Originally, I wanted to roll after roll, and while the plot was promoted, the protagonist followed the upgrade, constantly paving in each volume, and finally the climax in the early stage, and then the theme was sublimated in the middle, late, and end.

But I'm overestimating myself, the rhythm is a big problem, the more I write, the more I strain, it's not cool enough, it's not good enough.

To be precise, the plot is not compact enough, and it is the same as a unit drama, and the plot even relies on indicator tasks to assist in promoting.

But at present, the basic information is still paved out, there is no need to delay it any longer, the upgrade is not important, the plot is important, and it is written that there is enlightenment.

Aside from everything else, the plot has reached the point where it is [Wizard Ship Crisis], [Entering Gulin Mountain], [Evil God Incident], [Secret Realm Competition], [Black Sun Medal], [Tianyi Wizard City], and [Internal Search]..... Even the Wizarding City and the Great Search plot was accelerated by me.

There are many problems, which can be regarded as shortcomings: 1. Rory is wordy, the writing is not refined enough, and it is very different from the first and second volumes, and the foreshadowing is repeated.

2. The sense of expectation is too far, the sense of small expectation is insufficient, and there is always a lack of coolness, and I don't pretend to understand when I pretend to be forced (I changed the way I wrote the secret realm competition and the Black Sun Medal later.) ）。

3, it's still the plot, the plot is not compact enough, the twist is a little stiff, but it's all in the turn as much as possible (in fact, it's not turning, upgrading, fighting monsters, the supporting characters are shocking, you at least watch it cool, I just want to be unconventional, headache).

4. Almost nothing promised has been fulfilled, I am a fine dog, I should review, I will be punished with three cups, and I will definitely not paint cakes in the future.

Summary: In terms of the above plot, about one-third of the early stage was written, and the next chapter is a new volume jumping time, directly ten years later. There is no need to procrastinate, and the foreshadowing is also seven, seven, eight, eight, eight, I believe readers and friends can see what the climax of the plot is in the early stage, but try not to be conventional.

As a newcomer, I always make progress in writing, and thank you for your support.

All I can do is write seriously.

The book didn't do a good job, but it was a good one for a newcomer.

This book will definitely be completed, and it will be written carefully according to the outline in the early, middle and late stages.

And I'll also write wizard essays in the follow-up new books.,The new books have two ideas.,Self-hilarity is great.,Quack.。

The trilogy is so beautiful!

Please accompany me all the way!

I hope this book can reach lv4.,Then you can send videos.,Easter eggs.,Pictures.,But you can only think about it.,Hahaha!