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I've always insisted that this is not a bad end, but the end of a stage, of course, everyone's opinion has nothing to do with me, I am willing to lie down and laugh at it, saying that it is not finished, and that it is a eunuch, after all, it does look like it is unfinished.
Let's sort out the pit first, everyone thinks that I am a lighthouse, a four-story world, and an unknowable demon.
The way of destroying the unknowable demon has already hinted at it, killing the unknowable demon is a strategic thing, not a combat thing, just like my ending, at first I didn't plan such a bland ending, I wanted to let Su Ming fall into a trap and fight Song Liufeng, and the deputy director was to help Su Ming win this battle as a supporting figure, and then end up in becoming the strongest in the world.
But I think that Su Ming is too stupid, and he can't see through such a little trick, so he chose an alternative solution, a peaceful solution, and after a peaceful settlement, Ambrose and the other mysterious eyes will naturally not fight with Su Ming, because people with normal IQ know what will happen, so in the end, they don't even fight.
Frankly, I regret it a little, maybe it's better to write like this than to write Su Ming as an idiot, at least after the hearty battle, the reading experience may be a little better.
In fact, I thought about it for a long time, because halfway through writing, I found that this book has a big problem, resulting in the plot is not coherent at all, and the sense of separation is also very strong, no matter how hard I try to write, it will not improve the grade of the whole book, it can only make a certain part of the book look better.
The Devil's Realm is an attempt.,After carefully arranging the plot, I found that there was no foreshadowing in the early stage, resulting in no way out.,Even if a script is well written, it's difficult to attract people to see the ending.,The subscription data also shows that this book is pulled to don't want it.,The latest chapter is more than two hundred.,The first order is more than six thousand.,The average order is more than 1,000.,This kind of data shows that I'm very bad.。
But my collapse is not the kind of outrageous character collapse, the collapse of the plot, but the story is no longer attractive at all, and no one wants to continue watching.
I'm sorry for Su Ming and Xia Xiaoyu, in some episodes for the sake of practicing and trying to make them do things they wouldn't have done at all, and I'm sorry for Flora, because readers hate her for cutting off what should have been a wonderful plot.
The biggest problem with this book is that the main line is too vague, but it lacks foreshadowing, so that unlike the previous book, even if the hammer in the east and the hammer in the west can still be completely connected in the early stage, so that the reader can have a complete impression of the story.
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Continuing to talk about the problem of unfinished endings, I am trying to avoid unfinished endings, the four-story world and the lighthouse are just background boards, I have never described more detailed things about these two worlds, I think it's strange to say that I am unfinished for these two reasons, and can you accept that Su Ming goes to the upper level alone, and the others can't go up?
Everyone can go up, is it so cheap to go up? The upper plane is similar to the ascension of immortal cultivation? The immortal cultivators are pursuing ascension, do you see Liu Lingshan and the others want to go up?
But it's okay, everyone says that the end is the end of the end, the market judgment is the only standard recognized by most people, and this ending is also a bit bad in my opinion, because it is indeed quite unfinished, and I feel that I can write a lot...... But if you really write it, it will definitely collapse, and then it will not be a bad end of this level.
In order for the unknowable demon to appear, continue to kill those members of the mysterious eye who are running around, I feel that there is no pleasure in chasing mice, how to write in the middle?
If you don't write in the middle and let the unknowable demon appear, it will be no foreshadowing and no pleasure.
Not to mention the upgrade, it is close to the current plane is invincible, there is no crisis in the upgrade channel, and it can't be suppressed first and then raised, who wants to see this kind of writing?
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I'm sorry Su Ming, Xia Xiaoyu and Flora, they are obviously very interesting people, but in such a mediocre story, I really want to rewrite it.
But forget it after thinking about it, the story of Su Ming and Xia Xiaoyu will be talked about after the strength improves, let's write a book first, it will be regarded as a summary of the experience of this failure and an actual combat drill.
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I'm sorry for the readers, but I'm only sorry for the paid readers, I'm really sorry, although I tried.
I also saw people say that I ended up losing my character, and I was quite congested at first, but after thinking about it, I felt that it was a logical fallacy.
Because I've done my best to end it, continue to write, with my current ability and the previous story foundation that was not very good, it will only get worse, so I think the ending like this is just right now, stop the loss in time.
Therefore, it can't be said that I have a problem with my character, I have a problem with my character, but readers think that the book is rotten and they think that I will write better, but they don't know that my own strength is like this.
So it's not that no one reads the next book, it's not that my character is bad, and everyone doesn't read it, it's just that my last book was bad, so no one reads it.
So the solution is also very simple, as long as the next book is well written, then the next book can return to normal.
After all, this bowl of rice may have to be eaten for a lifetime, and the long-term vision should be long-term, so everyone will temporarily have a problem with my character.
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