protagonist's image.

This is not the story of the Red Chamber in my imagination, so it must be changed, overhauled.

A large part of the updates in the past few days are self-justifying because they have not made up their minds to change. This book is a seedling, and it is still in the recommended position this week, so I am a little reluctant in my heart.

But today that book friend called me, please give me some time, I will let you see a different story. This is my first book, I will not abandon the book and reopen it, I will not finish it, I hope to accumulate some good character for me, and it is worthy of the book friends who collected "The Red Chamber".

Finally, I would like to express my gratitude again for your continued support.

My, our story continues......

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