The chapters revised today are chapters 32~35.

Among them—

Chapter 32: The redundant, awkward, and awkward places in the chapter have been modified, the paragraphs have been optimized and simplified, and at the same time, the psychological activities of the characters in this chapter, the previous behavioral reasons (Duan Qiang's aspect) have been re-depicted to make them more obvious and reasonable, and finally the foreshadowing context in the chapter has been strengthened to a certain extent (there are questions about Li Jia's emotions), and the text of Chapter 32 has been expanded by about 400 words, mostly modified.

Chapter 33: The situation is similar to 32, I re-described Zuo Dao and Li Jia, the narration of their psychological activities, in order to make the intention clearer, and at the same time recast some of the unclear and redundant content of the original chapter, and then made certain changes to some environmental descriptions and the behavior of the paper figures in this chapter, and did not change the main line; The number of words deleted in this chapter is relatively large, and the text is only expanded to more than 300 words.

Chapter 34: The overall changes are very small, only some paragraphs have been adjusted, including some dialogues, and the direction of logical thinking, the text is expanded by about 400 words, and there are not many modifications~ There are changes to the main line wood.

Chapter 35: I have made changes to Zuo Dao's self-talk, some scenes, and redundant aspects, the main line has not changed, and the chapter framework has not changed, which is a small adjustment to increase the fluency of reading, and the chapter is also about 400 words in the main text.

Today, a total of four chapters of construction and revision, expanding the text by about 2,000 words~

Above~

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