Although this title looks like it means to prepare to run away, please rest assured, our pit products are still guaranteed, at least not eunuchs.

This is to summarize some of the questions in the book so far, and to respond to the readers' opinions in a unified manner.

But before I do that, let me make a statement beforehand—

First.

I have no intention of offending any genuine readers, even if you scold me for scolding the plot and scolding the characters, it is your right as a genuine reader.

Therefore, the content of this letter is in no way aimed at the reader, but only as a self-summary and reflection.

Second.

I deleted the book reviews recently, and it has nothing to do with the management of the operation team.

My management is only responsible for the review of the whole subscription group and the management order in the group.,Book friends circle and this chapter say that I don't let them delete comments and ban words.。

Third.

I have been silent, not because of the so-called "chicken floating", "arrogant", "ten thousand orders will not treat readers as people", "I think I am very awesome".

It's just that there are too many people scolding.,Every day the background opens a little comment.,Dozens or hundreds of them are scolding me.,It affects the mentality of the code word.,I can't hold it back, so I can only pretend to be dead.。

In the past, I would refute what you sprayed me, but why didn't you refute it later? Because I know that the plot you squirted is indeed something wrong with what I wrote, and I can't refute it.

But I can't refute the situation when I see you spraying me every day, spraying back and forth, spraying back and forth, my mentality is really a little unbearable, so I can only delete the comments to find a quiet.

As a result, because of the deletion of comments but did not do the extreme treatment of banning, it caused the rebellion of some readers, and the more you delete it, the more I have to say it...... So I didn't read this chapter during this time, so I just deleted the bad reviews in the book friend circle.

To clarify here.

I'm just not very good at psychological acceptance, so in the face of a large number of "correct and irrefutable" comments, I can only delete the comments to protect myself, in order to maintain my code word motivation, otherwise I have been thinking about bad reviews in my head, and I basically can't type words for hours while sitting in front of the computer.

I'm a cheap person.,I want to click on the comments at every turn.,I know it's definitely a bad review but I just can't help it.,It's better to finally be able to hold back and not read it now.。

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The above explains the recent negative reviews and recent deletion of reviews.

Next is the stage of sorting out the plot issues and reasons, and the specific reasons why I don't respond to bad reviews.

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1. The plot during the summer vacation in the book

This plot from the beginning to the opening report of chapter 118 has a total of more than 400,000 words.

Purely in terms of plot structure and content arrangement, this part is the plot I am most satisfied with.

But if you look back now, the root of the problem is actually here.

Because of the writing inertia of the heroines of the previous two dog food lists, at the beginning of this book, I quickly heated up the ambiguous stage between the male and female protagonists.

As a result, when the first game was finished, Yan Chi Vinegar had almost reached the point where it was difficult to end up with Xu Xing "if you don't fall in love immediately".

And in this, a better way to deal with it should be to maintain Yan Chi Vinegar when she came to the door to be a model for the first time, please ask Yao Yuanyuan to make a phone call every half an hour to confirm her safety and vigilance persona, and she should not let the relationship heat up so quickly.

Even if Xu Xing is really good to her, but with her family experience, the most she should stop at thanking, and it doesn't hurt to have a little affection, but it shouldn't be "soft" so quickly.

The plot of emotional warming, if it is placed in college, will be more reasonable and more in line with the rhythm of the book.

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2. The plot from the beginning of the university to the National Day in October

This plot goes from chapter 118 to chapter 170, about 250,000 words.

From here, there are actually quite a few problems.

The first is the admission of new characters from the university brought about by changing the map, which itself needs to be foreshadowed and excessive.

My approach is two.

First, in the plot during the summer vacation, Yu Youjia, Xue Weiqiang and Wang Jiaxin were paved in advance as an anchor point for acquaintances after entering the university.

The second is to arrange for the climactic plot of Fruit Assassin to explode here, which allows readers to accept the plot of the climax part of the career line while making it easier for readers to stay and accept the foreshadowing of the new characters in college.

By this time, in fact, everything was fine, at most, in the handling of the climactic plot of the fruit assassin on the shelves, I still seemed relatively immature.

In addition to Li Zhibin, a good brother, and Xu Niannian, a sister who is still in the dark, there are only two pineapple company auditors in the Americas.

That is, I did not provide specific "villains".

The contemporaneous games against the Fruit Assassin, such as the plot of the Exotic Sword, I almost brushed it off.

If it is changed to a normal business article, this part is actually the content that should be capitalized and close-up.

It's just that because the creation of villains has always been my weakness, I was negligent at the time, and with the high-intensity update of Riwan, I directly brought it over.

After that, it was the studio's expansion to recruit people, Xu Yi and Xu Niannian learned the truth, and the domestic version of the fruit assassin was released, which was plagiarized by Tengxin Studio.

The problem in this area is actually obvious, the studio is expanding, Xu Yi and Xu Niannian should actually be separated, and there is no need to drag it out so much.

In addition to the shock and pretending demand, Xu Yi's side is more to pave the way for the follow-up to make up for the high-end talents of Qunxing Company.

And Xu Niannian here is a showdown climax plot that has been paved since the early stage.

The two overlap together, and when you read it, it will seem to be slow, and it is not cool enough.

If they are separated, in fact, both sides of the plot will have a better experience, and it also buries the information gap that Xu Niannian and Xu Yi don't know each other to join Xu Xing's company, and they can continue to use this to make a fuss in the future.

In addition to this plot, the rest is the Tengxin plagiarism incident, as well as the production of the secret escape mobile game that paved the way for the follow-up career line, and the plot of Zhang Nong's takeaway.

Among them, Tengxin's plagiarism is a simple plot structure of pretending to be forced to slap the face, which can be regarded as my attempt at the face-slapping villain, and the effect is actually average.

In retrospect, the plot about the confrontation between the two sides was still a little too bland, and there were too few direct conversations and exchanges between the two sides, which failed to provide more direct emotional points, resulting in a slap in the face as if there was a layer in between.

The ability of this area still needs to be improved.

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3. The plot during the National Day

Chapters 170 to 180, about seventy or eighty thousand words.

This paragraph is singled out because of some problems caused by the follow-up plot, and the direct causes are basically here.

First of all, in terms of business lines, because of the large amount of investment in Kyoto, the business territory was suddenly too large, and the cool points in each field were so spread out that it was easy to distract readers.

This is because this is the first time I am writing a business article, and I can still accept such a mistake, after all, it is a route designed before the book is opened, and there is nothing to say.

But in the emotional line, the problem is bigger.

When I talked about the first 400,000 words above, I said that the plot advanced the relationship between Yan Chi Vinegar and Xu Xing too quickly.

So in the middle of the 200,000-word career climax and transition stage, I slowed down the progress between Yan Chi Vinegar and Xu Xing.

This led to the readers' comments on the emotional line at that time, almost all of which pointed in one direction, that is, "Yan Chi vinegar is so obvious, Ling Xu Xing still doesn't accept it, if I want to change it, I would have gone to bed a long time ago, why is it a eunuch protagonist."

As I said before, I am indeed a person who is easily influenced by readers' feedback, even if I have repeatedly emphasized that I must follow the outline and no longer change it casually.

But in fact, when it comes to the National Day plot...... emmm…… I don't have a detailed outline.

In terms of emotional lines, my outline has always been relatively simple, belonging to a state that can be controlled at any time, and the perfect outline is basically inclined to the career line.

After all, that's my weak point.

And in the state of more than a month of daily updates, the previous detailed outline has been completely exhausted, and in the critical period of the development of the career line of the National Day plot, I am worried that readers will lose patience because they have not yet expanded, and they urgently need a plot with explosive points.

So in the end, I still chose the confession plot of Yan Chi vinegar and Xu Xing.

All of a sudden, the delicate balance of the emotional line was broken.

At that time, my measure was to take the initiative to maintain the concealment of the relationship from the perspective of Yan Chi Vinegar, so as to maintain the balance between the two heroines.

But looking back from the later plots, you can see that if it's just like this, the balance can't be maintained.

So from this stage, there are relatively big problems with the plot.

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Fourth, the expansion of the stars, to the Weixin 2.0 press conference

From chapters 180 to 224, about 180,000 words.

From here on, due to the lack of a detailed outline, the career line was too large, and the balance of the emotional line was problematic, resulting in my outline and detailed outline not finding a good way and angle to improve.

To put it simply, from here on, I basically have no details of the code words every day.

I was able to maintain a daily outline before, just because the outline was very perfect, and even the key content was a daily outline.

When you sit in the chair and look at the details when Carvin, your brain will be clear, and you will feel at ease when you buy insurance.

But when there is no outline, and you can't write a satisfactory outline at all, that urgency and panic, as well as a sense of powerlessness to control the follow-up plot, will always haunt you.

Coupled with the dissatisfaction with the plot and the update at the same time, when these comments also came up, it was easy for people to become anxious.

Especially when you know that these problems are real, but the plot that you wrote before has been placed there and cannot be changed, and you can only bite the bullet and find a way to round the plot and find angles to make up for it, it is really a bald thing.

And during this period, the most comments about the relationship line are actually - "Xu Xingdu is with Yan Chi vinegar, so what should Xu Nian do?" When will it be Xu Niannian's turn to take the throne? Said okay, double heroine, you hurry up."

Well, that's the hardest part for me.

The confession was arranged in advance, even if the relationship was concealed, it meant that the balance in the dark was broken.

If you want to bring the balance back, you can only find various ways to find a way.

At the beginning, my attempts were relatively conservative, at most it was sister-brother interaction, but I found that this was not enough, and a bunch of people labeled Xu Niannian as a "defeated dog", and various negative comments followed.

This is also the inducement for Xu Niannian to give Xu Xingxx in the plot of Xu Niannian's birthday.

What's funnier is that at that time, in order to save the balance of the two heroines, I forgot the scarf that Xu Xing had made, and I didn't give it out as a birthday gift made by myself......

But after what happened on the night of his birthday, it seemed that the balance seemed to be restored a little, and Xu Niannian broke back a little bit in the situation.

But at this time, Xu Xing's character behavior was a little wrong.

Although from the perspective of character setting and logic, Yan Chi Vinegar is his girlfriend in this life, and Xu Niannian is the woman who was particularly good to him in his previous life, it is reasonable for Xu Xing to waver and hesitate when making a choice.

But this is clearly not the plot and characters that readers like.

But since it is an urban double heroine, it is basically an objective fact that the male protagonist is a scumbag, at most, Xu Xing only treats them as scumbags...... But scum is scum.

The best way to deal with it, of course, is to set Xu Xing as a scumbag when the book is opened.

But as everyone knows in the past two years, the urban harem text on the website is basically a scumbag at the beginning, and the process of the male protagonist changing from a normal man to a scumbag is directly omitted.

This kind of operation can make the reader's acceptance higher.

But then again, it's still the same sentence, the plot written above can't be changed, and I don't have the background to do "full-text revision".

All you can do is memorize the lesson, build on it in the next book, and try to avoid making the same mistakes.

And this book is doomed, I have to write about Xu Xing's transformation from a normal man to a scumbag.

The reason is simple.

That is, Xu Xing was not a scumbag originally, this book is a double heroine, and a person with two wives is a scumbag, so Xu Xing has to become a scumbag.

That's kind of logic, right?

The above problems are all facts that cannot be avoided in the plot.

It's not that readers found out and sprayed me, gave me a bad review, and I was able to fix it.

Can't be modified......

The previous ones are all written out and set up definite plots, which you have already seen.

Unless I can directly tamper with historical memory, the plot and logic of the previous article are there, and these problems cannot be corrected, and I can only think about the way to remedy them on the basis of these.

Obviously, this is a difficult thing to do.

Because it's not reality.

The online article must take into account the watchability of the plot and maintain a certain logic.

Otherwise, "If I were Xu Xing, I would have had a direct showdown" and something like that, to be honest, I can do it too.

After all, the business owners with a valuation of tens of billions of dollars, right, life has reached the peak that ordinary people can hardly see in a lifetime, what can you do?

But this is not reality after all, and when both watchability and logic need to be taken into account, I can only make corresponding trade-offs in the advancement of each plot.

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5. Since the launch of Weixin 2.0

There is actually nothing to say about this paragraph, and the problem is in the same vein as above.

The career line stall is too large, the cool points are scattered, the wealth appreciation speed is too fast, the villain is not enough, and the cool point plot drags on.

The balance of the two heroines of the emotional line is broken, and there are problems with the advancement of both sides, and every step is like walking on a crumbling single-plank bridge.

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Writing this summary today, one is to clarify the attitude -

I'm not floating or simply messing around, but when the problem is established, I won't make significant changes to the previous text, and I can only write like this in the future.

As for the renewal and the question of full-time, in fact, the accounting I studied in college before was not much in itself, and I basically had a bad attitude in my coursework...... So in fact, free time is not much different from full-time.

Whether I can get ten thousand is just a matter of whether I have a sufficiently complete outline...... Other authors can be ten thousand days because they are powerful, this is like going to school and reading, there are always people who study better than you.

Every time your parents point at you when you play with your mobile phone, you don't learn if your classmates are studying at this time, you look at the high score in this exam, why can't you?

Readers are also my food and clothing parents, right?

The logic should be the same, I hope you understand.

The second is the clarification of the deletion of comments -

Some readers are very dissatisfied with the deletion of comments, and it even affects the management.

One of the managers is usually busy with school, and he just came back to see it recently, so he didn't know the specific situation, so he directly helped me speak in the book friend circle, which caused the reader whose management was deleted to attack and ridicule.

But in fact, the deletion operation is all done by me, and it has nothing to do with management, and it involves the situation that affects other people, so I really need to explain.

The third is that the book is a million words, and it should be a summary review in itself.

My writing philosophy is like this, every book must have shortcomings, the characteristics of online articles determine that it is difficult to make up for problems after they appear, what I can do is to summarize experience and lessons, improve my theoretical framework, and strive for the next one to be better.

So far, the book is definitely going to be more and more downhill the further it goes.

Now the average order data is 12,500, and it is basically unchanged without recommendations.

But the first two books are actually about the same.,Dog food after the relationship between the male and female protagonists is confirmed.,It's not going to go up.,The later stage is basically downhill.,I'm used to it.。

So don't worry about this book, it will definitely end normally.

I have made it very clear, and the problem has been analyzed.

If you think that the plot has developed to this point, and the characters and plot can no longer satisfy you, then it is better to get together and disperse, and I am very grateful for your support for me in the past.

If you feel that you can barely watch it, then I would like to thank you for your support and encouragement, and try to give you a complete plot experience.

As for the deletion of comments.

I won't delete it in the future.,But in order to ensure the state and mentality of personal codewords.,I shouldn't read this chapter and the book circle anymore.。

If there is any problem, it is recommended to find my QQ private post directly in the group.

Well...... I won't necessarily reply, forgive me for this social phobia, but I will definitely read the information.

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Finally, I sincerely apologize to the readers who deleted the comments before.

Although it is a helpless move to ensure a personal mentality, it is indeed not a fair behavior for genuine readers.

I'm sorry.

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Above.

Honey Ji thank you.