Originally, if you write a book, you will write a book, what kind of testimonials will you make, who will read it?

But I've been very confused lately, and I chatted with the editor today, found out where my problem was, and couldn't help but say a few words.

First of all, let's talk about the original intention of writing this book, what do we work so hard to write books for every day?

A: Make money!

Yes, I am a layman, I don't have lofty ideals, and I don't want to speak on behalf of the saints, I just want to make some money by writing this book, and then go to the emperor supreme...... No, it's a KFC Crazy Thursday, that's all.

Choosing Tumubao to start is just one of many, many choices, not that Zhu Qizhen has any personality charm, on the contrary, this person is nothing in history except for abolishing the funeral.

Why did you choose this opening?

Historical novels, the main purpose of which is to make up for the regrets in history, the two biggest regrets of the Ming Dynasty, one is the death of the country at the end of the Ming Dynasty, and the other is the civil fort.

Most people choose Chongzhen to start, in fact, I also thought about it, but I was not familiar enough with the history of the late Ming Dynasty and was not ready, so I retreated to the next best thing and chose Tumubao.

This is a historical event that almost cut off the entire Ming Dynasty, if we personally substitute for ourselves, we are under the siege of the Warat army, what will we do?

Someone said that he committed suicide on the spot and let Zhu Qiyu succeed him.

No problem!

In fact, this is how history works, although Zhu Qizhen did not commit suicide on the spot, but Zhu Qiyu is responsible for a series of operations after Tumubao.

Well, let's get off to hell!

Now that the protagonist is you, it's Zhu Qizhen, you have to change your life against the sky and turn the tide, doesn't it sound exciting?

On the contrary, if Zhu Qizhen had not been captured, wouldn't his reputation have been so bad?

After talking about the beginning, let's talk about the major "poisonous points" of this book, let's not talk about the small ones, just talk about the big ones, which are the ones that are sprayed the most by everyone.

The first is to open the gates of the city and save the people.

Let me explain why this is happening.

In fact, it is to pave the way for the lone army to go deep into the desert behind, and the plot of going deep into the desert has been designed, and then there is a section of opening the city gate, by the way, the original plan was to defend Juyong Pass, and for the plot later, it was changed to Badaling.

Some people say that the city gates cannot be opened, otherwise the casualties will be more serious.

It was also said that if the emperor made this start, the generals behind him would have to do it, and the result would be either the loss of the city or the loss of their lives.

It's no problem, everyone's starting point is very practical, I can only say that I didn't handle it well here, it was too blunt.

But it can't be changed, because if it is changed here, the plot behind it will not be able to be carried out.

All in all, I apologize to all of you!

The second, on the grassland, chops the grass and does not remove the roots.

In fact, the original plot here is relatively simple, that is, to let go of these "burdens" that have no production capacity, so that they can consume more resources of the Warat people, and at the same time, they can also act as a leading party to help the plot move forward.

The problem is that this place is entrained with private goods.

I used nearly 2,000 words to describe that the protagonist in order to preserve the humanity in the hearts of the soldiers of the 3,000 battalions, prevent them from becoming murderous beasts, and finally become a full white lotus image.

Regardless of the original intention, it is really not handled well here, and I apologize again!

The third, the two emperors are in the same dynasty.

As for what to do with Zhu Qiyu, I thought of several plans.

Or, let him rebel, and then fail, and be exiled;

Either let him become a vassal, or take all the soldiers and horses to expand the territory;

After thinking about it, he finally decided to stay, because the protagonist is going to continue to fight next, and it is not okay for the Jingshi to be guarded by no one, after all, Zhu Jianshen is only two years old and is still breastfeeding.

In the later stage, a series of reforms will be carried out in the clan, and Zhu Qiyu has a special identity and must stand up and set an example.

As for the treatment here that everyone is not satisfied with, then ...... Apologies again!

The editor's words touched me deeply, there is no right or wrong plot, and private goods can also be entrained, the key is the way to deal with it.

Make a promise today, if you encounter something that doesn't please your eyes, please spray it casually, I promise, don't delete posts, don't block it, and fully accept everyone's criticism!

As for the previous plot, I really can't change it, I'll work hard in the back!

Finally, a little more spoiler, the second volume has a lot of content and is very scattered, but an important plot is to find out the traitor who had an affair with the Warats in the first place, and then all of them are gone!

Alas, when I code words, my hand speed is to death, and I can write a testimonial of more than 1,000 words casually, and I am too wasteful......

Finally, I will be cheeky and kneel down to beg for your support, if you have a monthly ticket recommendation ticket, please vote for your face, thank you for your support!!