Chapter 403.5 Volume 3 Closing Remarks
Hi hi hi hi hi ,After a few months of writing I haven't counted,It's finally the third volume of this book finished.,1.87 million words.,It's about the same length as expected.,Most of the things I want to write are also written.,Personally, I'm still quite satisfied with hhh.,I don't know what you think_(:з"∠)_,If you have any suggestions or something like that, you can talk to me in the book review area.,Or join the group and talk to me.,Anyway, the author writes books purely as a hobby.,Chatting with readers is always my happiest thing.。
And then let's talk about the third volume in a few topics as before, and the plan for the fourth and final volume, right? (ˉ?ˉ?)。
(1) About the plot of this volume,The words of this volume are basically written all the way to the end according to the outline.,Basically, there's nothing to say about major changes.,Except for the plot of the male protagonist and the devil at the beginning.,The summary at the end of the last volume was also mentioned.,It was originally a heavier ending.,But after thinking about it.,There's no need.,Changed.
The rest of the words are all the way down.,The main line of the third volume mentioned before is not so clear but there are.,You should be able to see it here.,The plot is that the protagonist knows the world outside of Alestale.,The bigger world is shown.。
Sea tide barriers, abyss creatures, starry sky, bottomless sea eyes, and so on, the characteristics of the void, the past history, the lost civilization, the origin of magic, a series of "question marks" are revealed little by little in the advancement of the plot, it can be regarded as a slight change compared to before, put these revelations in the protagonist's experience, and reduce the long-winded words as much as possible.
And then the main line is the matter of the dragon family.,From the beginning when the protagonist knew Ziggy's true identity.,It's slowly paving some things in this line little by little.,And then guide the direction to this side.,Finally, it's relatively smooth to let the plot come to this point.。
As the protagonist said at the end, this is not such a perfect result, but it is also an acceptable ending, the destruction of Ross is solved, the dragons have also gained their own freedom, and the threat of abyssal creatures that potentially threaten the entire continent has been lifted, but there will eventually be great people who have passed away, and regrets will last forever.
"HTC Narrative" is a kind of epic writing that I am quite interested in, about the rise and fall of the entire civilization, the choice of a planet and an era, for example, the feeling of "Stars" and "Civilization 6", between the gestures is a whole planet, the rise and fall of a whole kingdom, this kind of HTC feeling can particularly render the sense of epic.
So I also used some grand narratives in the book, such as the resistance made by the last civilization, the sea tide barrier, and the past battles at the bottom of the abyss, the Morning Star bomb, these things have affected the wonders of the entire continent, I don't know if it makes you feel that grand feelinghhh, the personal level is not very high, please forgive me for not writing it? (ˉ?ˉ?)。
But after writing the grand narrative, I have to return to the "individual narrative", I don't know if there are any readers like me, who don't feel anything when they see how many people have died in a certain place, but when you go to one of them and see their suffering, you will feel something.
That's pretty much it, the grand narrative is ultimately interpreted by individuals, and to write a story, you still have to put the perspective on these people, their reasons for acting, their motives, their sorrows and joys, satisfaction and regrets, in the third volume, it is on the Ziggies and those heretical dragons.
The question of the life and death of Zig, who is called a great existence, will be talked about later, and the third volume will be officially over, and I personally think it's a good node, a major disaster to understand, the rebirth of the dragon family begins, and the strength of the protagonist is further in this process.
(2) The tone of this book, seeing this, I guess you all have a little bit of your own judgment on the style of this book, of course, my "style" here refers to the cruelty of the plot, not any style or the like, at my level, I must not have been able to image big eyes, and a guy these are my idols' own style hhh.
The style of this book can actually be seen from the protagonist, there is seriousness, but it is not too cruel, and there are quite a lot of lighthearted points, that is, the protagonist actually does not suffer too much pressure.
As an earthling, the world cares about him
That's all, Avia, and those friends, and they're gone, so he's actually a guy who's been a little "out of the world" all along.
It is precisely because of this "outside the world" that the protagonist seems to be extraordinarily free, and some of his actions will always be beyond the imagination of the people of this world, because they care about and demand a lot of things, which is completely different from the protagonist.
The character of the protagonist is like this.,Basically, I don't care much about other people's opinions.,I won't deliberately be influenced by others to stuff the burden on my shoulders.,This can actually be seen from Ziggy and those beings who have a mission.,These beings are the ones who can really be called "great", and the protagonist is neither self-proclaimed nor really not.
This freedom makes the overall tone of the article relatively relaxed, because the protagonist has not had any pressure, he can leave if he wants, and he is not afraid of death, which is also what this book wants to write hhh, it can only be said that being able to "wander" is also a considerable wealth~
This tone allows me to write more freely, and I can also write what I want to write in this book, as the protagonist of an outsider, as a chaotic person, to change the direction of the whole world, he is not the strongest, but he can always bring variables at critical moments.
But there's also a problem.,It's emotional ups and downs.,Because of this freedom.,All the events experienced by the protagonist are relatively flat.,It's not that there are no twists and turns.,It's just that the pressure.,It's just that the pressure doesn't always cover the protagonist.,I guess you also feel this way.,When you look at the protagonist.,You won't feel that tension.。
That's a pretty big problem, and while I can say that the protagonist is the one who can make some particularly bad things less bad around this guy, it's a fact that the lack of emotional ups and downs is.
This aspect is also the reason why the protagonist's "character is too hard", he is so determined that he will not collapse, he will not be afraid, he will not be sad, and his mood will not fluctuate much, which is both a characteristic and a flaw.
So the next one, that's right, hhh, I'm planning the next book, don't worry, I think too much every day, I think about the plot of this book, I am thinking about the next book, and I won't lose sight of one or the other.
The next book will be a very serious, cruel, and crazy world, including the protagonist, and I will dig deep into his emotions, not like this one, a "strong-willed" will cover all the suffering, he will be oppressed, suffering, and there will be a high blade on his head that may fall at any time.
Of course, dig deep into the core of the protagonist and peel off the emotional coat that is closer to ordinary people, he will still be the outrageous macho man, as for why he likes to write macho men, hey, I just like this kind of character that will not be entangled.
As for the theme, it will be "Cyber God", a chaotic and disorderly world, a world of futuristic technology, restraint things, superpowers, and a bunch of elements of the wasteland, and the protagonist's experience will change from the "travel" of the book to a real struggle to survive.
Mecha,Transformation,Big guns and guns, these men will write romantically fiercely.,Don't worry about it's too miscellaneous and messy.,After all, if you think about this book carefully.,In fact, it's just borrowing the outer layer of "Western Fantasy".,The various settings inside are all broken out by me.,It's also quite miscellaneous.,At present, it's not too messy.,At least there's no obvious contradictory setting and plot hhhh.。
I'll talk about the plan for the next book here, after all, the book has not been written, and it's too good to talk about the next book, but the focus is actually on the tone of the book, about the topic of cruelty and lightness.
Regarding the life and death of the characters, the point that distinguishes cruelty from ease for me is whether they "died deservedly" or whether they died meaningfully, like the sacrifice of the professor at the end of this volume, which is actually completely great, he follows his own will and burns his own life, this kind of death, in fact, can only be called regret, far from cruelty. qδ.net
The real cruelty is what a certain character does with all his might, but in the end it is meaningless, human life is like grass, and he may be still talking the next moment, and the next moment he is torn apart by a monster that suddenly sprang out, such as "Breaking Free from the Food Chain", a book I have read before, may be talking on the previous page, and the next moment it will be directly halved.
And these characters have to play supporting roles with the protagonist all the way, and they will only find out about this at that time
It feels cruel that there are actually a lot of people who died in the war in this book, but I deliberately didn't write about it.
The people who know the Night's Blade, a group of old members of the Night Church, may have intersected with the protagonist, and suddenly disappeared when he experienced something, which is normal, after all, all kinds of dangers exist, but the feeling of writing about it in detail is completely different from not mentioning it.
I'm definitely not going to write this book, because that's the tone, and the next book can really pick up those extremely cruel facts, and now if I deliberately write like this, it will become a failure, so the death is what these characters will inevitably have.
(3) Talking about the tone of the third volume and the whole book, it's time to talk about the story of the fourth volume, the title of the fourth volume is "Ideal Country", and when you hear this name, you know that it doesn't look like Wang Yu will do the whole thing, so what will be written will be kept secret for the time being.
As mentioned earlier, this book consists of four volumes
Welcome to the New World, Wang Yu
"The Storm Rises"
"Wandering"
"Imaginary Country"
That's it.,Now it's time to finish writing three volumes to the last volume.,The fourth volume won't be too long.,As mentioned before.,It's probably a little longer than the first volume.,But it's certainly not as good as the second or third volume.。
This is also some of my personal habits, don't delay, finish the story you want to write, and end it safely, forcibly extend and water, it's meaningless, not hhhh.
The plot has progressed to this point, and it has slowly reached the final stage, and many things are gradually revealed, the origin of magic, the past story, and the particularity of the protagonist......
The strength of the protagonist has also begun to reach a level where it can greatly influence the world, and to the levels I want to write, participate in → influence→ change → dominance, this level, that limited ability, will gradually grow to the extent that it can set off waves head-on.
So,That's the summary at the end of the third volume.,Update the character attribute skill card of the protagonist tomorrow up to the third volume.,I'll write the fourth volume well.,See you then! ~( ̄▽ ̄~)~