3.20 Revision progress report
Today's revised chapters are chapters 15~16 of Volume 1.
Chapter 15: The revised content is optimized for the overall length of the text, including but not limited to various language adjustments such as "now" and "now", which have been avoided to the greatest extent, and at the same time, certain deletions and additions have been made in the dialogue content and scene description, which has no impact on the main line, but will look more comfortable, reducing many unsmooth lines and unintelligible places, and the text is expanded by about 600 words.
Chapter 16: The whole article has been greatly modified.,Explanation in logical thinking.,And the protagonist and others have made additions to the psychological fluctuations.,For one brush and more brushes, the sense of book friends currently thinks it's an improvement.,The rest of the revision angle is the same as 15 chapters.,The overall text is expanded by about 1400 words.。
Today, the text has been expanded by 2,000 words.
That's it for today.
On the 20th and 21st, I will go to other places, and I will basically be on the road all day, so tomorrow's revision plan will be put on hold for a day~
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