The belated month-end summary, the recent plot reflection and leave note
The first is to update Ha, a total of 190,000 words were updated last month, which is considered to have completed the passing line.
Among them, taking a leave of absence for three days is equivalent to updating 190,000 words in 28 days, and some days are explosive.
By the way, I got a brand that has a habitual outbreak.,This brand needs to be ten times a day to get it.,So my update is okay.。
Last month, I completed a total of two volumes, one volume is the spring of the first emperor's first year, and the other volume is "Trapped Beasts Still Fighting", which can be regarded as the official end of the plot of the Six Kingdoms Line, according to my original plan, it is to start the plot of going to the place and reforming.
It was also last month that I opened the volume "Difficult to Walk".
The original meaning of the title of this volume is that reform is difficult, and this process of integrating knowledge and action is not something that everyone can do, so it is called difficult to walk.
is more because the ending must be bright, after all, "there will be times when the wind and waves will be long, and the clouds will sail into the sea".
So the title of the opening volume actually hints at the ending of this volume.
The ideal is very plump, and the reality is very skinny.
When I actually stepped into practice, I found a problem.
My plot began to slow down, and it was from the third chapter of this volume, "Running Both Ways", that my pursuit began to fall in an uproar, from one thousand fourteen to six or seven hundred now, a full half.
This made me start to be confused, and at the same time, I also began to review the plot of this period of time.
It was only when I looked at it from the beginning that I realized a problem, my plot was too slow and too "dry".
This is a very serious problem, just like the chicken soup is delicious, but after the chicken soup solidifies, it becomes too greasy to eat as a chicken soup cube.
Since the plot of the third chapter, I have been writing about Chen Ke's sorting out and sorting out local political institutions, and maybe the "coolness" will drop a lot.
Local reform must be boring and boring, but what I am writing is not a "record of local reform", but a historical classification, so I must take into account the three keys of "coolness", "documentary" and "change".
Only by grasping these three key issues can we truly achieve a balance, and the resulting book will be less "dry" and less "watery".
The second reason for this problem is because I don't have an outline, as everyone knows, I have always been a person without an outline, and I only have time to prepare the outline for the next volume when I am ready to start the next volume, which causes me to be in a hurry every time I open a new volume.
Because of this, sometimes it seems that the plot is a bit chattering.
My style is like this, everyone is familiar with it, I have exposed my chattering style since the first chapter, and in the front, there are a lot of plot support, supported by the interaction between Chen Ke and Ying Zheng, and it doesn't seem so "skinny".
After Chen Ke left Xianyang City, this kind of problem was exposed, and it was obvious.
But I can say, even by God, that I didn't have a deliberate, conscious hydrology, and that my character kept me from doing such a thing.
Another reason for this problem is that this is my first big book.
This is my third book, but it's my first big novel, the first book that surpassed 400,000, the first book that surpassed 500,000, and is now running for 800,000.
My first book was written in a certain Lu, and after writing a total of more than 400,000 words, it completely collapsed, and the second book was more than 120,000 words, and the reason for the results on the shelves was cut.
Everybody knows that.
Pure newcomers, or people who haven't written long stories, are bound to face a problem when they write about this time.
Loss of control.
And I'm facing this kind of problem, especially since I don't have an outline yet, which is double the torture.
It was a test of my mastery and my ability to improvise with the outline.
But I believe that I will be able to do this task and present this book to you in its entirety.
Although the posthumous conclusion of this book has collapsed, it can still be stable for the time being, and it may be the reason why it was recommended just some time ago, right?
But in short, this book is like a child of mine.
I will do my best to overcome this problem and present this book to you in the most perfect posture, so that my character will not be regretted, so that I can have a good starting point under the pen name at the starting point.
I also hope to be able to become an author recognized by everyone in the future, when I see my new book, I can smile and say when I see the "sweet and sour worker" at the back of the new book: "Although this product is generally written as grain and grass, it has a good character, never a pigeon essence, and the update is also diligent, and you can still read it when the text is short." ”
After summarizing and reflecting, it's time to ask for leave.
Today is cheekily taking a day off.,It's the first day off of the month.,I'll sort out the outline.,I hope that from tomorrow onwards.,The plot can make everyone get back to the feeling they used to have.。
Finally, in the end, brazenly begging for certainty!
On the day when the one thousand and fourteen are restored, my day is eight thousand and one month.
The other is the question of rewarding, which was asked by a friend before, so I'll talk about it by the way today.
The alliance leader is +5 more, silver is +50 more + day eight months, gold is +500 more + day ten thousand months.
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