Chapter 228 Script Revision

To put it mildly, sometimes it's quite boring to be reborn. There is money everywhere around me.

Some of them are clear at a glance, just like other rebirth and forced ones, buying courtyard houses, buying antiques, buying monkey tickets, buying cattle stocks......

Li Yuan is the same here, as soon as he pats his head, he can give his eldest brother a chance to drink water dispenser.

Some are just on the right path and avoid all the cost of trial and error. It's like making the pig system, the operation of the wild mountain and clear spring is listed, the acquisition of the film library and so on. I don't need to do anything more at all, and the money seems to be rolling in.

Back to the film project, it was the "Two Big Smoking Guns".

The 1 million publicity and distribution costs are actually the travel expenses of two stupid girls to major film festivals, this cost cannot be counted, and the real production cost should be about 2 million.

However, now there is the friendship sponsorship of Zhang Xi and Li Rusong, which is 400,000. Product placement is expected to be around five. Anyway, it's all the advertisers of Wild Springs Cinema, so it should be easy to fool. Considering that movie product placement is still a new thing, let's be conservative and count it as 100,000!

The other is the guaranteed income of the film library.

In terms of the management of the company, in fact, the Metaverse Film Company and the Metaverse Copyright Management Company are two companies. They are all independent and self-financed.

In terms of the division of equity, Li Yuan personally holds 50% of the equity of the Metaverse Copyright Management Company, and the other 50% is held by the Metaverse Film Company.

Therefore, when the film company completes the production of a movie, the rights management company will pay a guaranteed income of 1 million. And the future copyright operation income, that is, the copyright income two years after the public release, those are the income of the copyright management company, and it has nothing to do with the film company.

Although these are all companies controlled by Li Yuan, they still have to follow the Company Law.

It's all the same. It's like an advertisement in Wild Springs Cinema. Don't look at Yeshan Qingquan and Tangzun Liquor are Li Yuan's companies, every time they advertise, they still have to pay the copyright management company advertising fees.

At this point, through a simple calculation, the movie has not yet started shooting, and it has already returned more than 1.5 million? Almost paid for?

To be honest, no matter how "Two Big Smoking Guns" hits the streets, there will always be a little bit at the box office, right? If you're lucky, sell a few overseas copyrights, and even get back the travel expenses?

Li Yuan was surprised to find that it seems that there is a trick in making a movie?

Thirty items of the eldest lady are too exaggerated, but ten, twenty ......?

It's better to take it leisurely and take your time one by one!

……

Today is Chinese New Year's Eve. After playing mahjong, several women went to the kitchen again and started to get busy.

This time, the New Year's dish was different, in addition to the usual chicken, duck and fish, there was also a table full of seafood.

Two large pots of braised shrimp, one for Antarctic krill and the other for Arctic sweet shrimp. Steamed hairtail fish, yellow croaker and tofu soup .......

There is also pan-fried salmon fillet. It is simply marinated and fried directly in the oil pan. The gravy is tender and fragrant, and when it is served, it is still bubbling with oil.

In the end, two large lobsters and two king crabs were served. This has made those women have nowhere to start, and the mother and they simply burned the matter......

Staring at such a giant shrimp soldier and crab general, Li Yunyun, Lai Di, and Zhao Di, these little Lori, were snorting and looking stupid directly. Qiqi was even more excited and kicked his calves again and again, and his mouth was inexplicably sounded.

Li Yuan was also amused: "Grandma, Mom, this is too much, right?" ”

When importing seafood, Li Yuan imported a lot of such parts by the way. Taking advantage of this time to go home for the New Year, I brought my mother and daughter-in-law to them to try it.

In fact, like Antarctic krill and Arctic sweet shrimp are not very expensive, mainly from the north and south poles of the earth, which still sounds relatively rare. However, here in the mainland, although hairtail and yellow croaker are also rare, at least I have heard of them. But in this day and age, salmon, lobster and king crab are unheard of, and they are definitely beyond their imagination.

Regarding Li Yuan's words, Zhang Zhen slanted a glance: "It's the New Year, that's it!" ”

All right! Even the eight famous sentences have come out, what else can be said?

Chinese people have always had eight famous sayings: for your good, it's not easy to get used to it, the children are still young, the age is old, they are coming, and the New Year's is over, and everyone is dead.

As long as these famous sentences are uttered, they are generally invincible.

However, it should be reminded that "seafood is cold." You can't eat too much of this thing, and if you eat too much, you'll have diarrhea. ”

"Yes, yes." Li Lanlan impatiently surrounded the king crab and turned left and right, "What's wrong with eating something good from you!" Brother is stingy. ”

Zhang Zhen explained with a smile: "These high-quality things are not eaten often. You bring home so much, eat more these days. ”

"I've got everything there. It's just for you to eat. Li Yuan laughed in his heart. The fish and crabs in the sea are the top goods, and the fish and crabs in the lake have become the bottom grade garbage?

“……”

"Brother! It's so hard, how can we open it? ”

"Such a big shrimp, such a big crab, how should we eat it?"

"Hurry up and help us!"

"Yuanzi, you don't want to break it with a hammer, do you? Hee-hee-hee. ”

"Daughter-in-law, you're right. There are special hammers and pliers in the restaurant. ”

"Huh? Is there really one? ”

"Brother, you're not bragging again, are you?"

“……”

A happy Chinese New Year's Eve dinner, followed by a family watch the Spring Festival Gala together. That's Chinese New Year's Eve for most families.

Before the Spring Festival Gala began, the whole family had already crowded in front of the TV, waiting for this legendary highest hall.

Speaking from the heart, the previous Yutouao Village was relatively pitiful. Since there is no electricity, they have never watched the Spring Festival Gala. Of course, there are also very few other recreational activities, and even playing mahjong has just been learned?

So the mother and daughter-in-law were even more interested, staring intently at the TV, eager to get into it directly.

However, in Li Yuan's eyes, this Spring Festival Gala ...... Not satisfactory! There is nothing impressive about the show. Even the most popular sketch show, the older generation of sketch king Chen Erye broke with Yang Ma, and the new generation of sketch Wang Uncle Benshan has not yet achieved great success.

The only commendable ones are a few songs, "Like Fog, Like Rain and Like Wind", "The Sound of the Waves Remains" or something.

Oh, and Niu Qun and Feng Gong's cross talk "Auction", which includes the auction of a hair of the national football coach Schlapner, and it was warmly sought after by the audience......

It can be seen that how hot is the national football team at this time? How popular is Yangshuai? Where is it like decades later, as long as the national football team is mentioned in cross talk, it is definitely sarcastic and ridiculous. is waiting for the national football team's grandsons to fight a lawsuit.

mmp! Those grandsons still have the face to fight a lawsuit?

……

Happy days are always short-lived, and the Spring Festival flies by in a flash.

In the days of the holiday, Li Yuan took his daughter-in-law and son back to his parents' house, and basically finished talking about the water dispenser. He ran around again to pay New Year's greetings. Wang Quan is there, Luo Changfeng is there......

Interestingly, Li Yuan also paid a courtesy visit to Xiong Qi, who was the newly arranged director of Yeshan Qingquan in that city. There is no other meaning, the main thing is to get acquainted, and by the way, send some New Year's goods.

What I didn't expect was that Xiong Qi was obviously a lonely little old man. After meeting, he not only got to the bottom of the matter of Yeshan Qingquan, but also inquired about a lot of details. In the end, when he heard that there was an African farm in the wild mountain and clear spring, he took the initiative to ask Ying to go there and have a look.

Of course, Li Yuan is indispensable. If the old comrades want to distract themselves, it is nothing more than some travel expenses.

Anyway, I was busy and half dead, so I didn't stay at home for long. Finally ran all these relationships, and Li Yuan hurried back to the capital......

As soon as he returned to the capital, Li Yuan gathered all three screenwriting teams, and they held a conference together.

"Mr. Li, according to your request, these three scripts have all been completed. The time you've asked for is too tight, and we've been staying up a lot late. ”

"It's hard work, everyone's hard work. I brought some souvenirs from my hometown, and everyone will share them later. Li Yuanle said.

For these students to work overtime, Li Yuan was not stingy and gave them enough allowances.

Of course, in such a short period of time, the creativity that Li Yuan said was made into a complete script? This is certainly not possible. It's nothing more than to make a rough sketch of the entire script first, and then slowly add the details.

However, as soon as he finished the first script - "Two Big Smoking Guns", Li Yuan found many problems:

"There are a couple of issues here. If a black humor film like this, full of violent crimes, wants to be made into a co-production, the mainland will definitely not be able to pass it. You should be more familiar with the audit policy than I am, right? Then you need to change the context. Changed to ...... The magic capital of the Republic of China. Underground gangsters, concessions, little devils, warlords, etc. ”

"Teacher Li, this is okay. With multiple forces, it can increase dramatic conflicts. ”

"Do you think the name "Two Smoking Guns" is bad and easy to misunderstand? Reminiscent of a one-of-a-kind product. This one really should be revised. ”

"Can it be changed to "Two Golden Guns"? Two gold-encrusted antique guns circulating in the palace? ”

"That's it. It doesn't affect the main story. ”

“……”

Since the original version of "Two Smoking Guns" is a British film. In English, the big smoking gun has the implication of completeness and comprehensiveness, which indicates that the whole film is a multi-line narrative, but the plot is a complete plot.

Of course, the smoking gun is also a central element of this film. All kinds of interesting things happened around these two big smoking guns.

So as a British film, the name "Two Big Smoking Guns" is quite appropriate. But the magic has become a domestic film, and it will not have that taste, but it will cause some unpleasant ambiguity. It's better to change it to "Two Golden Guns".

"Mr. Li, we always feel that you are a ...... of "Two Big Smoking Guns" What's not going to be outstanding? "Finally a student objected.

Don't say it, it's true.

In the original version of "Two Smoking Guns", the first half hour was lethargic. And the multi-line narrative structure seems a bit cluttered. It is also necessary to constantly use voice-over voices to explain the relationship between the characters.

What's even more unaccustomed is that there are four gangs in "Two Big Smoking Guns", and there is a small gang of two people outside, a father-son lone ranger. But in the selection of actors, it seems to be a criterion, that is, the appearance of a bandit, which is difficult to distinguish at all.

What's particularly strange is that maybe the British old don't have any imagination at all, and the gangsters are all in suits and leather shoes? How does this service work? It makes people vomit blood when they see it.

It wasn't until half an hour later, as the plot unfolded, that it slowly got better.

In addition, the essence of this film is undoubtedly the multi-line narrative structure. But in the creation of words, it seems to be mediocre, and it does not reflect the subtlety of this at all.

I have to wait until I watch the film to realize that this is wonderful! It turns out that this is a multi-line narrative structure!

To be honest, director Ning Hao, who later borrowed the multi-line narrative structure, when he was filming "Crazy Stone", it took a few minutes in front of him, and in just a few shots, he quickly sorted out the complex relationship between the characters.

So in the creation of the script, "Crazy Stone" is definitely a step ahead.

After all, "Crazy Stone" has "Two Big Smoking Guns" as a reference, and it is the so-called standing on the shoulders of giants.

And "Two Big Smoking Guns" is a pioneer, and his director is a rookie director, which is slightly flawed, which is also understandable. does not affect the historical status of this film.

However, Li Yuan still wants to pursue ornamentality as much as possible. In order to solve this problem, he made a hard rule - the opening part must be limited to five minutes!

As for the unremarkable in the creation of the script? There's nothing to be done. If you can't get the finished product, you can't convince others at all.

"Teacher Li, your previous suggestion was quite good. If you divide those gangs into gangsters, little devils, warlords, etc., and then distinguish them by the performances of the actors, then it will be much easier to sort out the relationship between the characters. ”

"Isn't that great? Everyone brainstormed and worked together to figure out a solution. Don't give me red envelopes? If you have a good idea, just a red envelope! ”

In the midst of laughter, someone said: "Mr. Li, I heard that you are called Brother Yuan, who is called in Hong Kong." If you want to add comedy elements, one is through comedy performances, and the other is those words. Can you help add a few lines? ”

"This can be there. I also want to get more red envelopes. In the midst of laughter, Li Yuan said, "Don't worry, I will join in the creation of "Two Golden Guns" throughout the process." Even when the film starts, the screenwriters on the scene can modify it at any time. ”

"I have a suggestion, can you add a mantra for a specific person?"

"I also have an idea......

“……”

It took most of the day to discuss the script of "Two Golden Guns" to be completed. Everyone was exhausted, and the student in charge of recording was even more dizzy.

Seeing such a situation, Li Yuan clapped his hands with a smile: "Let's do this first!" Let's take a half-hour break, and then discuss the "Rich and Powerful" series. ”

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