63, the biography of Sun Tzu
Strong, intellectually strong, and ambitious.
Jiang Zhiqiang tasted the product and said with a smile: "It's a little interesting, continue to talk." ”
Li Qing picked up the script and nodded, and continued: "So back to the script itself, why do I say it's not good, because the characters it creates have no charm.
Take the protagonist Su Can as an example, as a general of the Qing army at the beginning, he rescued Baylor, killed all sides, rescued Baylor and then hung up the seal, just to seek the highest level of martial arts, this is fame and fortune for me like floating clouds.
If the pen and ink fall on Su Can's quest for martial arts next, then this story is a good story. Because Su Can's image is plump and charming.
But the script is just a drop in the bucket, so that the highest level of seeking martial arts only falls on Su Can's mouth, and then he turns to the fight with Yuan Lie, which is going astray.
In other words, the protagonist's inner drive and obstacle do not match.
At this time, the driving force in the protagonist Su Can's heart has been transformed into revenge.
In fact, this is okay, it would be good to take the pursuit of the highest realm of martial arts as a big goal, but the problem is that the follow-up of the script is not connected, which leads to the so-called highest realm in the end only staying on Su Can's mouth. ”
Li Qing shook his head when he said this: "The movie is only a short ninety minutes, we only need to give the characters a goal, and then let this goal drive them to act, conflict, fight, and finally achieve the goal." And this script can't even do that, it's completely substandard, it's not even complete. ”
"Ahem!" Jiang Zhiqiang coughed, "Xiao Du is actually quite good, but the preparation of this project was in a hurry, so ......"
Zhou Xun pulled down Li Qing's sleeve and said with a smile: "Qingzi, don't pick a problem, just say how to change it." ”
"I think it's better to make a fuss about the grievances." Li Qing looked at Yuan Heping and Zhao Wenzhuo, and said with a smile, "With Director Yuan and Brother Zhuo here, the focus still falls on the play."
I have a vague idea that Su Can's talent is better than Yuan Lie's, so he learns martial arts quickly. If Yuan Lie wants to take revenge, he can only find another way and only practice one set of punches. Presented, that is, the so-called many pairs of Jane, Bo to fine.
But Jing may not be able to beat Bo, and the reason why Yuan Lie can defeat Su Can is because he is familiar with all of Su Can's boxing techniques. So if Su Can wanted to defeat him later, he needed to create a new set of boxing techniques, that is, the drunken punches in the script, and finally defeated Yuan Lie. That's pretty much it. What do you guys think? ”
Several people present looked at each other, and finally Jiang Zhiqiang spoke: "That's it, Qingzi, after you go back, you sort out your ideas, improve them into a script, and bring them to us to see." ”
Li Qing nodded: "Okay." It will take a little time, though. ”
"Time is okay, is a week enough?"
"Yes."
Jiang Zhiqiang bowed his head and said, "Then it's decided." ”
Yuan Heping looked at Li Qing at this time and asked, "Qingzi, do you know martial arts?" ”
"Huh?" Li Qing was stunned for a moment, and said embarrassedly, "I won't." Does Tai Chi count? The kind of workout. ”
"Tai Chi, ......" Yuan Heping thought for a while, nodded and said, "That's it, when your script comes out, let's make an appointment to talk about it again." ”
"Okay."
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"Over the mountains and forests, the wind roared, the cold swished, and the heavy rain came to an end. Looking at the river sky, the electric switch thundered and thundered. Won the golden scales, and the fisherman swung back to the boat ......"
The discussion of the script came to an end, and the group watched the performance in the teahouse.
Li Qing listened to the lyrics with his eyes closed, and his fingers gently tapped the armrest with the rhythm, feeling comfortable.
"This isn't Peking Opera, is it?" Yuan Heping asked.
Jiang Zhiqiang said: "No. This is the Jingyun drum. ”
Li Qing also opened his eyes and said with a smile: "Yes, Jingyun drum, this section is called "Wind and Rain Returning to the Boat". ”
"Huh?" Jiang Zhiqiang was a little surprised, "Qingzi still likes this?" ”
Zhou Xun smiled: "Haha, he can still sing." ”
Li Qing smiled: "It's just a hobby, I always want to pinch my throat when I hear too much." ”
Ren Zhonglun looked at Li Qing, turned to Zhou Xun and said, "Xiao Xun, our drama has also been approved, and Qingzi can try it when casting." ”
"Huh?" Zhou Xun was stunned for a moment, and also looked at Li Qing carefully.
Li Qing was a little uncomfortable and asked, "What kind of play?" ”
"Let's go back and talk to you." Zhou Xun replied, and then said to Ren Zhonglun, "Then you have to recommend it to the director." ”
Ren Zhonglun smiled and waved his hand: "Haha, this is no problem." ”
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After the show, Zhou Xun sent Li Qing home and advised: "After you go back, get the script done as soon as possible, and this drama will start next month at the latest." ”
"Understood. What about the role of Yuan Lie? ”
"That role is yours." Zhou Xun glanced at him and said with a smile, "Even if you want to add drama to yourself, don't go too far, although Zhao Wenzhuo is an honest person, he is not easy to bully." ”
Li Qing couldn't cry or laugh: "Where do you want to go?" Am I that kind of person? ”
"Anyway, you can do it yourself. I have time to buy another book and go back to it. ”
"What book?"
"The Wind."
"Oh."
"Aren't you curious why you read this book?"
"Isn't it just going to be adapted into a movie? Sister, I know now, your schedule is really full. ”
"Haha, then you're right. Several plays are waiting for me now. ”
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"Li Xiaoqing, I'm back!" Jing Tian went straight to the study when he got home, but as soon as he entered the door, he saw Li Qing grabbing his hair, "What are you doing, Li Kitten?" ”
"I was wrong, really." Li Qing hugged Jing Tian who came over and said bitterly, "Isn't it good for me to be an actor honestly?" Why should I change the script? ”
Jing Tian hugged his head and said with a smile: "Change the script? "Su Qi'er"? ”
"Hmm. I can't write it. ”
"Hee-hee, if you can't write it, put it down first." Jing Tian sat on Li Qing's lap and kissed him, hugged his neck and smiled, "I have something to tell you." ”
"What's the matter?"
"Didn't I tell you before, the company is going to make a play, and it's ready to set up a project. I'm the female protagonist.,You come and be the male protagonist for me.。 ”
"Huh? There has been no movement for so long, why is it suddenly necessary to set up a project? ”
"I don't know, the company just told me today."
"......" Li Qing was a little speechless, "You are the shopkeeper who did it...... What kind of play? ”
"The Biography of Sun Tzu, a historical costume drama."
"The Legend of Sun Tzu?" Li Qing was stunned, "Sun Wu?" ”
"Yes. The male protagonist is Sun Wu. I don't know the specifics, I haven't read the script yet. ”
"It's not." Li Qing frowned and said strangely, "What are you doing in this company?" ”
"What's wrong?"
"This kind of drama is a man's play when you hear it, where do you put it?"
“……”