The Storm Rises Chapter 235.5 Volume 2 Closing Remarks

Ah,Unconsciously wrote 1.1 million words, the second volume is over.,The two traditions of this book are still indispensable.,One is the end of each volume, and there's the character card of the protagonist.,End of the testimonial today.,Tomorrow's character attribute card of the protagonist.,The day after tomorrow, I will continue to start the update of the third volume!

It's still the same, let's talk about the direction of future planning for this book, and then talk about some of the opinions that readers have given me haha.

1* The second volume is largely written around several important people in the royal city of this book, and I still have some comments about them that I would like to give them, so I will write about them first.

Wang Yu: You can never be called a great guy.

Avia: A true genius who transcends generations.

Edward: A strong bulwark to defend those behind him.

Shire: Playwright of Destiny.

Ziggy: The crippled rebel.

Father Fang: A simple and noble powerful man.

Huguein: An unwavering Avenger.

I wonder if it matches your impression of these characters? Hahaha, I have to admit that as a rookie author, I actually did a pretty bad job in character building, and some aspects were definitely not written.

I have to apologize to all readers here, I'm sorry for not being able to shape the image of each character well, I will try to write the character's personality a little more clearly in the next third volume, and the image can stand up a little more.

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2* About the male and female protagonists

Haha,The relationship between the male and female protagonists in the second volume is also completely determined.,I also took the time to send a lot of sugar.,Although the most important thing is to advance the plot.,But I think the daily life between the male and female protagonists.,Occasionally interspersed with the promotion of the main plot.,It should be,It's a little sweeter than some industrial saccharin.,It's also quite comfortable to watch.。

I said in the closing speech of the first volume.,It's absolutely impossible for me to write a vase heroine.,Nor will I write a tool man heroine.,I think,In this regard,I've done it.,Between the male and female protagonists,No one has become anyone's vassal and burden.。

The two who grew up together, in a sense, or Avia's growth faster, after all, people are real geniuses among geniuses, Comrade Wang Yu, don't rely on the particularities brought by the crossing, how can you compare with Avia, but the female protagonist is not interested in the male protagonist in the first place, haha.

At the end of the second volume, there is no female protagonist, and the male protagonist really sent it.,Haha,Beauty saves the hero.,That's what I want to write.。

The male protagonist is not so perfect, and there are all the hole cards, when the road is at the end of the road, there is also a form of miscalculation, and when he is targeted by a big organization, and at this time, it depends on the female protagonist and some other companions, after all, Wang Yu, this guy, is really not a person.

And then let's talk about the strange power of the protagonist.,"Ripple".,Inner power•Chariot.,These are still the same as I said before.,Everything is special.,It's all from the particularity of the protagonist's crossing.,And I've thought about it for a long time.,You can rest assured.,The growth of the protagonist.,It won't be added and modified at will because of patching.。

Just like the foreshadowing of the key, the protagonist is special, and I've actually been doing some simple foreshadowing, looking at some descriptions of the protagonist in the process of becoming stronger, you will find that he is indeed not quite the same as those people in this world.

After that, the power of the protagonist will still maintain a relatively stable upward curve, not to say that it will skyrocket rapidly, and it will become stronger little by little in the process of exploring the power system of this world and understanding its own specialness.

I have to stipulate Wang Yu's strength, and now it is to the level of a high-level formal knight, if you don't take medicine, you will be beaten to death if you face two or three high-level formal knights alone, or a big knight.

Of course, counting those messy things, his strength still has to be pulled up, the Book of the Weaver, alchemy guns, potions, etc., as a book friend said, these foreign objects are also part of the strength.

Wang Yu doesn't stick to anything fixed, weapon master, all kinds of martial arts, this is a machine gun, is Wang Yu's style, honest people, how can you blow up the opposite side, how can this guy come.

3* A little question about the time this book was written.

This is also something that some readers have brought up to me, and I think it makes a lot of sense, and I haven't done a good job in this regard, that is, in terms of setting, it's a little verbose.

When I was writing this book, I wanted to write a more "peculiar" and more complete world, so when I was writing, I especially wanted to give a reasonable explanation to every power, such as the mage path and the knight path.

Writing about "inner potential", "secret energy", and "strange things" are some of the strange and novel things I want to write, and they are the more interesting parts of the world I want to write.

When fighting, I don't like to write about the kind of battle that is against the waves, I don't think this kind of battle is good, I prefer to write the kind of jojo-style, with a little bit of wit, not just a pure competition of combat power, but a battle that needs to be calculated by each other, so that it will also look like a more interesting battle.

But according to the feedback of some readers, I didn't grasp this degree in some parts, and when I wrote the setting and explained these powers, the readers looked a little tired, which I'm really sorry for, I couldn't write what I wanted to write well, and the level was still not enough......

I don't think it's necessary to write some of the settings in such detail, right, I will try to optimize this part as much as possible in the third volume, and if necessary, I will still write, because I still want to write a "more detailed" world in this book.

I'll write the setting a little more simplified, less complicated, don't occupy the space of the plot part, and read it more comfortably, after all, I've always hated the number of words!

4* About Volume III

This book has already thought of the planning of four volumes, and the title of the second volume is "The Wind and the Clouds", so it is written about what happened in the royal city, and the dog-eat-dog affair between the two kingdoms of Alestale and Seventan, in fact, the situation between these two countries is a microcosm of what is happening in this world, the whole continent, in fact, is in chaos, with some things happening haha.

The title of the third volume has been mentioned before.,It's called "Wanderings.,It's a volume that corresponds to the title of the book.,The protagonist has always been a person who hates politics and is too lazy to play any power struggle.,So at the end of the second volume.,Without hesitation, I flipped the table.,Said to the royal family of Alestale, "See you again!"

So the content of the third volume is also quite clear, the male and female protagonists leave the stage of the Kingdom of Alestre, and go on adventures and wanderings in the whole world.

If the second volume is to limit the perspective of the first volume to the male and female protagonists to more characters, and the conflict within the family has risen to the conflict between kingdoms and more forces, the third volume has pulled the perspective from the kingdom to the continental level.

More things in this world will be written in this volume, the five races, the dusty past stories, the tree of life, the sky mechanical city, the endless sea, the dragon country, etc., etc., more of this world, the fantasy part will be through this volume, through the adventures of the male and female protagonists, shown.

This is probably going to be a volume where the main line is not so obvious.,The line of the second volume,It's the war between Alestaler and Seventan.,From one of the layouts of Seventan that the protagonist met when he came to the royal city, "Lady of the Night" to the end of the war, it's considered to have completed the main line of this volume.

And the third volume, it will be about the protagonist's wandering adventures on the mainland, corresponding to what Wang Yu said, this world is very big, very peculiar, he wants to go and see everywhere, so this volume is mainly to write the protagonist's "wandering" process, maybe the main line will not be as clear as the second volume.

However, the third volume will not be a very loose volume, he only has a main line that leads all the way to the story at the end of the third volume, maybe the stories and the like will be a little miscellaneous, but in fact they will all show the world at the same time, and lead the plot to the right track.

5* The story I want to write

Regarding the part of the fourth volume, I'll keep the name of this volume secret for the time being haha, after all, there will be no mystery when you say it.

Originally, at the end of the second volume and the beginning of the third volume, it would be a very knife, very heavy story, but then I thought about it for a long time, and I killed this story, which was actually prepared for a long time and foreshadowed, so I changed it and put it in the back.

Because I don't think it's necessary.,Why do you have to send a knife.,Write a very heavy and cruel story on the protagonist and the male and female protagonists.,I think it's good to reflect the bad of this world in other ways.,Besides.,Just the willpower of the male protagonist.,Eat a knife.,Suffer.,It's not going to be good.,It's embarrassing for the heroine.,It's uncomfortable to watch.,So,I changed this part of the story to hh.。

Then I wanted to write the story of the male protagonist, in fact, as I said about him, can never be called a great guy.

You can't expect him to solve the contradictions of consciousness and the unfairness of the world.,After all, he doesn't have the ability.,There's no sense of responsibility.,The male protagonist is a macho man who will beat all the existence of malice towards him and the people he cares about.,He won't try to change the world or something.,These,Let's leave it to those great pioneers and nobles.。

However, he is able to change something, and he may have changed the direction of something unintentionally.

The key was smashed by him and indirectly changed the final outcome of the war, the birth of the Night Church, the creation of the prayer communication network, and the change of the Night's Blade, etc., and so on, when he didn't think about doing anything, this guy really had an impact, and it could be huge.

Haha, in short, this is the closing speech of the second volume, thank you for watching, your comments and views are the source of my unremitting writing! Continue to work hard to write and present wonderful stories to you!