This time the Devil's Realm is a relatively long story.,At the end of the end, I think everyone should be dissatisfied.,I'm not satisfied either.。

In fact, the main reason is that this incident is not the main line, and its advancement of the main line is almost zero, resulting in a very serious separation from the outside world, so it can't be delayed for too long, otherwise I still have a long time to write, such as Su Ming's death and Zhou Xiaoxiao's transformation, which should have been portrayed.

But the length of the event is too long, so I take this method of ending, of course, I also almost finished writing the wonderful before choosing to end like this, even if I continue to write, I depicted the fluctuations of human beings in the later stage, and the worldview of the devil's realm will not continue to extend, and the previous portrayal of people's hearts is a bit too much, too repeated will lead to fatigue, so the reading experience will not be very good.

If I continue to write, I will write about beating the referee, and then sacrificing some people, Su Ming died in battle, but the others still maintained their faith, and finally left a lot of half-grown children, the children were powerless to fight the referee, but they were full of dedication in the game, and finally died until thirteen people broke away.

Because there is no twist, this kind of long length is very risky to write, I inserted Jiang Yichuan to the island to find the demon of love before the end, and Wei Donglai held a meeting to lift Su Ming's wanted warrant, also so that Su Ming has something to do after he escapes, and diverts the reader's attention, so as not to let the readers see the devil's realm: Huh? That's it? It's over without writing anything clearly?

The way I deal with this dilemma is not quite the same as most authors, most authors like to pull the progress, so that although it is complete, it feels a bit anticlimactic, I like to skip it, and then say a little detail afterwards, so that it seems that I can still write a lot of things with content (in fact, there is no content at all) In contrast, other authors are copies that are unfinished, and I am the eunuch of the copy.

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Let's talk about the rest.

This book is a million words, I have written it for so long, I have a lot of experience, and the results are much better than the previous book.

The main shortcomings of my writing are the lack of suspense, the protagonist's poor subjective initiative, and the fact that he is basically led by the nose, so he has a poor perception of some readers, and there is an irreconcilable conflict between the worldview and the main line.

And the description in the early stage of the book is too scattered, and the aristocracy or something actually readers don't like to read it, and the selling point is wrong, so there is no desire to read it (at that time, I also had the idea of practicing the pen casually, because I studied the rebirth of the city to cultivate immortals, and I couldn't wait to try it, so there was a problem with my brain).

The main line of the protagonist is to defeat the unknowable demon, and the worldview here is full of weirdness, constantly emerging weird, that is, the weirdness encountered by the protagonist is destined to be all related to the unknowable demon, otherwise it will seem too coincidental, unlike the real world, which also leads to the weak role of the copy in advancing the big plot.

Even now, no solution has been figured out.

As for the way to try to improve the writing in the future, it is to make the protagonist more subjective and active (practice first),Cao Fengling and his gang are the protagonist's own first batch of younger brothers.,And then the molten iron royal family will also intersect with the protagonist.,The new Heart of Chaos is what I use to strengthen the relationship between the copy and the main line.,It's also a new attempt.。

I hope you will continue to support and give your opinions at any time, and I will think about the good opinions I think are good.

Overall, I think the level of writing has improved compared to the previous book (simply talk about the level and don't talk about the plot, otherwise the old book friends will start spraying again, and there are very few new books that are better than the old books, and I really cry).

In addition, when I have inspiration recently, I will write the beginning of a new book, I have recently written several new book beginnings, there is a beginning, the group friends all say it is good, I think it is quite 6, the next book will definitely make progress again, wow~ I look forward to it.

I can't wait to open a new book right away, but it's still a long time before it's finished, and I'm really tired

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