Plot summary, and leave of absence
This summary was written a long time ago, and there were a lot of things in those days, first of all, I was under a lot of pressure at work, and I only slept three or four hours a day, and then it snowed for the first time of the year on the weekend, and I went to eat hot pot and got drunk and cold.
My physique was already almost good, so I joined together and hit the street without accident, vomiting and diarrhea for several days.
The follow-up update was broken, and the end of the entire plot of "Commercial Eucalyptus" was written unsatisfactorily, and it was delayed until now, and it was picked up and written as a summary.
In the commercial plot, I didn't set a goal at the beginning. Specifically, there is more tension, and the protagonist should do something somewhere.
I've always believed that the characters and the plot compromise with each other, and each character has different motivations to gradually move the plot forward according to the changes in the plot.
But in this way, the senses are very messy, and the rhythm is obviously disconnected.
There was also a time when this plot was opened, and it happened to hit a sensitive period, and it was blocked every day, and it was often delayed. It makes the reading experience worse for many readers who are chasing the book.
Attention will be paid to this aspect in the future.
Finally, there is feedback from some readers, who think that this plot is meaningless, does not match the original tone, and that it seems to be written by two people before and after it is put on the shelf.
The first one, I want to give a protagonist a reason to change his mentality and have motivation to develop his career through this plot, but I didn't express it clearly, the reason is what I said above:
Each character is driving the plot, everyone is fighting, and the protagonist is not particularly conspicuous in it. This can only be said that my ability is insufficient, and I don't control the plot tension of the multi-angle duel.
If you honestly follow the mainstream, it will be much better to go directly to the plot and set a few typical genuine villain templates.
The second one, the tone of the book, is generally lighthearted, but I don't think it's a cool one.
Because I can't write the cool point of the cool article, I choose to use my strengths and avoid weaknesses and prefer a realistic style. As an aristocrat, at the level of the protagonist, there are some things that can't be avoided, if you avoid the dark-toned plot, and don't have the brightness and simplicity of the cool text, it shouldn't have the advantage of attracting readers.
Finally, talk about the quality before and after the shelves.
This is irrefutable, and it is true that I have a problem, which is reflected in the subscription data.
If I look back at the previous chapters, my trip to New York is a point. I don't know how to describe it, but the code word suddenly feels wrong.
Before this book, I had written seven or eight hundred thousand words on and off, and it was basically a good start.
I've been writing with instinct, and I don't know how to do it, and when the word count reaches 200,000 words, my habit collapses.
To open the book, I made an outline and talked a lot about the plot with the editor. But when I write down, sometimes I think I write well when I have a flash of inspiration and can be liked by readers.
But venting inspiration will go beyond the plot framework and outline, and what is written deviates from the original feeling.
The content of the update in the past few days is very flat, because I don't want to break the update, trying not to touch the main line, and use a period of foreshadowing to get back to the previous feeling.
The effect is not good, the more I force to write, the more negative it becomes, so I don't want to open the writer's backstage and not read the comments.
So, I want to take a leave of absence, take three days off.
I know that if I take a three-day long vacation, there must be readers who say that I am a eunuch, after all, most of the eunuchs are cut off like this. Or they have run out of patience and simply delete the bookshelf and don't read it.
I'll write this book, even on my knees.
I lack the experience of completing long books, so I have to make up for this part, and I can only write 200,000 words of online writers, which is not very durable.
So, I went to rest and see you in a few days.
I'm sorry for living up to everyone's expectations, and I'm grateful to my friends who are willing to wait.