Discuss the plot, and by the way, report the current results~
At present, the first order is just 16,000, three times better than Taimang, thirteen times better than the son, Ah Guan is a subscription, a monthly pass has not been swiped, the current results are all thanks to the full support of everyone, Ah Guan is really flattered or2!
It's only twelve o'clock now, although the rise is very slow, but it should still be able to rush up, and when the evening is over, Ah Guan will report again.
I wrote that I slept at eight o'clock in the morning, and now I'm awake again, and I feel a little confused, so I'll send a thank you message tomorrow.
Let's talk about yesterday's plot here.
In the previous plots, Ah Guan thought he was fine, but there were too many updates yesterday, and he was refined many times before he was put on the shelves, resulting in a little rough details.
Originally, the plot flow of going to Zhou's house was that the protagonist came to the door strongly, and after Jian Yuhua was down, Zhou Huaili didn't want to admit defeat, so he asked the protagonist and Jian Yuhua to fight again on the grounds of playing in the ring to see if there was a miracle.
The protagonist is definitely not angry with this, and directly asks Zhou Huaili to want Qingjiang Wharf, so he comes up to fight himself; Zhou Huaili couldn't wipe his face in public, which led to a dilemma, Luo Ning opened his mouth to play a round, let the Zhou family withdraw from the dock, admit defeat, and the protagonist entered the door to congratulate Mrs. Zhou on her birthday.
This emotional fluctuation is completely fine, but because it is more cumbersome to write, Ah Guan temporarily modified it, did not let the protagonist enter the door to pay respects, and let Zhou Huaili and Xuanyuan Chao directly play the power to oppress people, and then because of Jian Yuhua's matter, the protagonist lifted the table, Luo Ning came out to play a round, and walked away.
This leads to a lot of emotions in the first few sheets, and in the last chapter, the villain puts pressure on him again, pulls up the hatred, and the protagonist doesn't do anything.
This is a very serious mistake, not that some readers think something is wrong, Ah Guan looked back, and he didn't notice that he had written a tiger.
There are too many updates to notice the flaws in the details, and there is no way, Ah Guan posted four more chapters in the morning, just to vent this emotion, so as not to be aggrieved by everyone.
In the future, if you update it normally, there should be no more such a low-level pull hatred that is too violent.
There's also too many updates.,I couldn't sleep last night.,People are a little confused.,It's hard to say if I can write it tonight.,Ah Guan will do his best.。
The time for each chapter of Ah Guan to refine,More time than the code came out.,Even the fourteen chapters already belong to the old life.,I hope everyone can understand or2!