Chapter 187, is he really not a screenwriter?
Immersion actors are rare.
At least Jiang hadn't seen a few in the old years.
I've heard of it...
Looking at Li Qing's appearance in front of him, Jiang Jiunian swallowed his saliva.
Sure enough, the actors of the immersion faction are even more than rumored... Well, there is personality.
But the heart is slanderous.
What Li Qing said is indeed a problem.
And this question is not big or small.
For 99 percent of the audience.
When you see the finale of the family carnival, you will have a good time, and then click on the next drama, the next TV channel, and wait for the next new program to be broadcast.
But there is still 1% of the audience who will question the rationality of the script after reading it.
Generally speaking, this 1 percent of the audience can be discarded.
As a TV series, serving the 99% is already a huge success.
Why care about the 1 percent?
But...
In the case of knowing the problem, I still make the 1% uncomfortable, as a screenwriter, is it really qualified?
At this time, Jiang Lao Nian lit another cigarette.
"I see, do you have any ideas?"
The implication is that they agreed to improve the script.
Li Qing smiled and breathed a sigh of relief after hearing this.
"I want to make a short biography of Erlang God's character, but for now, this amount of text is not something I can control alone, and I want you to help."
"Looks like you've got an idea."
"Well, I want to use "Yang Erlang Cracking the Mountain to Save His Mother" as a template." Li Qing touched his chin and said, "Use this story to deduce what Yang Jian has experienced." ”
"And "Cracking Mountain to Save Mother"?" Jiang was stunned.
However, Li Qing explained.
"The legend of Cracker Mountain saving his mother originally comes from "The Legend of Erlang"!"
It was only later that it evolved through folklore again and again.
It has become the story of the Baolian lantern that has been passed down for a long time.
Jiang Jiunian stayed where he was, only feeling that his face was red and painful.
Oh, I haven't seen it!
.......
The next day, I took a leave of absence and didn't go to the script to read it, and Li Qing and Jiang were sorting out the script at home.
Now Jiang Chenggang's home in Hengcheng has become a special foothold for the studio to film in Hengcheng, which is quite convenient.
Looking at the biographies of the characters sorted out by Li Qing, at least Jiang was admired by the old years.
What a thick pile!
At this time, Jiang Jiunian picked up the biography and looked at it a little.
From the biographies of these characters, the characters and stories presented...
to show the world view and character stories from the side.
The story that begins with the birth of 'Erlang God', the nephew of the Jade Emperor.
"It's the year, I, Yang Jian was born in Yangjia Village, Guanjiangkou."
"I have a sister named Yang Chan, who is different from me, but she is a crybaby."
"One day, I found out that I could use spells! At that time, my father told me that my mother was a god high in the sky. ”
"It turns out that my mother is so powerful, I am so powerful, but why, my mother always doesn't want me to use spells, obviously I can easily do things that others can't do with spells."
"I used a spell to hit the second fat who bullied Xiaochan!
! He's so bad that he bullies us because he's bigger than our brother and sister, and I can't take it anymore! ”
"But my father beat me, I didn't dare to resist, my father said, I use spells to attract heavenly soldiers... They will take their mother away and never see her again. ”
"I'm not afraid! My spells are so powerful, my mother's spells will definitely be even more powerful, what kind of heavenly soldiers and generals, can they help us! ”
"I'm going to use the spell in my hand to protect my mother!"
"My father couldn't persuade me, so I asked my mother to persuade me, but my mother said that she didn't let me use spells, not because I was afraid that the heavenly soldiers would arrest her in the future, but because I was afraid that I would use spells in the world and disturb fairness and order, so that those who don't have spells, how can it be good? If their efforts and hard work are placed? ”
"My mother said that their duty as gods is to live in prosperity and peace on earth, so how can she, as her son, become this one who destroys order?"
"My mother said that the second fat can grow taller and stronger than us, because he does a lot of work, his body is strong and solid, he can be strong and solid, I can also exercise well, exercise well! Defeat him with his fists, and use the fists of the world to protect his sister. ”
"I seem to understand, I know, the use of spells in the world is an injustice to others..."
"I made an agreement with my mother that I would no longer use spells in the world! My mother wants to teach me how to pinch the little sugar man! ”
At this moment, Jiang Jiunian, who was looking at this biography of the character, had been watching it for half a night unconsciously.
From a first-person perspective, it records the process of a teenager named Yang Jian growing up at home.
From his point of view, the world of "Baolian Lantern" extends.
"I feel like I'm in a quandary..."
Jiang Jiunian felt that the inspiration in his mind was bursting out wildly and surging.
From this setting... This perspective... There are many stories that can be extended.
Erlang God, the story of the Three Virgins, their parents, the past of the heavenly court, and the birth of the god of justice.
At this moment, Jiang Jiunian suddenly found out.
This Li Qing, he is not as simple as making a character biography.
It is already completely a complete view of the world.
It was displayed in front of him.
Man and God are separated.
The rules of the gods separate the love between gods and men.
Gods are also beings, and they cannot suppress their own feelings.
Both reasonable truths, entangled contradictions and entanglements...
The writing skills and imagination are so good.
Is he really an actor, not a good screenwriter?
In the face of this complete outline-like setting, Jiang's old thoughts exploded, vigorously, and erupted.
Fingers frantically tapped on the laptop keyboard.
....
After fighting for half a night, Jiang finally got tired and lay down.
This resulted in a 10,000-word script.
And this 10,000-word script is still coded with the blessing of Red Bull energy drinks.
However, Li Qing next to him has already written almost 20,000 words, and he wrote the script together, complementing each other.
"Are you a freak?" Jiang Jiunian wiped his sour eyes, and was stunned when he looked at the stack of output in front of Li Qing's eyes.
"It is mainly written in combination with folklore, such as "Nezha in the Sea", "Yang Erlang Saves His Mother from the Cracker Mountain", and "Journey to the West".
Li Qing smiled and said, "It just so happens that I read these when I was studying in the mountains." ”
At this moment, Jiang remembered it in the old year.
This Li Qing in front of him also has a real identity.
It's a Taoist priest.
As a Taoist priest, folklore, can you still read less of these things?
That's certainly quite a lot.
At this moment, Li Qing smiled and said.
"In the past, there were few things for entertainment on the mountain, the passage was closed, and the only things that could be touched were these legends."
"Then let's finish the script tonight."
"I think so."
The two continued to fight at night.
Jiang continued to drink the Red Bull drink in the old year, his eyes were red, but he was extremely excited.
A more complete script, a more complete world view is presenting.
And Jiang Jiunian, the original creator of the story of the TV series version of "Baolian Lantern", is next to him, and Li Qing's copying and writing is also like a tiger.
Gradually, it came to mind.
Subsequently, Jiang Jiunian really couldn't hold on, he fell asleep deeply, no matter how effective Red Bull was, he couldn't boil it like this.
There is still a limit to the human mind.
The laptop in front of him was still lit up...
Li Qing came to his computer and flipped through the script.
I can't hold it anymore...
When the rooster crowed, Li Qing also fell asleep and fell asleep.
....
In the dream, Li Qing became Yang Jian, a young man in the mountains.
He was born in a poor family, with an understanding mother and a gentle scholarly father.
There is a younger sister named Yang Chan and an older brother named Yang Guang.
Men and women weave, and their lives are stable.
Taught by his mother that he could not use spells.
Because the use of spells will destroy the order and fairness of the world, which is not allowed by the gods, she has made a big mistake by combining with mortals, and she cannot make mistakes again and again.
Yang Jian didn't understand what mistakes his mother had made, but he gradually understood what his mother's 'fairness' meant.
As a result, Yang Jian was able to win the second fat game under the exercise.
With the fists of mortals, he defeated other mortals.
That day, Yang Jian returned home happily and wanted to tell his mother the good news.
Mother, I protected my sister with my fists.
I didn't use the spell of the gods!
However, what I saw was not a gentle mother, not a father.
It's the heavenly soldiers and generals wearing golden armor.
Their cold eyes stared at their family.
With the rules of heaven and heaven, come to judge this evil family.
Yang Jian used his mortal body to block it, but he saw that the halberd of the heavenly soldiers and generals had already pierced the bodies of his father and brother...
This gentle, even somewhat rigid scholar, stuck his body on the halberd, and blocked it with his thin mortal body.
and the taciturn brother, too, used his flesh and blood to block the murder weapons of the heavenly soldiers and generals.
They said.
Run, run away with your sister.
Live and don't come back.
You can't survive under the encirclement of the gods.
Death of Daddy and Brother.
The mother was arrested and returned to Heaven for trial.
The originally beautiful and happy family has come to naught.
Later, Nezha, who was good friends with Yang Jian, and Marshal Tianpeng, who met by coincidence, rescued Yang Jian and Yang Chan and saved them from suffering the same fate as their father and brother.
But Yang Jian was unwilling.
Why, I don't use spells anymore, and I will still be punished by the so-called Heavenly Court Heavenly Rules.
Why, those high-ranking immortals can't even accommodate our family.
Why... Why is that?
Well, my mother said that I, Yang Jian, can't use the spells of the gods in the mortal world.
It will destroy the order of the mortal world.
Then I use the spells of the gods to deal with the gods, isn't it okay?
Then it doesn't count as breaking the agreement with my mother.
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