The content has not changed, this has been determined, and there is nothing wrong with it, but the small details are not well written and some readers have opinions.

These are useful comments that could be revised.

First of all, there was a foreshadowing before, the protagonist's father proposed to the Yu family, and he forgot to write it before, but now it has been added: The specific content is that the protagonist's father and Yu Yuefei's father talked about this when they had a drink, and both parties verbally agreed to marry, but they have not officially proposed marriage, and now Ye's suddenly stepped in.

Considering that it is impossible for the Ye family not to know that Li Qing and Yu Yuefei are a couple, this has already been officially announced.

And Ye Xiao once betrayed and backstabbed Yu Yuefei, Yu Chensheng knew, so he didn't like Ye Xiao, so he hinted that his daughter ran away.

These two chapters of the plot are the foreshadowing of the next big plot.,The details are not written well to make everyone feel uncomfortable.,Now these have been modified.,Highlight the justice of the protagonist.,It's very reasonable to take away the heroine for a while.。

That's about it, let's be calm for a while, and then let's see.

Don't talk about raising books at every turn, you have no other effect than affecting the author's mentality.

You may not know how much it affects the mentality of an author, even an old fritter like me is inevitably affected, and new authors are affected every minute, and their first reaction is whether the plot they write is toxic, is it not okay to write like this, should I revise the plot? Should I change the outline later?

Many amazing new books in the early stage collapsed on the shelves, basically due to various influences.

You're light, and you're done with a touch of your mouth, but you don't know how much the newcomer authors have to gain and lose when they see these comments.

It's not easy to write a book, be more tolerant, don't jump to conclusions so early, maybe he just wants to write a twist but in the next chapter.

A book is so long, millions of words at every turn, many people don't read one or two million words, so many plots are written like thin ice, for fear that if something goes wrong with the plot, the whole book will collapse directly.

In this case, you can put forward opinions, and those that are useful and can be changed will be adopted, and there is no big problem, just some small details that do not affect the big plot, you can put forward opinions, don't give up the book at every turn and read it for a year.