"Let go of me, you dog men and women, sister, sister, you are my sister, will you tolerate him doing such nonsense? No! Do not open. Er Lei is dancing on the side, as a big thunder who has fought with her countless times, he is too familiar with his sister, and he can easily control it, so that she has no way to move if she wants to.

The man looked at her and said seriously, "I prefer to fight with you in depth!" "Fight with fists and feet, she is so thin and tender, accidentally hurt her, he will be distressed, after all, it is not easy to find a fun toy, and he is not willing to play her badly...... Oh~ Erlei, this is the so-called domineering president Wen, right? ”

I turned my head to look at her, and she was no longer struggling, staring at me with a pair of phoenix eyes.

"Okay, I won't read it for you, Da Lei, let her go, hurry up and pack it up, we have something to look for you." The two of me walked outside, sat down on the sofa, Da Lei was familiar with the road, found a paper cup, poured two glasses of water, not long ago, Erlei also came out, just came out and pounced on Da Lei, ho, the two women competed, I didn't move.

The main thing is that I can't beat the nine yin white bones, not to see C

Hue.

This battle ended in the defeat of Da Lei, I think I'm here, Da Lei can't let go, a family of brothers and sisters, this is normal, no matter how the dispute is, because of what the dispute is, it must be from childhood to adulthood, I haven't seen that kind of contradiction at all.

"And you, Qin Jia."

"Don't humiliate yourself, I'm going to take my own milk with one hand."

Da Lei didn't understand, but Erlei, who was writing online articles or domineering president articles, understood, glanced at his front, and then looked at his sister, his face turned red, she is no longer comparable to Da Lei, and the difference between the two is at least two big ranks.

"What are you adulterers looking for me? If you have nothing to do, go to the Three Treasures Palace, say it quickly, don't affect me to make money. ”

Da Lei cleaned up his makeup, which looked messy because of the big battle just now.

"You ask Lao Qin, it's him looking for you, not me looking for you."

"Huh?" Erlei turned his gaze to me.

"I want to write a novel, I'm writing it for the first time, I don't understand the doorway, your sister said you can, and you've been writing, just come and see, I'll provide you with two plans here, one is that you give me guidance, write or I will write, and the other is that you will write it, and I will provide the material."

"How much did you write?"

"It's about 50,000 words, I just started writing, I didn't write much, I don't know how those people wrote millions of dollars, and the estimated time is also in years, it feels terrible to think about it, by the way, let's not talk about this, you can help me see what I wrote first."

"Bring it." The resentment on Er Lei's face was much less, probably because he felt that he would not suffer if he looked at each other.

I took the USB flash drive and walked into the study and opened my documents.

Silence, quiet, only the occasional mouse click, my heart was a little apprehensive, there was a kind of nervousness when a primary school student asked the teacher to correct homework, but this time did not last long, Erlei only read about 10,000 contents, then turned the chair and stopped.

"How?"

"Well, how to put it, there is a feeling of exquisite middle school student composition."

Forehead......

"What do you mean?"

"Does that mean this thing can also be called a novel? Big brother, it's not me saying you, just your thing, let's not write, go back and move bricks, you said that you don't make money by doing something else, why do you have to do this, this thing needs talent, it's not a simple text pile-up, it's not a poem or a word, how long can you pile it up if you force it? There are only a few thousand Chinese characters over and over again, how many flowers can you play, and a novel with a length of millions is destined not to be as playful as what you write now. ”

I was devastated, although I don't want to admit it, but I know that this should be the most pertinent evaluation, I am not convinced, but I know that this is how it should be.

Whoever you are, it's uncomfortable to deny what you've written.

"Is it really bad?"

"The thief is bad, don't you look at it yourself? Haven't you read the novel? After you write it, you can read it for yourself, and see if you can read it. ”

"Well, I don't think I have that feeling anymore, I can't tell the difference, that's why I'm looking for you."

"Since it's bad, you give me some pointers?"

"I can't point out, because rotten wood can't be carved."

I'm special!

Erlei laughed out loud, "Tease you, you haven't written a novel at all, you don't understand this kind of long writing, you make all the mistakes that novices make, first of all, the first one is typos, this level of typos has completely affected the reading experience, many paragraphs are already the kind of words that don't reach the meaning, the other one is that you can't write, I don't know how to write, I can't teach you, this requires you to use enough time and length to exercise, you let me give you a little bit, you have to at least have a little look, I'll show you. ”

I nodded, "So they're too bad to be modified?" ”

"I can't say it's bad, I can only say that you don't understand, not for the time being."

I took a deep breath, "Then there is only a second way, I provide the material, and you write." ”

"I won't."

"Huh?"

"You're going to write the male frequency at a glance.,I'm a female frequency.,I can't get it.,It's possible to convert.,But the taste of writing is wrong.,Otherwise, do you think I don't know that there are more male frequency readers.,It's easier to make money? And I still have an unfinished book, and the income is not bad, so it's impossible to throw away the current one for the sake of a vegetarian dish that you can't see the results, the author of the online article, credit is still very important. ”

Exercise...... This trip is tantamount to running in vain.

"My suggestion is that you read it first, see what others write, summarize the points that can arouse your interest and make you continue to read with anticipation, and then when you write, use it, read more, no matter what your original purpose of writing a novel is, you first have to let others read it, no one reads it, no matter what your purpose is, it is useless, only someone reads it, your book is valuable."

Erlei paused, and then said: "You have to jump out, a novel is a novel, reality is reality, you have to jump out of the cage of reality, people's lives are already so tired, the purpose of reading novels is not to find abuse in the world of fiction, nor to live again in the fantasy world, from life, but higher than life, you really don't, think about the plots you used to fantasize about when you were young, most of the tricks of novels come from this, as for the follow-up storyline, That requires a certain amount of imagination and logical ability. ”

Erlei talked a lot, so that although I was a little resentful, I was also convinced a lot, there is a specialization in the art industry, and others can make money from this, which proves their professionalism.

I went out of the community, Da Lei didn't come with me, she stayed there tonight to sleep with Erlei.

Erlei's suggestion still has a certain operational value, I can only go back to the riverside community, download the novel app with the most traffic at present, and start reading.

For a moment, I had the urge to kill a cow for a moment.

That way, you can directly absorb traits and skill cards, so you don't have to learn everything from scratch.

Erlei doesn't recommend that I buy any training courses, in her words, it's all fart, the ball is useless, the only thing the novel relies on is to read, with a large enough reading volume and practice to improve, everything else is.

Read the book a hundred times and see its meaning, and when you have read enough novels, it will naturally be.

I was as good as a stream, and when I saw that it was more than 10 o'clock at night, I was drowsy, my phone fell, and I fell asleep, which was really hypnotic.

The next day, I changed to a different one, and then I found a way, so I read the novels that were at the top of the charts and picked them up. Then I went back to my own novels.

Well, Erlei is right, it's a novel like, and I don't know what I thought when I wrote it, but it will have something to do with inspiration, and I think I wrote it well.

When I made up my mind to do something, the current conditions were completely enough to support me to do it, in the process of reading and writing almost day and night, I could clearly feel my progress, and I didn't waste time in any part of my life, practicing physical skills, ordering takeout, reading books, writing books, and of course, I had a trick with the world's senior sisters from time to time, but I never stayed overnight, and came back to continue to do it.

There is a saying circulating on the Internet, when you write a book of more than a million words, there will be a substantial change in the level, I have been striving towards this goal, I don't care whether what I write is good or bad, just write down, of course I didn't upload it, these are written for myself to see.

After more than a month of hard work, I feel that I have not worked so hard and seriously in the college entrance examination.

In October, there were suddenly more videos of fighting tournaments on the Internet, and those videos suddenly hit the entire network as if they had been manipulated in some way, and just a few days later, they dominated the list on major video apps, and they could even be seen in the news.

Comparable to the video traffic of fighting is the consciousness transmission technology developed by various countries.

I settled down, put the fiction aside for a moment, and began to look up recent information.

At a glance, I can understand the reason why international fighting tournaments began to proliferate on a large scale.

Due to the maturity of consciousness transmission technology, there must be other plans behind this technology, and the so-called ring fighting competition is just one of the projects that conform to the development of the times and science and technology and obtain the qualification to take off.

I wonder if there will really be technologies and services such as consciousness uploading similar to movies in the future, or to create a real second world?

However, those are all things in the future, and I guess I will not be able to see it in my life, and the technical barriers are not so easy to break through, especially in the last few hundred years, the development of science and technology has slowed down significantly.

At present, this technology has been developed and tested by various countries for nearly 50 years, and it has taken almost three generations of researchers to begin to mature and put it into the market.

"Glasses, did you register the fight club you were going to get before?"

"Brother Qin, you also saw the news, right? Just went through the process a few days ago, and officially, we have already set up! ”

"What's your name?"

"Yushu Fight Club ......"