Received a comment saying I'm water.

This is a very normal thing, after all, many readers say that I water.

But this time is different.

He hit the nail on the head and pointed out my problem.

"There are too many explanations in the text."

It dawned on me.

Write a story, not an explanation, and the setting should be revealed from the story, not spoken.

I don't know when I walked into this misunderstanding, but I couldn't see the truth clearly in the fog.

Readers who can insist on seeing this book are either really hungry for food, or they have some kind of inexplicable expectation for this book, or some are pure pastime.

But no matter what, Fat Tangerine is here to apologize to you first.

I'm a novice writer with little experience, so it's inevitable that I'll make some mistakes, and I'm very happy that readers can point out my mistakes and get me on the right path and not deviate from the original trajectory.

(Don't touch the bars who pick the thorns!) ）

The author and the reader, in themselves, complement each other, and are an independent and unified whole.

Thank you very much for this time.

In the following stories, I will try to change this way of writing, tell as much of the story as possible, and incorporate the content of the explanation into the story, rather than spending a lot of pen and ink on writing it specifically.

In the early days, there may be similar situations where the writing is not fluent due to the change of writing style, and there are some unclear plots, but this is a normal phenomenon, and I hope that readers will bear with me.

I said from the beginning that whether this book is popular or not, whether it makes money or not is a secondary issue, what I want is just to put aside the old thief in Jiangnan and put an end to my youth.

I certainly wouldn't say I don't want to make money because that's a stupid cup.

But that's not the main purpose.

Write the story that belongs to my dragon clan and the story that belongs to Gu Bei.

So the protagonist of this book is not Lu Mingfei who has returned from various worlds, but Gu Bei.

To a certain extent, Gu Bei represents my imagination of that time, that world, and that story.

So this story, I will definitely tell it to the end.

To do this, I need to keep improving and learning.

Now that I have the support of my readers, I have more motivation to keep going.

I can't guarantee that the end of the road will be a sea of gorgeous flowers, but I thank you for witnessing the ups and downs and thorns along the way.

- From a fat orange who always wants to hydrate and procrastinate.

Why is it silent