This is the end of the first volume, and here is a summary of some of the gains and losses of the first volume.

Chaos Crown book,From the beginning, it was a work that decided to commercialize,As an author,This choice is actually very normal,That is, everyone came because of interest at the beginning,But after making money,,,All transformed into ruthless code farmers,Just to mass produce cool text and bury your head in codewords。

There were a lot of designs at the beginning of this book, but after discussing with the editor and his book friends "Gollum" and "A Bad Clam", I gave up one after another, and finally chose a more modest start, and I was relatively good at it.

Of course, it is inevitable that there will be some swaying on the general route, that is, whether to take a relaxed and funny pretend to be a stream, or a serious and serious narrative stream, this Tianzi scum has never thought very clearly about this piece, which has also led to the repetition of the literary style.

Here are a few key points of the first volume that I don't like very much.

The main content of the first volume is actually not much, the main thing is to introduce the composition of Cormier's kingdom, the aristocratic class, the daily life of the protagonist's family, interpersonal relationships, and the path the protagonist wants to take, and the change of his personal opinion.

I think the content is still okay to write, and in general the whole outline is outlined.

After the protagonist's mind awakens, there is a transformation process, at the beginning of the awakening, he is afraid and afraid, helpless and helpless, it is after being rescued by Su Lun that he gets the hope of life, this is the first stage.

Then the whole process of getting along with the pastor and returning home to face his family also turned to a fighting spirit, which is the second stage.

But if you look closely, after being full of fighting spirit, the protagonist was quickly hit by reality, and the forgotten country is actually a place where there are all kinds of bulls, ghosts, snakes, and gods, and the four gods of chaos are indeed very strong, but they are not absolutely invincible, especially after the protagonist finds that he needs to constantly lick the dermatitis of the four gods to unlock the power, he is a little confused, and all kinds of small fights.

In these three stages, the protagonist is actually being pushed away, and he is saying what he wants to do, but in fact he is more passive, his strength is low, and he is confused, and he himself does not know much about the gods, so it will seem "relatively scattered" for a short period of time.

It wasn't until the Slaanesh avatar was summoned to repel the Cthulhu avatar that the protagonist finally came to the fourth stage.

Life is endless, and progress is endless.

This ambition, chasing the stars!

Here are also some of the things that I am not quite satisfied with in the first volume.

First, the conflict between the protagonist and Disma in chapters 30-31 is not well written, which leads to the next cut of the adventure plot and changes it to recruit training, so some parts of the plot of recruit training are meaningless, and some people who are only going to appear in the second volume appear at this time but don't have a few lines, and the structure is not well arranged.

Second, some of the dialogues are too verbose and cumbersome, and some of the places that should be written and ink are relatively brief and not explained enough.

Third, the theme of DND can be said to be a poorly written subject at the beginning, and the subject of Warhammer was still very new when I last book, so the attitude of readers is also very different, and many people say that the quality of this book is not as good as the previous one.

However, the Warhammer book had a first order of only 300, and the first order of this book was 1300.

Warhammer's book has more than a million words, and the average order barely exceeds 1,000, and many times things that are not applauded must be popular.

Recently, I read a history article that was poisoned to the sky, all kinds of anti-common sense, anti-history, and anti-era, and the results were very good.

The reason for this is because Warhammer was a new subject at the time, whether it was to introduce the background setting or tell about some basic systems, readers would have a fresh and interesting feeling, and DND was a thing that everyone had seen badly, so they naturally felt verbose and long-winded.

Fourth, the battle with the sorcerer and the battle of the incarnation of Cthulhu are not written enough to release, probably only write about the emotions I want to release 30%, I wanted to write more, more stretched, but an old book friend of mine for a few years suggested that I not push the battle to this high level early, I think it's right, just taste it, and then worry about the epic duel?

Fifth, the sense of adventure is not enough, and this content will be added at the beginning of the second volume, because the protagonist of the first volume is really a bit weak...... You can't go to the advanced area, and you can't beat decent monsters, so how can you explore ruins, ruins, holy places, caves, and even all kinds of half-planes and outer worlds?

Can't you be like some protagonists with 50 chapters of legends, 80 chapters of gods, and 100 chapters of hand-to-hand combat with ancient evils, right?

That's why only the power of Slaanesh can start, because if the four gods have unlocked a few chapters at the beginning, the book will not be able to write a million words.

In short, if you can see this, the Son of Heaven is here to thank you, babble, this month is a lot of red bean paste updates, 21 days to write 140,000 words, I have never been so crazy before, after it should be slowed down.

Here is an announcement to take a day off tomorrow.

It is necessary to take a good look at the plot, because in the first volume, most of the characters who appear and the most scenes are in the second volume, which is also the volume in which the protagonist really begins to make a name for himself in Cormier and even in the northern country.

He's also going to start trying to get a quick fief for himself, chaos research, how can he do it without a whole piece of land?

Well, look forward to the story of the second volume.

King Hunter

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