As an old rule, I will make a summary after this volume is written.

The name of this volume is "The Viewer", in fact, the original name of this volume was Scholars, but it was too weak and vulgar, so it was changed to "The Viewer".

But this volume does not render the emotions and feelings of the viewers, there is no spicy contrast, and the name that was suddenly changed halfway did not go through too much foreshadowing and scene description, and did not reflect the feeling of strong contrast, so all the outbreaks in this volume were saved to the back, that is, Xiao Tang's death.

But Don Jr.'s death didn't have a good effect, and what I initially imagined was suicide in the kind of artistic sense that was mixed with beauty and ugliness, and it was the artistic death of Don Jr. in the contradiction of being beautiful and her own ugliness. Under this death, the theme of an entire volume is expressed through large passages of emotional expression.

But considering that the expression of self-emotion like a young man is unpleasant, I deleted it, and the original sense of self-blame like a completely powerless despair has weakened a lot, and this sense of depression has no way to express it.

But looking at the reactions of many people, I think Xiao Tang's death is still worth it and plays a little role.

After a large-scale deletion, the plot was already messy, and I couldn't write the feeling I wanted, and I couldn't achieve the desired effect.

The beauty of youth on the surface and the cruelty behind it are also a big poison point, and my ability to deal with multi-layered artistic conceptions is too poor, and there is no way to integrate the whole contradictory thing well.

In short, this is the current situation with the plot of this volume, and it can be said that this volume as a whole is a piece of, and it looks disgusting.

Let's talk about the shortcomings, the places where this volume is sick.

First, the author's writing

Forty percent of the articles in this volume are copied from the original work, and then changed two words, this lazy behavior has caused the rejection of my writing style and the artistic conception of the original text writing style, and to a certain extent, it has also led to the lack of feeling of the plot of the whole volume.

And the author's writing is very thin, and the author, a person who has not been able to write articles since childhood, can only write essays, it is very difficult to write novels. So the whole book has been learning other people's writing methods from the beginning, and the writing methods of this book are all about stealing others, my squid of environmental description, Jiangnan of self-thinking and absurd description, and the author of a romance novel of male and female emotional drama, but I haven't learned the essence, and I haven't learned the battle scene. And recently, I've been learning a way to describe a phenomenon with a strong sense of oil painting, but I haven't learned the essence.

So you can see a lot of problems in this volume, there is no feeling in the battle scenes, there is no feeling in the emotional scenes, just like white water, you can see a lot of typos in many places, and meaningless text pile-ups.

These are all problems, even serious ones.

Second, the plot

I've almost forgotten about the memory of the original book before writing the fandom.,I don't even have a general impression of a lot of things.,So I can find a lot of bugs in this volume.,There are also inconsistencies.。

When I write a plot close to the plot of the original book, I always go to the scene to read the original book, and then copy and paste it and change the keywords.

This leads to the contradiction of the proportion of these words in my article, the protagonist is often more like a tool man than the protagonist, and this direct and rigid copying also leads to a very messy plot written.

I shouldn't put too much weight in many plots, the original plot should be as short as possible, and things that don't make sense should be deleted.

It's also a personal problem.,Halfway through writing, I have a lot less expectations for this book.,The limitations of fan fiction make it impossible to express a lot of things.,I even thought about whether to double open a book a few times.,Write an original one.,But in the end I gave up.。 This book is used as a lesson to learn and gain experience.

Third, character portrayal

I think this is the only slightly better point in this volume, because the protagonist can't be a person on paper, he also has seven emotions and six desires, and he will make mistakes.

The protagonist's various behaviors show the contradiction between his own emotions and reason, which I think is good.

All in all, the whole volume is a pile of scattered garbage, not a single bit of it has reached the goal, whether it is the contradictions of the environment, the changes in emotions, or the impact of the viewers, none of them are expressed very smoothly.

In the next volume, I probably won't copy the original book (unless time allows), and the title of my next volume is "Writer", which is to write about the value and character that I think a literati should have—criticality.

Of course, there should be no knives in the next volume, and knives are not allowed, so please feel free to eat them.

The main idea is to describe the power of thought, the sense of power that ideas bring, the sense of abstract power that can bring about change.

There are very few battle episodes in the whole volume, and more of a feeling of before and after is written

The author intends to set the whole volume into two lines, and it will not be completed until the end of the entire soul master competition, and the original plot will be appropriately deleted in the middle.

For the soul master competition,The hero will only participate in this time.,And it's with the mentality of revisiting the old place.,Playing the game doesn't have much use for the hero.。

Of course, the changes in emotional relationships also have to be written, this thing is more difficult, and I need to learn more, if someone can recommend a description of the battle, who writes better, let me steal a hand.

As for Xiao Tang's question, I'm wondering if she should play a repechage match, after all, many pure love parties like it, and the knife is also very depressing.

But I'm not inclined to her reappearing, her death is the best ending, or even sublimation, if she lives, then the impact of these things is not so strong. This kind of death is not the death of those Korean romantic dramas, such as the deliberately pretentious death in some books, but that her death symbolizes a group of people, a group of tragic epitome in Shrek Academy.

And I also felt that it was a pity when I wrote this character, but it was because of pity that it was more valuable, and even in the chapter where I was banned, I brought in this character, and I also felt very depressed.

Of course, this book is about to be on the shelves, and you will be the parents of food and clothing after it is on the shelves, so it is also important to ask for the opinions of readers.

Finally, I would like to thank all of you for your companionship from the beginning to the present, and I am so happy that I am overjoyed when I read from one to two.

Many of the original readers have since abandoned the book, but I am grateful to them for making me feel that my efforts have been useful.

Douluo can be signed by anyone who writes at the starting point.,I'm also holding this purpose.,I hope more people like to read it.,But it backfired.,Our 200,000 words are not as many as people who read tens of thousands of words.。

But fortunately, I am not discouraged, at least I understand how many pounds and taels I have, I have learned a lot of lessons, and I can be regarded as looking for experience for writing a book in the future.

Finally, thank you to every reader who commented, to everyone who read it, to everyone who voted, to thank everyone who gave a reward, and to those who discussed the plot with me in the group.