On a very serious question.

I've always wanted to write flesh-and-blood characters.

In chapter 18, however, I made a big mistake.

Instead of teaching the author to write a novel in a direct direction, I would welcome the idea of pointing out some of the flaws in the chapters.

The general direction is for example: "The protagonist is omniscient and omnipotent, what good and evil does he care?" Isn't that just a piece of data in the universe? ”

The pen is not given to you, I'm afraid of disgusting me, the protagonist is omniscient and omnipotent, he can do whatever he wants, he likes a kind life, he is happy! This is the good version of the ancestral god.

Then there is the correction of the details, which I really warmly welcome!! Every suggestion is a spur and encouragement to me.

For example, Dusty Nightglow points out in chapter 18 about Jonathan's teaching to Clark.

It's true that there is something wrong with this teaching, maybe I haven't eaten at the time, and my brain is confused, and the character design is actually a bit broken.

After reading it carefully, I found that there was indeed a problem, and it has been revised, and it should be a version that readers can accept more and more in line with the film's personality.

Because of the deletion of that paragraph and the rewrite, you may no longer see the dusty nightglow of this chapter.

But thank him anyway.

In addition, the following is the list of thanks for October 11th, in no particular order, all of them are support.

Thank:

2 commuter passes for walke alone'!

1 commuter pass 20210125154536944224746 by readers (right three times, there are too many numbers)!

One commuter pass for one small ball!

2 monthly passes for the floating eight dreams!

600 starting coins for a long night of drunken clothes!

5 recommended tickets for Qingbao Tianzun!

1 recommended ticket for the wind blowing the small wrecking ball!

4 recommended tickets for crazy hands (iron readers, undoubtedly, 4 tickets per day, rain or shine)!

4 recommended tickets for the floating eight dreams!

1 recommended ticket for book friend 20220720231947869!

1 recommended ticket for Uncle Bai!

I voted for 2 recommendations myself (phew, shameless)!

5 recommended tickets for the little monster of the Tenzan Mountains!

4 recommended votes for book friends 20220919090353936!

In the future, I will post my thanks in the last chapter of each day, and I hope you won't find it an eyesore.

I don't love cigarettes is a newcomer author, really, there is nothing new in the new, and I have been naked all the way to the present.

I really don't have any experience, and when I saw someone reading my book and had 4 collections from the first day I sent out the book, I couldn't wait to share it with my friends who sold tea.

Then I ate half a catty of people's buckwheat tea (crossed out)!

The first reader who voted for the recommendation of the extravagant dream of wanting to surpass the ordinary, I still remember that I was in the hospital at the time, sitting on that iron chair and watching, and the battery of my mobile phone was very low.

Then the book was sent on September 30th, and it was very embarrassing to encounter the editors' seven-day long vacation, and they never came to the station.

At 10 a.m. on October 8th, the sound of firecrackers woke me up at night, and I was automatically assigned 7 groups when I created the books.

But the station on the morning of the 8th was short, and it was the orange lady of the 9th group who came to pick me up, and it was a coincidence that my codeword software was called orange writing.

Later, chapters 17 to 21 rewrite torture time as many people know.

Farm version, council version, ship version, zod green light in space cop version......

In the end, I wrote the 17-chapter gas station version, because I found my original intention.

I originally wanted to write a story without regrets, that is, to keep Clark's adoptive father alive (70,000 Warriors of the Golden Age: Say More?). And now that's what I'm writing about.

That's it, you have good dreams, although it is unlikely to be seen, but don't stay up late in children's shoes, hurry up and rest!

(づ●─●)づ