After seeing some of the comments in the previous chapter, I was very confused, some people said that they wrote about the difference between immortals and mortals, and the warmth and coldness of people were well written, and some people said that the Virgin Mary was ...... The latter left the author confused.

After repairing for a long time, I first removed the leftover food box for the child, thought about it, and simply removed the protagonist's speech, and replaced it with a radish head, and then simply replaced it with a radish head and let the other party go.

and removed Brother Qiao's nickname and changed it to "Brother Yu". This was originally to write about Brother Qiao's ignorance, and was influenced by the charter wife. But apparently the author's pen is not enough, and things are progressing too slowly, and the reader sees it differently than the author thinks. Or change it to black and white, which is suitable for readers.

If you can fix everything, you should feel much better.

In fact, this kind of plot problem has been committed by Fang Lao before. Now realize again that character interactions are really hard to write. In addition to the villain's malice, the protagonist's kindness can't be sent casually, even to children. Lessons learned, lessons learned!

In fact, Cuckoo also knows that the best way to avoid this kind of thing that is easy to touch the poison point is not to touch it, that is, not to touch the characters. If you don't touch the characters, there will naturally be no problem of character fire and misunderstanding.

But obviously, this kind of laziness is lazy, a character clicks a character, the author can't grow, and the relationship between the characters can't be enriched. There is also a reason why cuckoo has so many characters.

Everything that can be repaired has been repaired, and the cuckoo is not the author of the head iron. Moreover, if readers have opinions, most of them also mean that the author's technology is problematic, which is also a promoting effect.

As for the rest, except that it seems to be divided into two chapters, a little water, there should be no problem (it was intended to be combined into one chapter of four thousand words, but it can't be operated when it is put on the shelf).

Cuckoo was stunned for a long time, and privately thought that there should be no problem to start with the characters, and the charter wife did not appear out of nowhere, and her appearance of taking her son to rub rice this time was also accompanied by a small pretending plot, rather than pure foreshadowing.

The problem should be the heat, so the rest of the story has to be told according to Cuckoo's own ideas. The only thing that can be spoiled is that the charter lady really didn't end well, she has good things......

Report the results.,The first chapter is on the shelf.,It's already 5100 subscriptions.。

Thank you very much!

This is an unprecedented result in the history of the cuckoo!

The progress of achievements is inseparable from everyone's support, as well as reminders and reminders. The cuckoo will continue to write with heart, and I hope to continue to improve, thank you!