Chapter 222: Writing a New Script

Now anyone can go to make movies.

What?

You say you haven't made a movie?

Do you dare to say that you are a good actor?!

In the development of the times, money is becoming less and less valuable, and a group of people want to change the development of the industry.

The first to pour into the entertainment industry were coal bosses.

They have money and aesthetics, and they don't mix with the director's production, and they do produce a series of good works.

However, this has not been accepted by the clear stream of this circle, and it has a mixed reputation so far.

With the fall of the coal bosses and the rise of the real estate industry, these bosses also began to seek a good name.

After all, how can the profits from making movies at that time be compared with the real estate of Xunmeng's development?

Under their ability to make money, the film industry has surpassed neighboring countries, and many directors have appeared in a certain period of time!

Ning Hao, Guan Hu and others are representatives of this group of people.

Nowadays, the development of the Internet is faster than everyone imagined, and under the situation that anyone can be online and everyone can understand the overall situation of knowledge from the Internet, it is not very difficult for ordinary people to make movies.

And Ma Yudong is still an insider and an actor.

He knows how to make movies better than the average person.

How to make a good movie?

Find a good script!

Script, script, a play.

A good script can attract investment and actors, which will arouse the attention of the theater chain and the focus of the audience when buying tickets.

Here we have to figure out one thing, what is a script, and what is the script that the movie needs.

A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step.

Ma Yudong has also made a lot of movies in the past, including TV series and movies, and he has also seen various types of films and television.

He naturally understands what the script is.

A film script is the most complete written form of a film work.

In addition to the dialogue book, it also includes detailed descriptions of the characters, sets, stage direction, and various sound effects.

To put it simply, write a good story.

It's easy to write a story, but it's hard to write a story well.

A good movie isn't necessarily a good story.

But on the other hand, a good story is 100% a good movie.

This is why Robert McGee attaches so much importance to the status of screenwriter.

This old man is not liked by many Nolan fans, because he openly said: "Interstellar is not a good story, Avatar is a good story." ”

It's an obvious thing, but Robert McGee doesn't finish it.

Interstellar is indeed very flawed in the story, as he says, but he doesn't say that Interstellar is not a good movie.

The movie Interstellar is more about its special effects, its grandeur.

Human curiosity about the unknown and anticipation for the future.

But none of these need a lot of funds and technical support, and Ma Yudong is just a little-known movie actor.

Maybe he has a certain amount of box office appeal, but he switched to making movies and almost started from scratch.

So he needs to write a good story to gain the support of others.

Writing a story is the least cost-free.

It's just some waste.

The blind sister who took a bath was wearing the latest swimsuit she bought, but her eyes were staring at the bear-like man with extremely resentful eyes.

The blind sister glanced at the bathroom behind her.

Perhaps in order to attract couples, only a layer of white frosted glass is used between the toilet and the bedroom.

But what does white glass block? It only adds another sense of déjà vu.

But this uncle, he really didn't even watch it, but has been studying that broken script!

The blind sister is very angry now, is it possible that she is such a big beauty here, and she is not as attractive as a script?

deliberately made some noise to attract the uncle, but her uncle was still as steady as Mount Tai.

With the scent of shampoo, he put his head on his uncle's shoulder, and the two of them were very close to each other, "Uncle, what are you writing?" ”

Ma Yudong took a deep breath, "I'm writing a script." ”

"Script? How is it written, I want to see. ”

Ma Yudong was about to get up and give her the chair, but she underestimated her.

I saw a blind man wearing a swimsuit without any scruples, coming to him, condescending.

After glancing at him twice, he turned his back, slowly bent down, and sat in the same chair as her.

Pillow with a bear cushion.

The blind sister also deliberately held the script and read it aloud, "...... Uncle, why did you write these two pages? ”

The hair fragrance and body fragrance made Ma Yudong have no time for anything else, and subconsciously held up the dragon fruit, "This swimsuit is newly bought?" ”

The blind sister trembled slightly, "Hmm~"

Trembling, but firmly, he raised his arms so that the uncle could control the dragon fruit.

After some time, the blind sister sat on the bed and put the dragon fruit in the bag.

"Uncle, what kind of story are you going to write this time?"

Ma Yudong drank pure milk, "It is a love story between a hero and a beauty!" ”

Oh?

Uncle not only opened his mind, but also opened his heart.

Heroic love story, this is a classic repertoire of love scenes.

There are many such movies every year, but they are not bad at the box office, and love is the main theme movie that lasts for a while.

The blind sister was curious, "Uncle, will the hero and heroine of your script be together?" ”

Ma Yudong thinks about it, the female protagonist is holding the last photo of the male protagonist..."We will be together forever!" ”

"That's great!"

The blind sister held the mobile phone of the two, her mobile phone is a photo of the uncle, and the uncle's mobile phone is her photo, and the two mobile phone screens are put together to form a group photo, which is the best souvenir of this trip to Sanya.

It's just like the story written by the uncle.

Hearing this, Ma Yudong put down his pen, leaned back in his chair and closed his eyes, "I mean, if you go to the cinema to watch a movie, what will the love movie you choose look like?" ”

Ma Yudong gave specific examples, tragedy, or happy ending.

The blind sister thought about it, combined with the current state of mind, "I still like the happy ending, but it's best to mix some tears in the middle, and suppress it first if you want to promote it~"

"That's it~"

The blind sister grinned, "I am me, a different firework." ”

Ma Yudong patted her feet, "Where are you going?" Have you washed your feet? "When I turned around just now, I almost touched my mouth!

This annoyed the blind sister, and her long legs stretched out again, "I took a shower just now, I don't believe you." ”

Ma Yudong pushed his foot away with his right hand, and then smelled his left hand, and there was indeed a milky smell of shower gel.

Uncle pervert!

Obviously the shower gel is orange-flavored!

The blind sister wrapped herself tightly in the quilt, her cheeks were crimson, "Uncle is too sexy, I don't allow my uncle to go to my bed today, sleep in my quilt, and don't let my uncle touch me." ”

"And where do I sleep?"

"Then I don't care, who makes Uncle a frequent visitor here? Go find your little goblin! "She's grumpy!

The blind sister threw herself to the other side of the bed, and her mouth was upright.

Alas...

Ma Yudong let out a long sigh, he knew that the ending would be like this, so why did he refuse the other party a few years ago?

I can only sigh that I still didn't escape from this woman's palm in the end.

Thinking of those years, the blind sister was almost always around him, almost a way to post upside down.

At that time, his heart had not changed, and he still felt annoying.

But after changing his mood, he realized that the blind sister liked him so much, and he couldn't do without this girl.

Just when this feeling of longing came to my heart, I suddenly had inspiration, picked up the pen, and sprinkled a large article, page two, page three...

Only the tip of the pen rustled on paper in the room.

The blind sister waited there for a long time, but her uncle really didn't go to bed?

Angry?

glanced at the uncle, and saw that he was struggling to write.

It's really annoying.

But he didn't want to disturb his uncle.

As the saying goes, serious men are the most handsome.

With the blessing of the love brain, the blind sister actually found a trace of handsomeness from the uncle.

Although not obvious...

In the middle of the lake, she fell asleep.

Nothing was said all night.

When you open your eyes again.

It was already past eight o'clock in the morning, and the sun was shining on the bear claws on the blind sister's body, and the blind sister Mihu opened her eyes and yawned, "What time is it?" ”

The voice rang in my ears, "It's half past eight." ”

"Then I'll get some more sleep!"

Ma Yudong said: "Don't sleep, I have already put breakfast on the table, and it will be cold later." ”

"Besides, the bald head will call us after a while and invite us over."

Bareheaded?

The blind sister suddenly remembered the watermelon girl from yesterday.

yes, they were with watermelons yesterday... Phew, Xu bald head has an appointment.

The blind sister got up, took off the swimsuit from the cabinet next to her, folded it and put it in the suitcase.

He took out another set of plain underwear from the suitcase.

Ma Yudong caught a glimpse, "Didn't you always want to wear that newly bought swimsuit?" I wore it all the time when I went to bed yesterday, why don't I wear it now? ”

The blind sister rolled her eyes and continued to get dressed, they were all old husbands and wives, there was no need to change clothes and hide in the bathroom, "Yes! I slept with it last night, but why did it appear on the table this morning, uncle, can you give me a reasonable explanation?! ”

Ma Yudong coughed dryly, pretending not to hear the question.

The blind sister scolded: An uncle who has a thief's heart but no guts.

Designated to learn from Xu Guangtou!

………

Maybe the watermelon girl is too attractive to bees and butterflies, Xu Guangtou put the meeting place in a tea room this time.

Xu Guangtou took a sip of tea, "I called Huang Bo yesterday, and he was still filming." But when he heard that you were going to get a script to make a movie, he was shocked! ”

"He also scolded me on the phone, saying that the two of us made a movie and didn't call him, and it was not interesting enough to scold the two of us."

"He said he was going to invest money and be our grandfather on the capital."

The blind sister couldn't help but laugh and endure very hard.

Uncle's friends are really interesting, and they like to take advantage.

There was not only the fragrance of tea in the room, but also incense in a calm mind, Ma Yudong asked: "No! He was filming before, and I finished filming a movie, why is he still filming? ”

Xu Guangtou scolded with a smile: "Don't you know that grandson? Since becoming an actor, he has to make at least three movies a year, which can be called a model worker in this industry. It's really not enough to make money, and it's all dead. ”

Ma Yudong also admired, "Then he is indeed a grandson!" ”

The goal he set for himself is to shoot two films a year.

If you pay attention to quality, you can do it once a year.

Especially if he wants to make his own movie, it is not too long to sharpen his sword in two years.

Okay, Ma Yudong motioned to the blind sister to take out the script and put it on the table, "I wrote the story in my mind last night, how about you come and take a look?" ”

Xu Guangtou took it, "I'll see, you guys drink tea and chat." ”

The blind sister continued to sit with the watermelon girl and talk about various cosmetics, or gossip in the entertainment industry.

But the most important thing is to ask for the secret recipe!

She didn't believe anyone was so talented!

Ma Yudong was smoking by the window, and when he was about to light the third cigarette after smoking the second cigarette, Xu Guangtou finally finished watching the movie.

He took off his glasses, rubbed his sour eyes, and handed the script to the two women who had been curious since the beginning.

Finally, he asked Ma Yudong, "Who are you stimulated?" ”

How do you suddenly make a romance movie?

Besides, love movies, love movies, you still have a tragic ending.

Xu Guangtou is really not sure about Ma Yudong's current state of mind, and he is beginning to pervert.

Ma Yudong looked at the blind sister, I learned it all from you!

The blind sister glared back at the uncle, it is your problem to be perverted! Otherwise, uncle, why are you only touching her conscience, isn't it dragon fruit on the other side?!

Ma Yudong poured tea and moistened his throat, "What's wrong with the love movie?" I've made so many movies, and I've never made a romance movie, I want to try it, can't I? ”

Okay, okay...

Xu Guangtou laughed angrily.

However, I have to say that the setting of the male protagonist in this script is very much in line with Ma Yudong's character design.

A muddled gangster, living at his brother-in-law's house, without a job, living a life of helping loan sharks collect debts.

This is closely related to Ma Yudong's image all along, and it has not subverted the audience's perception of him, and to a certain extent, it can also retain his exclusive fan group.

It's just that this time the gangsters became heroes.

Judging from this point alone, Xu Guangtou knows that Ma Yudong has a serious attitude towards this movie!

The story is good, but he has a stomachache when he watches it.

This script cannot be said to be a complete script, because it is just a story, a story of thousands of words that Ma Yudong spent a night writing.

The storyline is simple.

The actor has been living an unprofessional life of helping loan sharks collect debts.

The money he lent out must be recovered, and he claims to be a pastor but does not understand human feelings, and always looks at strange women from his pants, as if he has nothing to do with the word "love".

But one day, when he went to ask for an account according to the boss's words, a woman named Haoting appeared in front of him in the hospital, and he felt what love was for the first time.

That's right, there is love at first sight in this play.

And the plot of love at first sight was actually thought up by a man as strong as a bear.

It's very bloody.

Then it was full of bloody plots.

But if that's all there is, it's not enough, so Ma Yudong goes on to write later:

After the male protagonist fell in love with the heroine at first sight, he began his unique way of pursuit.

How unique?

Ma Yudong hasn't figured it out yet, but what he introduced on paper is that the male protagonist broke into the heroine's life with a tough attitude.

The male and female protagonists, from the heroine's hatred at the beginning, to the later touching when they saw him take care of his unconscious father.

And because he is obviously a debtor, but the bosses of the shopping street have a very good reputation for this person, and they are curious.

Touched + curious.

With various emotions, the two end up walking together with the death of the heroine's father.

The blind sister who watched this story gasped for a while, and the watermelon girl on the side looked at her curiously, "What's wrong with you?" ”

The blind sister shook her head, but her eyes were always on the story.

Although the uncle did not finish writing this story, almost all the small scenes in the story appeared in her and her uncle's daily life.

And it's also a small act when she pursues her uncle.

After so long, I didn't expect the uncle to remember it in his heart and write it in the script.

The blind sister suddenly discovered that in fact, she still didn't know much about this uncle, and the uncle was actually very romantic!

It's just that it's not like other people's romance in appearance, and the romance of the uncle lies more in some details!

Moisturizing things silently.

Just as she was watching it with a burst of sweetness, the story took a turn.

The actor had an accident.

When he was working once, he found out that he had a tumor, and it was still in an advanced stage, and he couldn't live for a few years.

So the actor chose to give up the treatment himself.

Since it can't be cured, then it won't be cured, leaving the money to his family and the people he loves.

So, the actor invested his money in his boss, because the other party said that he would double his money.

didn't expect that the boss was actually desperate and wanted to clear his identity, and ran away with his money.

On the other hand, the heroine thought that the man washed his hands in a golden basin, but she didn't expect him to change his life.

On this day, he also broke up with the male protagonist.

From the beginning of the scenery, the family was complete, but when he was alone at the end, the actor completely collapsed.

When I woke up again, I was in the hospital.

Doctors told him that his symptoms were getting more dangerous and that he might not survive for a few years.

Feeling that he was short of time, the actor desperately found the boss, and when he was seriously ill, he could only humbly ask for the money back like a dog.

returned the money to the heroine, but still couldn't get the heroine's forgiveness.

The male protagonist stuffed money in her house and was about to leave the city alone when he fell ill.

Entering the hospital again, the heroine finds that she is wrong to blame the man, and the two rekindle their old relationship.

So, in the company of his girlfriend, the man died in the world...

Xu Guang's head hurts when he sees this story, "You deserve to go to the country of sticks to film, it's really not in vain!" ”

This script has a sense of déjà vu of a Korean drama.

Dog blood, reversal, and dog blood.

Not only him, but the blind sister even had a lustful light in her eyes.

Silently looked at the uncle, his teeth squeaking.

This is a happy ending that the uncle told her?

Boyfriend and girlfriend together?

Co-authored, he meowed his girlfriend with her boyfriend's posthumous photo together, right?!

Why don't you let your girlfriend hold his head?

Ma Yudong looked at her innocently, isn't this the movie story with tears and sweetness you want?

The blind sister almost squirted out a mouthful of salt soda.

I said that I cried in the early stage and laughed in the later stage.

Are you laughing in the early stage and crying in the later stage?

And it's okay to laugh first and then cry, for Mao still laughs with the life experience described by her and her uncle, and then cries at the end.

Isn't that what you're saying?

Uncle will also treat her like this in the future, making her laugh and cry?

Ma Yudong couldn't understand this silly girl who was extremely active in her heart, and looked at Xu Guangtou and repeated the script, "What do you think of this story?" ”

Xu Guangtou finally put down the script, "Truth or falsehood?" ”

"Falsehood."

"It's so well written! I'm jealous! ”

"And what about the truth?"

Xu Guangtou punched him, "If you weren't my friend, I would have wanted to send you a blade!" ”

"I didn't expect Dongzi that you still have this ability, and you actually wrote a movie story that even Lao Tzu can see stomach pain."

"I really underestimated you before, how do you say it, Zhang Fei embroidered, thick and fine!"

Ma Yudong replied with a disdainful gesture, "Lao Tzu has always been coarse, not thin." ”

Hearing this, Xu Guangtou laughed, "Then you have to ask your younger siblings." ”

The blind sister blushed.

She confirmed her previous conjecture, and sure enough, she couldn't let the uncle meet this man alone.

It's too bad.

However, Xu Guangtou is distinguished from the quality of a story, not by a script.

A good scripted movie is about people.

Human motivation is the first step in the film, and the unfolding of the story also depends on human choice.

It just so happened that the two of them started their movies from Ning Hao's movies.

In this regard, the two have a common language.

Xu Guangtou briefly summarized the male protagonist of this play, "Since you set him as a gangster, and he is following the boss, do you want to set an identity for him?" ”

Ma Yudong thought thoughtfully, "You mean to make him a small leader?" ”

Xu Guangtou shook his head for a moment, "The little boss can also be, but I think it's still something worse, aren't you trying to make this male protagonist have a sense of reversal, so that the female protagonist will be curious about him?" ”

Rollback?

And let the shop street owner have a good reputation for him?

Ma Yudong picked up the pen and wrote: A beloved big brother? But because he has the ability, the boss put up with him.

Xu Guangtou nodded frequently, this setting is reasonable, and it can also take advantage of the situation to let the heroine discover the advantages of the male protagonist in the back.

But why is he loved?

Especially being given a good reputation by those bosses who are asked for debts, which is not an easy thing.

"Or do you mean he's actually undercover?" But soon Xu Guangtou self-denied this identity, which did not fit the story.

Ma Yudong came to the window and continued to smoke.

There happened to be an old man crossing the road over there, his legs and feet were inconvenient, and a group of young people happened to pass by, and one of them took the initiative to go up and help the old man cross the road.

Ma Yudong Nunu mouthed, "What do you think of that person's behavior?" ”

Xu looked at the past, "Respect for the old and love for the young, traditional virtue." ”

He quickly guessed what Ma Yudong meant, and clapped his palm, "This idea is great!" ”

Our traditional Chinese virtue is to respect the old and love the young.

Then just borrow this.

not only lays the groundwork for the later transformation, but also makes the audience wonder, why did the actor do this?!

In this way, the transformation of the male protagonist in the future will not feel so abrupt.

Here I have to talk about one of the characteristics of the movie, stability.

The audience bought tickets, and very few people left the venue halfway through.

is not like a TV series, if you are unhappy, you will change the channel, so as to leave enough time for the actor to change.

Ma Yudong felt the scorching gaze coming from behind, and there was no doubt that she was a blind sister.

Her uncle is so handsome!

Ma Yudong smiled, picked up the pen, and filled in a few lines of words in the actor's character, "Bald, what else do you think is unreasonable." ”

Xu Guangtou was also very happy, but he didn't expect Ma Yudong to have the same idea as him, "Ming'er, you hang the director, I will hang the screenwriter, and then let Huang Bo hang as an investor, and then give Ning Hao an assistant director responsibility, and our brothers will break out together." ”

The two talked for a long, long time.

I saw that the sun was about to set.

The watermelon girl finally couldn't help but raise her hand, "I have a question. ”

She sat up straight, "What then?" Do you still lack a heroine in this play? I think I'm a good fit. ”

I thought it was just a vase, but I actually came to recommend myself, which is something that no one expected.

Obviously he brought it, but Xu Guangtou didn't think it was a big deal, and sat there with his arms crossed, "I don't care, it depends on whether Dongzi likes your type or not." ”

He was clearly deliberately causing trouble.

provoked Ma Yudong to look at him angrily, didn't you see a girl next to him?

You can say this kind of thing in public, you want to be crazy?

The blind sister is obviously a dragon fruit, but at this time she has a slight upper hand in the face of watermelon, "I am the heroine of the uncle, and the only one in the future!" ”