Let's summarize it at the end of the month
Speaking of which, it seems like this is the first time I've written some summaries or something, and I haven't even written anything about the content of the book in the testimonials, so I wanted to try writing it.
The book was opened in mid-August, and it has been two and a half months now.
The most satisfying fragment to write should be the first ten chapters, when I open the book, I always have the most creative enthusiasm when I write something, and I like it more.
It's like the sentence at the end of the tenth chapter.,I didn't think much of it when the code came out.,Look back at it after the code is over.。
Damn, can I write such a handsome sentence (laughs)
However, the daily serialization and the harassment of work,There will always be more or less confused times.,There's no way to always guarantee the enthusiasm and quality at the beginning.,Overall,The book is still a mixed bag.,It's not an excellent work.。
I still don't have enough experience in writing.
Counting up, the time I have been writing online articles, as of today, it has only been less than seven months, and it is still a new in the budding, and the two broken books together are only worth a million words, which is not as good as one of others.
When I wrote about certain places, I deeply felt that I was not able to write what I wanted, so I could only lower my requirements again and again, and write as if I could barely read it.
The pen is insufficient, and it is generally reflected in the control of the plot.
Whether it's this or the last one,The most criticized point is the slow heat and the main line is not clear.,This one is okay.,Learned the lessons of the previous book.,There are more obvious villains and lines.,But relatively speaking, it's still a little weaker main line.,Reflected in the plot.,It's slow heat.。
This may have something to do with my reading style.
From the style of my writing, you should be able to see that I am obviously biased towards the light type of light-hearted and funny style, and most of the books I read are of this kind, and this kind of books are usually based on strong characters and light main lines, so when I write, I will also subconsciously focus on character design.
Speaking of character design.
Now it's only 400,000 words, and in addition to the protagonist, the characters who spend a lot of words to describe are actually only one and a half.
Erin is considered one, and Charlotte's plot is only halfway through, so it can only be counted as half.
The character of Erin, when I was making the setting, was actually a little worried.
I'm afraid that I won't be able to bring out her strengths, and that there is no way to balance the contradictions, which will cause too many shortcomings to be exposed and annoying everyone.
However, when it came time to actually put pen to paper, it was surprisingly smooth.
The feedback from everyone seems to be pretty good.
This role should be considered a success.
Charlotte's words, the plot part is not so much for the time being.
However, compared to the complexity of Erin's thinking, she is a very simple character in my setting.
She doesn't think if I'm going to do it or not, it's all very simple.
Lynn walked up to her, and she would trot forward and hug him with her arms outstretched, it didn't matter where or when.
"Blatant preference" is her main theme, and "having the qualifications to accept him" is the goal she hopes to achieve.
Of course, this thing can't be explained so much for the time being, and it still depends on the plot to reflect it.
As for the other characters, like Alyssa and Corina, there will be corresponding plots to improve the characters and reflect their own contradictions and core concepts, but this is all later.
This book is only 400,000 words now, and according to my expectations, it should be about two million when it arrives, and the academy chapter of the first volume will almost end between 500,000 and 600,000 words, and then enter the second volume of [Wang Du Fengyun].
This stage is the time when the protagonist really takes over the authority of the family and dominates the situation.
At this point, the summary of the book is almost over, and the following is a little off-topic.
Writing and writing so far, the best praise I have received may be "no poisonous spots", but there are many bad reviews.
The recent days are unrealistic in this chapter for special reasons, but the author can see it in the background.
Just before this summary, I saw an unexpected "bad review." ”
[Look at piracy went]
Me: "? ”
In fact, whether it is this book or the previous book, the proportion of readers who read pirated copies accounts for a large part, the last book is close to 50,000 collections, the last chapter is subscribed to no more than 100, but the pirated retention rate hovers around 55%.
This book is not much different, it is close to 30 to 1 to book.
I've never complained to anyone about anything, and I just said that I didn't write well in the book friend group, but this face jump made me a little sad.
Of course, I don't mean to blame anyone when I say this, just watch it and be happy, don't take it too seriously.
Finally, let's summarize the codeword.
Although there is no mention of adding more on the surface, in fact, according to the rules for adding more in the testimonials on the shelf, it is actually excessive.
Most of the last month was a free period, with 150,090,000 words updated.
This month is updated with 170,000 words.
Two and a half months later, I took only one day off.
It should be said that it is more than enough than the top.
Next month, strive to move towards 180,000 words.
Come on, come on!
Thank you all for your support.
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Other.
I will take a leave of absence today, and there will be no changes.