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No leaf book friend said

The book written by the author is too miscellaneous, thinking that the author wants to write everything, but he has not written anything well, and he does not understand what kind of point the author wants to express. (The author agrees with this, and the author feels this way.) ）

Here's what you can explain.

The author wrote five lines, one is the academic imperial examination, the second is decryption, the third is development, the fourth is physical and mental growth, and the fifth is pickling girls. In fact, the sixth article will be interspersed with the army later.

There are also various personal emotions in the dark line. and mixed with the intrigue of each person.

The real main line is to accumulate its own heritage through various potentials.,It's like this every few chapters.,From this point of view,It's basically with this line.,Everything else is a branch line.。

The author is a little ambitious, almost going hand in hand, interspersed with some small knowledge of Chinese history and culture. Light and dark play with each other.

Basically, each chapter contains more than three of them, so it's a bit cluttered.

The author's level is limited, which may make book lovers a little unclear.

The main reason is that there are too few cool points that can be written now, or the plot set up by the author does not write the cool points that book friends like.

But the set age is too young.,This is a hard injury.,For example, I can't write about pickling girls or something.,But it's not okay if you don't write it now.。

I would like to ask the book friends to give their opinions, and then focus on what to write.

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