1. Achievement report

This book was released on the 19th of this month, with an initial order of 4200 and a starting average of 3200.

At present, the average booking score is 6800, and the 24-hour follow-up is about 4800~5200.

This month's monthly ticket also reached 4,200 votes, ranking tenth on the list of new book monthly tickets.

Thank you all for your support.

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2. Description

I'm an author who is easily influenced by readers' comments.

This chapter of each book says that I basically don't leave a single article behind, I read every one, and even reply seriously to some comments.

However, it will also be affected by some comments, which will lead to changes to the subsequent plot.

I actually had this problem with the first two books.

Especially when it comes to advancing the emotional line.

The first up master often complains.,Why don't the male and female protagonists live together and don't kiss directly.,Don't go directly to it.。

Then kissed, got on, and each ushered in a wave of short climaxes, and then the chase plummeted.

It's a similar situation when I'm a senior sister in the second book.。

Some people complained that the senior sisters were so obvious, why didn't they confess, they didn't kiss, they didn't go on.

The script is pretty much the same anyway.

The peak period of Senior Sister's book was the plot that was confessed when it was first put on the shelves, and the grades never rose again after that.

This is of course related to the limitations of the dog food article, but it is also related to my own lack of firmness, and I always move the climactic plot arranged in the original outline forward as soon as my heart is soft, resulting in problems with the length and rhythm all the time.

This new book has actually improved.

On the one hand, in order to deal with the shortcomings of the dog food text itself, I have made two changes.

The first is to introduce a strong main line of business lines, with the business line of rebirth as the main line, interspersed with the emotional lines that you are good at, and the two complement each other and can support a more substantial outline.

The second is to make changes to the two heroines, and the emotional lines of the two heroines are entangled with each other, so that there will be no situation where the single heroine dog food article blindly promotes a single emotional line and leads to the lack of cool points in the later stage.

On the other hand, this new book did not deliberately move the subsequent climactic plot forward in order to cater to the readers' voices.

Including the commercial main plot of the first mobile game laid down all the way, as well as the two heroine emotional lines that wander around the main line, they have been controlled so far.

My only problem is that I'm susceptible to reader comments.

Especially when I see that some readers always judge the protagonist's behavior from God's perspective, they will always try their best to cut from the protagonist's perspective and make readers realize the reasonableness of the protagonist's behavior.

Then there is a deep sense of powerlessness every time I explain it.

Because readers are reading books from the perspective of God, everyone comes to relax when they come to read online articles, and few people are willing to put themselves in the protagonist's shoes when reading online articles.

Especially when the author does not have the pen power to ensure that the reader can fully resonate with the protagonist's behavior, most readers will only judge the protagonist's behavior from their own three views and God's perspective.

This is the same as when you watch the LOL professional game, you are looking at the overall perspective perspective, you are clear about the movements of both sides of a hero, and after seeing a hero on the opposite side being singlely caught, he bluntly said "This person is really a few dishes".

But in fact, in the one-sided perspective, the person who was caught by the single may be playing a horror game, and before he could operate it, he was killed by a set of fire in just one or two seconds, and there was no room for manipulation at all.

In the eyes of God, the audience knows very well that as long as the contestants do what they do, they can perfectly circumvent this.

Reading is actually pretty much the same.

The author must start from the perspective of each character to ensure the rationality and logic of each character's actions, and on this basis, to ensure the drama and conflict of the plot.

All I can say is that I've done the best I can so far.

Even in the text of the previous chapter, he elaborated on the three reasons why he can't fall in love with Yan Chi Vinegar from the perspective of the protagonist.

But readers will only look at the problem from God's point of view, or even directly from the author's point of view, bluntly saying that "in fact, it is the author who hangs his appetite", "if it weren't for the author, I would definitely be in the morning", "they are all reborn and can't even handle this little thing?" ”。

It's actually a bit of a trick.

Because any plot is artificially created by the author.

It's not so much that I have an appetite, but that the image of Yan Chi Vinegar I created in the early stage is too easy to arouse the sympathy and protection of some readers, so that when I think of this book as the author's appointed double heroine, I can't wait to kill the protagonist.

When I think of this, I probably feel a little better.

Because in the middle of the term, maybe Xu Niannian will also have such treatment.

OK, it's much more comfortable to express your heart.

Anyway, the book will not change the outline because of the reader's voice.

The progress of the career line and the emotional line are clearly arranged in the outline, you can scold if you want to, anyway, I won't change it.

It's a big deal that every time I see a comment scolding me, I delete it and throw it into the deleted comment post in the book friend circle, and then turn my head to find a few popular fire books with a big controversy at the beginning, open the first chapter, and see how ruthless the readers scold.

Look at the results of others, I was scolded so much at the beginning, and I still made a lot of manuscript fees.

When I think about it, I feel much more comfortable.

In the future, I won't explain the reasons for the protagonist's behavior in the text.,If you like to think, you can think for yourself.,If you don't want to think, just scold it.。

Anyway, I was still scolded after I explained, so it was better to just lie flat, and I could still have a few words less.

In order to add explanatory content to the text, I wrote five or six thousand words in the last chapter today, and I lost a lot of money, and my waist was protesting with me.

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3. Follow-up updates

At present, there are more than 40 chapters owed, and by the end of September, it is estimated that the average order will be able to rise.

Therefore, the actual owe is more likely to keep me from day to day until the end of the month.

However, considering the level of consumption of the outline, I can still take two to three days off in the middle, and only update 4,000 words in these days, and I will add new outlines in the extra time.

The specific time of leave depends on the speed of my current detailed outline.

If you look at it now, it should still be able to hold out for a while.

I basically wake up at 7 a.m. and finish my first chapter by 10 a.m.

I took a nap until one o'clock at noon, and finished the second chapter by five o'clock in the afternoon.

Then finish dinner and try to finish the third chapter by ten o'clock in the evening.

Today, there are about 14,000 words in the main text, which is quite desperate.

When my last book first hit the shelves, it was 10,000 words, and this one will have a lot more every time.

So in fact, it may be ten thousand days a day, and the number of words is more than 40,000.

I hope you can see my diligence, and don't always scold me in this chapter, that will only affect my motivation to code words, and there is nothing good else.

It's better to praise me more, I saw you praise me, and I was full of the motivation of code words all of a sudden, maybe one day I will be happy to hit 20,000 words or something.

I feel that in the past few days, because the biological clock is also relatively healthy, and I have been switching codewords back and forth in three postures of standing, sitting and lying down, so I have slowly become accustomed to this speed.

If the state and mood of the day are really good, in the case of full-time, I feel that 20,000 words can really be tried.

But I'll just say it, don't take it seriously.

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Let's talk about it here today, make a simple summary every month in the future, and concentrate everything I want to say here, so I won't talk to you in the comments, it's tiring.

Above.

Honey Ji thank you.