Another copy was written.

yes.

I finally breathed a sigh of relief.

I'll write it after the settlement.

What should be said will still be said, and I hope that those who raise books can subscribe and slaughter it.

Subscriptions are a little leather whip that moves forward with antennas.

Syllable! Syllable! Syllable! Frame!

And then it's a daily chat with everyone.,Today's time.,Mainly to talk about this copy.,I found myself inadequate.。

[The following content involves serious spoilers for the copy, readers who have not read the copy and plan to read it, please do not continue reading.] 】

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For this copy, unlike the previous ones, I am not very satisfied with myself, at most it is a passing story, but not excellent.

Because when I was still writing in the middle and late stages of the copy, I found that I could write better in the handling of many details, and these details could not be modified in the middle of the year, so they evolved into small thorns in my heart.

I've been regretting it in the later period, why did you write it like this in the first place? Isn't it better to write like this? Was the brain Watts at the time? Why is it that the torture committed half a month ago is the current self?

I would now like to enumerate the points that I think can be improved completely.

First, about the dungeon settings and intelligence, in some cases, it can be presented in a more authoritative way, and if it is the premise of decryption, the best way is to display it in the early stage.

In this copy, the information of the Demon King was told to Lin Li through the mouth of Nobita and the Time and Space Patrol, and there was a problem with this, this information was not known all at once, it was constantly pulled in the process, and it was obtained slowly.

The sooner this information is given, the more fun the reader will feel whether they guess correctly or incorrectly. For example, I felt that I had written it too late in the way of replacing the person, and that it would be revealed in a few chapters.

The solution I want now is to order more props like magical conchs, or if necessary, when the male protagonist enters the copy to replace the character, he first uses the system to tell a lot of authoritative information like a script kill.

I'm sorry!

Second: the focus of the role is a little biased, and it is easy to misplace expectations.

The main characters of this dungeon are Time Patrol, Nobita, and Demon King.

But this problem is,Patrol and Demon King can be understood as derivative new characters.,What you want to see is to interact with children familiar with childhood.,Fat Tiger Doctor them.,I wrote less.,This is also a problem for me.,I'll pay more attention to it later.。

I'm sorry!

Third: The text description is not enough, the copy seems a little messy, and I am really a big waste in terms of fighting.

The textual description is mainly reflected in the explanation of 'person' and 'discontinuity in time', but part of the reason is that it involves God, which will be pulled out later and explained formally.

I'm sorry!

Fourth: the details are not good.

Kameda's letter is a super snake addition, borrowing Lin Li's brain to deduce the chronological order, this is especially to decipher what should be written.

The purpose of that letter was to further break the relationship between the system and the copy at the end, and I didn't need to write a chronological order at all, just write a little Kameda ridiculing Lin Li, and just agree to meet.

I was such a big fool that day, I realized the problem early on, and even after posting it, it didn't feel right, and the thief regretted it, oh, my stupid groundhog.

Super super super sorry!

Fifth: Bear the end of the climax, this time it is almost meaningful.

When I wrote that I didn't feel very cool and smooth, like diarrhea, I was already miserable and miserable in advance.

Take out Doraemon's outrageous props to reverse the process of abusing the demon king, this fighting part, one-word evaluation: Lala!

I'm not going to focus on this part of the orgasm anymore, I'm going to do it differently.

I'm sorry!

Sixth: In fact, the copy is not good.

The water in "Doraemon" is too deep to grasp......

The outrageous and paradoxical nature of the world itself is difficult to be logically self-consistent, which actually causes great difficulties to my creation, and in some places, it is forcibly rounded for the sake of this world.

People are not responsible for taking out props for a unit drama, and they don't consider the paradox between props at all, but when they write, there will definitely be readers who will pick on them.

Why don't you use XXX, it's obviously okay to do this at this time......

That's why I banned time-based bug items from the beginning, and let the Demon King pretend that the items were damaged......

But after all, this is still a problem that I have in the selection of dungeons, and the later dungeons should be more cautious in their choice.

I'm sorry!

Seventh: the way of thinking cannot be changed, and it is easy to dislike.

When I wrote about the luxury flashlight, I found that the comment area had seen the hint of a living creature, and my pupils shook: It turned out that what I thought was foreshadowing, was actually enlarged on the face?

So in order to decipher the secret and have more surprises, I can only start to make up for it and cut the plot of 'Doraemon'.

This also led to another effect, which I did not write about the plot of the tenth man on the patrol.

He was supposed to be another smoke bomb, but I missed it, and I took a few strokes, I really damn it......

Next time, even if everyone guesses it, I'm going to write it head-on!

I'm sorry!

Eighth: About the whole book, it's been a long time since I've summoned a new character, so maybe everyone misses it a little bit.

Actually, what I envisioned at the beginning was that this copy had a 'summon' - Doraemon, but after all, this is not a collision between characters with different art styles, and it feels almost funny to write.

I've realized this, and as I'll notice later, there should be a rather outrageous experience character summoned during the Overworld, as well as new permanent characters.

I'm sorry!

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There are still some problems, but I won't list them all, and I have regretted almost 2,000 words.

I'm not afraid that there is a problem, I'm afraid that I haven't found a problem, and if you still have any bad perception points, you can comment on this article, and I will like it to show that I saw it (mild, in the heart of the glass).

Although I wrote millions of words before writing this book, it is not a type of book at all, so I can still be regarded as a budding author, more tolerant and more loving.

Now I want to play something new with each dungeon, and it's normal for things to go wrong, but I hope that I can keep improving, grow wiser, and write better stories.

The drawbacks and benefits of the dungeon stream are here, and every dungeon is a new starting point!

Above.

When the copy ends, take a two-day leave and adjust the status.

The next copy should also be an IP that everyone has seen, and it is still active today.

Momda.

Street Fighting Antennas.