Regardless of whether this is true or not, being able to say such a thing has already proved that this Luo Fei is definitely not an idle person.

"What's that for?"

Shirley asked.

"Because of my eldest brother's excellence in movies, because he really likes this industry, because of his professionalism."

Luo Fei said sincerely.

"After all, there are now more than eighteen insurance companies in the world that have blocked Big Brother, aren't they?"

Luo Fei said with a smile.

"Hahaha, you, alas......"

Shirley was amused and laughed, both appreciative and helplessly pointing at Luo Fei, shaking her head while laughing.

This Luo Fei is really an interesting person, although his mouth is poorer and his skin is a little better, but his words are reasonable, and it can be seen that he is very sincere.

Luo Fei shrugged and smiled.

"I'm not from a martial arts background, and I'm not mature in terms of drama, but in terms of literature and drama, I think I'm still a little stupid."

"I can't say anything very nice, there are many places in this script where the polishing is a little shallow, and the character creation is more rigid and not three-dimensional."

As he spoke, Luo Fei turned the script around and pointed to the first scene in it.

"Here, Ah Zong led his gang into the mansion to rob it, and everything was too decent."

"Rob, call the police, kidnap, confront, escape."

"Everything is too one-sided, and it can't reflect the character of Azong's character at all."

"We all know that Ah Zong is not short of money, he came to rob purely for stimulation, to achieve self-indulgence and venting, but it is not reflected in this scene at all."

That's right, the reason why Luo Fei frowned after flipping through the script a little was because he found that this script had many deficiencies compared with "New Police Story" in his original world.

It's like an unfinished semi-finished product, lacking polishing.

Say yes, you can use it.

But after polishing, it will definitely be upgraded to a higher level.

This is a good film, if it is released roughly, Luo Fei is really unwilling.

If you have the ability to get it right, why not.

The response is so fast!

Sister Shirley secretly praised in her heart.

After scanning the script throughout and understanding the general plot outline, this Luo Fei actually pointed out the shortcomings in the script in such a short period of time!

It seems that the powerful faction in the mouth of the media, Luo Fei, who slashed 400 million first-day box office in his first movie, is a bit of a real thing!

Sister Shirley was very happy.

First, I am glad that Luo Fei can treat the movie with such a serious attitude.

The second is that I am glad that I did not look away.

"Then tell me, if it were you, how would this opening plot be designed to reveal the personality and appeal of the character Azong."

Sister Shirley asked with interest.

"If it were me, I wouldn't choose to let the guards secretly call the police."

Luo Fei raised his eyebrows.

"I'll have the guards call the police."

"What?"

"Call the police, call the police in front of me."

Luo Fei said it very easily, but the arrogance and ruthlessness in his eyes were undoubtedly revealed at a moment!

For a moment, Sister Shirley only felt that she was cold all over!

What an arrogant Luo Fei!

No! It should be said that he is so arrogant!

With a simple slight change, Ah Zong's fun-making mentality and arrogant momentum came out!

I'm a robber, I'm here to rob, I order you to call the police!

How arrogant and lawless can a bandit be to do such a thing!

This simply doesn't take the police seriously!

One move made the character of Ah Zong three-dimensional!

"Awesome......"

Sister Shirley muttered.

Although she doesn't understand screenwriting, even as an ordinary audience, she can tell the difference between the good and the bad.

Undoubtedly, Luo Fei's change, although small, is enough to reverse the finishing touch of this opening.

Even after listening to Luo Fei's suggestion, Shirley went back to read the original script, and instantly felt bored.

Moreover, in Luo Fei's eyes at that moment, the cold gas that burst out made her feel cold on her back.

Although she had been investigated and visited for a period of time before, this was the first time Shirley had felt Luo Fei's acting skills in person.

It can be said that when Luo Fei entered the play, he simply exuded an evil aura from the inside out, which made people shudder.

Ah Zong, this high-IQ, psychologically distorted, and out-of-character second-generation rich character is simply tailor-made for Luo Fei!

Luo Fei smiled and returned to normal.

"Of course, this is only a small point, and there are some more places to come, and I have a little suggestion."

"Alright, Azong."

Shirley waved her hand, completely impressed by Luo Fei's talent.

"I don't understand the script, discuss the details of the script in the future, tomorrow I will contact my eldest brother and Director Chen Musheng, you can do a video discussion remotely, you tell me, I will have nothing else to say except that you are too good."

Shirley said with a smile.

Sister Shirley was shocked!

She originally thought that Luo Fei's rash submission of opinions on the script would cause dissatisfaction with Sister Shirley, and even affect the cooperation between the two parties.

But I never expected that Luo Fei would work in vain and actually persuade Sister Shirley?

And bluntly said that Luo Fei was 'too good'?

Are all these big names like this?

Can't lick it, you have to be slapped to be comfortable?

She guessed right.

Ordinary people lick Sister Shirley, but she really doesn't even look at it.

The assistant did her part, and the people who came to kneel and lick saw too much, so they had already developed immunity.

What she sees is not how modest, sincere, or even humble this artist is.

With this high level of status, there is no need for the humility and humility of others to set off oneself.

What she is looking for is the kind of person who has real skills.

Undoubtedly, Luo Fei is such a person.

Although it is a bit unruly to bring up the flaws in the script in person, what people say is reasonable, and it is really good to change it, not the kind of random correction of the piano.

Take it a step further for the final presentation of the movie!

She, Shirley, raised her hands to welcome!

The entertainment industry is not only a place to talk about human feelings, but also a place to talk about strength!

In the end, Sister Shirley will contact her eldest brother and director Chen Musheng at half past nine tomorrow morning to hold a remote video discussion meeting for the three of them to discuss the script.

Sister Shirley personally drove Sister Shirley back to the hotel where she stayed, and only Luo Fei, Zhou Jun and the assistant were left in the office.

"Whew-"

Zhou Jun breathed a sigh of relief when he saw Sister Shirley walking away.

"You're scared to death."

Luo Fei also relaxed, leaned back on the sofa, and lit a cigarette.

"What's wrong?"

"How can there be a contract before it comes down, and the actors start to find fault with the script, not to mention Sister Shirley, but if there is a stronger agent sitting opposite, he will just slap the table and leave!"