1. Achievement report

Up to now, the high order of "Ten Years of Rebirth" is 38,000+, the average is 12,000+, and the 24-hour subscription is 1,200.

How to say it, everyone who understands it.

Being able to write a post-binding ratio to 10 to 1 within 2 million words is probably a kind of ability.

I went to read the last book of "Senior Sister, Shut Up! ", there were 1,300 posthumous subscriptions at the end......

Ahaha......

It's obvious to drive high and go low, and the book friends who can see it here should know better than me, so I won't repeat it here.

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2. Summary of contents

There are many things that need to be summarized in this book.

When I did "Letter to Readers, and a Million Words Summary" before, I have elaborated on the specific reasons for the high and low opening of this book.

At that time, it was more specific.

This summary is mainly from a more abstract creative perspective.

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1. Multiple heroines with an urban background

This genre is also enduring in online articles, but now it has developed and fewer people are writing about it.

On the one hand, there are audit-related factors.

On the other hand, after everyone's moral level has been improved, there are also higher requirements for the rationality of multiple heroines in the urban background.

Therefore, in the urban text of multiple heroines, two feasible routes are roughly derived.

The first is a scumbag design like "I Really Don't Want to Be Reborn", which directly lowers the protagonist's emotional bottom line at the beginning, and minimizes the reader's emotional and moral expectations for the protagonist.

The protagonist is the scum who is clear and clear, and the scum is bright and straightforward, which is much better than the traditional protagonist who thinks about it all in his heart, but is still dignified and indecisive on his lips.

To put it simply, a real villain is better than a hypocrite.

As long as the reader's expectations for the protagonist in this regard are low enough, then as long as the protagonist is slightly better to the heroine in the follow-up and does something that does not look like a scumbag would do, it will make the reader have a kind of "you are still like a person" emotional upward effect.

Although I will also scold the protagonist, the more I scold, the more I have to watch.

But it doesn't mean that as long as you write a scumbag, it's definitely okay, because how to shape a man into a scumbag who is not too annoying, and has other shining points and personality charm, is a kind of ability in itself.

Many authors say that they are writing scumbags, but what they write in the end is actually personal scum.

That's two different things entirely.

In addition to the scumbag, another route is often read and criticized.

- Similar to stock trading.

But there's a definition here.

If it's that kind of thing, the male protagonist flirted with several female characters in the whole text, but only one was chosen as the female protagonist in the ending, which belongs to pure stock speculation.

If the final outcome is a happy ending, it is similar to stock trading.

But if the male protagonist is portrayed as the traditional indecisive type, the kind that hesitates between several female protagonists, it is still not good.

Unless the person is really set up too well, the reader is reluctant to give up the heroine in it.

Otherwise, it's still easy to scold, and it belongs to the version of the thunder pit.

So in more detail, it should be set up for the male protagonist to focus on his career wholeheartedly.

This can be considered from various levels, how to make this kind of character design more logical.

This book "Ten Years of Rebirth" was originally intended to follow this path.

But halfway through, it was written, and it was a bit path-dependent to write the dog food article before, and after writing, I didn't brake the car, and I didn't hold the emotional line, but walked into the "thunder pit" mentioned above.

If you see this, try not to scold me.

There are many heroines with domestic urban backgrounds, and this is indeed the case now.

Either a scum to the end, or hang all the way.

This is not quite the same as the Xianxia background, historical background, and otherworldly background.

I summarize the thoughts from the author's point of view, and if you look at it from the reader's point of view, some of the words are indeed too direct, but my personal experience summary is like this so far.

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2. The pros and cons of combining career line and emotional line

As we all know, I wrote the dog food essay at the beginning.

The area I'm best at is designing the emotional line between the male and female protagonists.,It's my forte.。

So when I was thinking about transformation, I never intended to give up this core advantage.

Even if you write an urban rebirth essay, you must consider it in combination with the emotional line.

Otherwise, with my experience and ability in the line of business, it is estimated that I am not as good as an ordinary high-quality urban business writer.

Book friends who have read it all the way should also be able to feel that the career line in the middle and late stages is basically a mess, and after Xu Xing's identity is completely exposed, this line will be completely untenable.

On the other hand, my initial idea was that the female protagonist would be helpful to the male protagonist in his career.

In this way, the emotional line can be perfectly entangled in the main line of career development.

When the cool point of the career line is in the foreshadowing period, the cool point of dog food provided by the emotional line can make up for the fun of this part of the plot.

In this way, I can write a brilliant career in my daily life, and make up for my low level in the career line.

This is a good job in the first 200,000 words or so of this book.

But here's the problem.

Because as we all know, if the emotional line is not well controlled, basically hundreds of thousands of words will be written thoroughly.

This leads to a very serious question -

There is a mismatch between the career line progress and the relationship line progress.

To put it simply, the relationship between Xu Xing and Yan Chi Vinegar has developed too fast, but the career line is still just beginning.

I shouldn't have designed Yan Chi vinegar so easy to tackle, I should divide the stages of the relationship line clearly, so as to extend the relationship progress and add it to the entire stage of the four years of college.

But in fact, I put the entire essence of the relationship between the two of them in just two months of the early summer vacation.

This led to a series of subsequent problems.

Furthermore.

Since the speed at which Rebirth Wen accumulates wealth will be very fast, if the design of the heroine is relatively low from the initial identity, then it will lead to the heroine's career taking off, and the heroine will be completely reduced to a vase.

This is like in the upgrade text, the male and female protagonists met at the end of the micro, but the male protagonist has cultivated immortals in just a few years, and the female protagonist has also built a foundation.

The heroine's talent set in the early days is there.,If the protagonist insists on finding some natural treasures and forcibly taking the heroine to ascend.,But it will be disgusted by readers and a waste of resources.。

It's actually similar in urban texts.

In my design, the heroine did have enough help to the protagonist's career in the early days, and the participation was very high, which also perfectly matched my effect of intertwining the emotional line with the career line, and the two promoting each other.

But the growth rate of the female protagonist is limited, and it is destined to be difficult to keep up with the growth rate of the male protagonist.

This suddenly reminded me of the book "The Rolling of Rebirth" written by Eagle before, in which the heroine in the later stage is a rich second generation or something, with a very strong family background and strong personal ability, and after the protagonist's career became bigger, he gave a lot of help.

And the two heroines who appeared in the early stage were basically reduced to vase foils, and when they ended in the later stage, the plot was actually not very pleasing.

So in this regard, this difficulty needs to be solved.

That is, the matching of the emotional line and the career line.

Theoretically, the method is also very simple, two ideas.

First, when designing the heroine, provide a design that can rise quickly, whether it is a family background or personal ability, you need to have a root setting that can keep up with the rapid development of the male protagonist's career.

Yan Chi Vinegar had this plan in the early days, and originally wanted to advance in the direction of computer genius, but in the end it was not written.

Xu Niannian is one of the old partners of the design studio in his previous life, and he has excellent ability, but compared to the Qunxing Group in the later period of Xu Xing, he is also too small.

Second, when designing a business line, don't choose a very grand industrial layout, but focus on more subdivided markets and fields, and lower the ceiling of the protagonist's development.

In this regard, as I said earlier, if I were to do the book all over again, I would probably focus on the path of making games for the main characters.

Some book lovers may wonder why the ceiling of the protagonist's career should be lowered.

In fact, the reason is very simple, the smaller the amount of wealth, the more sensitive the reader's perception of the numbers.

Readers may be thrilled that the protagonist has earned the first pot of gold for a thousand dollars, and encouraged that the protagonist has made 10,000 yuan by taking advantage of the opportunities of the times.

Feel happy for the protagonist to start a company and earn the first 100,000 yuan of huge profits, and be fascinated by the protagonist beating the villain and grabbing millions of profits.

But as the numbers rise to the order of 10 million, 100 million, billion, that feeling becomes numb.

This applies to the same in the upgrade text.

During the low-martial arts period, the protagonist punched to the flesh and brisked, and the reader also had a sense of substitution.

But in the later stage, one punch blows up the planet and a sword cuts the universe, the scene is big, but the physical feeling may not be as good as the early sword slaughtering the wild boar to harvest the fur and flesh, and successfully let the protagonist survive the cold winter.

This is also a direction in which the article has been upgraded in recent years.

In urban literature, there should be similarities.

Instead of wanting them all and writing big and vague, it is better to focus on the subdivision and split the career line into more detail.

After the ceiling is lowered, it will be easier to compress the protagonist's early and mid-stage achievements to tens of millions, and climb little by little, with the emotional line and the growth of the heroine.

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3. About the new book

According to the previous plan, the new book is a single female protagonist dog food text.

The subject matter is kept secret for the time being, and the background is still urban, with some trace ability elements.

Specifically, you can refer to the time stop of the book "When Youth Fantasy Manifests" before Kissing the Pig.

Of course, it's just a reference to this design, not a gold finger that stops and stops in the new book.

As for the timing of the new book, it is uncertain for the time being.

I had planned to take at least three months off.

But from a practical point of view, the traffic in the station during the summer vacation must also be taken into account.

But at least, at least, you have to take a break for more than a month.

I need to adjust my body clock and start losing weight.

Let's set a small goal here.

When I can lose less than 140 pounds, I will be ready to send new books.

If you don't lose weight and exercise, your physical condition is really not good.

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Fourth, routine thanks

Thank you for reading this.

It's a pity that this book has gotten thousand badges as expected, but the follow-up trend is not good.

There are reasons why I was too late to supplement the detailed outline in time, and there are also problems with my personal mentality, coupled with biological clock disorders and physical problems, which failed to give this story a good reading experience.

Let's keep up the good work with the next one.

By the way, thanks to the editors.

Above.

Honey Ji thank you.