100 10,000 words of analysis of the deleted kiss scene

Studios.

The filming location of the crew of "Glory Family" was silent.

Everyone watched the girl's back as she left and then gradually disappeared from view, and it took a while to react and look at each other.

For the first time, Teacher Xu took the initiative to say to Sheng Yuan that they would play together, this is a treatment that even the heroine Ling Lan has never had, and then Sheng Yuan said something-

She said.

Not available.

She's going back and cooking.

Crowd: Exscuse me?

Yes, they didn't hear it wrong at all, Sheng Kite rejected Xu Lizhi because she wanted to go back - to cook.

, it's a bit of a drag.

……

Xu Lizhi stood in place, on an indifferent face that was deeper than ordinary Asians, with no emotion, and his silver-gray eyes were so deep that he couldn't see clearly.

*

The crew next door at the other end.

Xiaozhou found that today's inkstone was a little abnormal.

During the intermission, I kept looking at my phone, as if I was waiting for some news, and I was afraid of waiting for some news.

A contradictory state of expectation and hesitation.

Xiaozhou scratched the back of his head, and just wanted to take out his mobile phone to send a message to Sister Sheng Yuan to explain Brother Yan's situation.

Shi Yan's phone rang.

It's the phoneβ€”

The young man's slender hand grasped the mobile phone, and the black of the mobile phone shell was proportional to the skin on the back of his hand, making his skin more and more cold and white, as clean as flawless cold jade.

When he saw the number on the caller ID, his cold and restrained black eyes lit up for a moment.

Then he got up and left with his phone.

Xiaozhou: Eh, eh, Brother Yan! Why don't you fight here, is there anything he can't hear!!

……

Presidential Suite.

The style is very modern, and the semi-open kitchen is not luxurious.

The soup in the pot is bubbling hot, and the thick and appetizing aroma of shiitake mushrooms fills the air.

Sheng Kite puts the thinly sliced beef into another small wok, fried with minced garlic next to it, holding a wooden spatula in one hand and a mobile phone between his right ear and neck.

A tone rings in the earpiece for a successful call.

But the person on the other end of the phone did not speak, it was quiet.

I don't know if it's because of apprehension or what.

Sheng Yuan couldn't help but smile and asked softly, "Shi Yan, the thing you said that would make me angry, that's it?" ”

The sound of the young man's clear breathing came into the eardrum slightly, and after a few seconds, he said, "You, finished reading?" ”

"I'm done."

Sheng Kite stir-fried the beef slices in the pot

In the small living room behind the girl, there was a light-colored envelope on top of the coffee table, which had been opened.

Sheng Yuan raised her eyebrows, remembering the contents of the envelope-

The handwritten analysis of the two characters of Shi Jue and Song Yunan is almost 10,000 words.

From the relationship diagram of the characters, to the personalities of the characters, to the entanglements between the characters.

The analysis couldn't be more comprehensive.

Throughout the article, the final conclusion is -

On page 15 of the script, the kiss scene between Shi Jue and Song Yunan in the 20th line of the eighth paragraph is unnecessary.

It doesn't fit the setting, it doesn't follow the logic.

Deleting it would be more appropriate and appropriate.

Sheng Kite read all the words.

……

β€œβ€¦β€¦ After reading it, then what? ”

The young man's originally magnetic voice was a little anxious and uncertain.

She finished reading the analysis.

Does she think that's right?

If she thinks he is right, then she should communicate with the director of her crew and delete the kiss scene.

He barely slept last night.

I studied the script for almost a night, and I read it repeatedly.

He didn't wait for the girl on the other end of the line to answer him.

Shi Yan immediately continued.

"I just accidentally saw your script yesterday and thought something was wrong there, so I opened it and read it."

β€œβ€¦β€¦ I didn't mean to. ”

"That analysis...... I analyzed it entirely based on the character setting of the script. ”

I didn't hear the girl's voice.

The Adam's apple in Shi Yan's neck rolled nervously slightly, and his voice was obviously lowered.

"But everyone has their own opinion, and that's just my personal opinion, if you have another understanding and don't think my analysis is necessary, then-"

"It's really not necessary," she said. ”

The teenager's emotions unconsciously tensed a little.

In the next second, the girl's sweet voice continued to sound: "Because, that kiss scene was deleted long before the filming started." ”

Shi Yan was stunned, he didn't expect things to be like this, and he was slightly surprised.

"Before filming, deleted it?"

"Well, yes, it's deleted, I won't shoot it again."

She then added: "I don't make kiss scenes." ”

"Oh."

The boy held the phone to his ear and stood in a no-man's corner, the corners of his sexy thin lips curled up a slight arc, and his voice was still not undulating, but he could feel that the slightly sunken atmosphere became relaxed in an instant.

β€œβ€¦β€¦β€

"So, do you mean I'm going to be angry, is that it?"

β€œβ€¦β€¦ Well. ”

"Shi Yan, I'm not angry." The girl clearly told her in a soft voice that she was more concerned about another point: "Have you been writing this for a long time?" I remember that it was almost half past nine when you got off the show yesterday, did you go to bed very late? ”

Shi Yan's face did not change and lied: "No, just for a while, I will write casually in idleness,"

"Next time, you don't have to do this, you can just come and tell me."

He was silent for another two or three seconds: "...... Tell you, will you change your mind? ”

On the other end of the phone, the girl's tone was crisp and determined: "Of course." ”

"Oh." Gao Leng replied with one word, and it couldn't be hidden in the words - faintly happy.

"Ah, Shi Yan! I won't tell you yet, I'll have to hang up first! The girl suddenly exclaimed.

Shi Yan frowned suddenly, and just wanted to ask what was wrong, the phone was hung up, and then he heard Xiaozhou calling his name behind him.

It was the director who shouted that he was going to continue filming the next scene.

……

Sheng Kite put his phone next to him.

Looking at the burnt beef in the pot, he rubbed his eyebrows a little distressed.

Ah, it seems that you can't talk to the cubs on the phone when you're cooking in the future.

As soon as I heard his voice, I couldn't concentrate at all.

In the past two days, she has learned to cook from several chefs, and since she learned desserts, she has been stable, and even the chefs praise her for her talent.

But who would have thought that he would make a phone call to the cub and overturn.

She sighed and was about to dump the beef in the trashβ€”

……

Zhang Bai followed Xuyang's waiter to take the elevator from the exclusive passage of the presidential suite.

I was a little excited.

Ah, I haven't seen the little ancestor for a few days, and I don't know if the little ancestor is doing well.

I don't know if the little ancestor wants to give him a salary increase?

"Please come in."

The waiter knew that Miss Sheng was cooking at this time every day, so he opened the presidential suite in 6665 for him.

"Little Ancestor~~~"

Zhang Bai was as gray as a butterfly, and then when he saw the girl who was cooking in the kitchen, the whole person stiffened suddenly, and froze in place-

His gaze fell on the carbon-like thing in the wok in horror and slowly, and his voice almost trembled: "Little Ancestor, what is this?" ”

Sheng Kite was inexplicable: "Beef." ”

……

The waiter was about to leave after sending Zhang Bai in, but before he could turn around, a man's panicked roar came from inside the house: "Run!" There's a beef bomb here!! ”

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