"Your script is good, very thoughtful, and the plot is very cleverly conceived, but some of the plots look a little stiff, some are redundant, and it feels like a perfect script if you shorten it."

Lin Qinghe held Zhou Qingyun's adapted script in his hand and read it carefully for ten minutes before he said.

After all, Lin Qinghe has been a screenwriter and a director.

You can see the advantages and disadvantages of this script at a glance, Zhou Qingyun is a little embarrassed, and it just so happens that the points that Lin Qinghe said are all plots that he added after adapting them.

"Then what does the teacher think I should change?" Zhou Qingyun, who was eager to learn, asked.

Lin Qinghe groaned for a while, smacked his mouth and said: "First of all, your script mainly tells the story in flashbacks and interludes, which is no problem, but there are some plots, I feel that they can be streamlined, too many useless narratives will affect the look and feel of the movie." ”

Lin Qinghe paused for a moment, and then continued to add: "I think you might as well put the main shots in the memories of the male and female protagonists, and the sequential plot doesn't need to be too much." A couple of shots will suffice. ”

"Another point, that is, you seem to have repeatedly mentioned the song called fairy tale in the script, I think this song is an important element of your micro-film, right? If you have to have a tune, it's not easy. ”

Lin Qinghe pondered for a while and said, "I'll ask you the people in the composition department to see if you can make a piece." ”

Zhou Qingyun hurriedly waved his hand and said, "No, no, teacher, I'll solve the matter of this tune myself, don't bother you." ”

It is already rare for the teacher to be able to help him point out so many problems, how can he bother the teacher to trust the relationship, how can this make Zhou Qingyun feel at ease.

After all, this thing is a human favor, and it is used less than once.

Besides, Zhou Qingyun is very confident, no matter how good the people in the composition department are, there should be no way to surpass the song in his mind.

Lin Qinghe asked suspiciously, "Huh? You've solved it? I guess I just found a junior in the composition department to help me write it casually. ”

If there is no song in his mind, in the face of such a script, Zhou Qingyun would really have such a plan, and he could just find a junior to deal with it.

After all, if you are a composer, as long as you play the chords well, you can form a few universal chords at will.

For example, 15634145, 1645, 4536251 or something, you can write a tune with a little bit of music theory with these universal chords.

It's just that the songs that may be written may be more popular, just like when you listen to a certain singer's songs, you always feel that the songs he sings are in the same key.

At this time, you don't need to doubt it, yes, it is precisely because he is applying these chord directions over and over again that you will feel that his songs are all the same tune after listening to it for a long time.

This micro-movie is actually just a graduation project, just for the grading teachers, and they won't pay too much attention to whether your song is good or not when they score.

The criterion for scoring is actually more based on your ability to write a script and your shooting skills.

But since there are ready-made classics in his mind, Zhou Qingyun naturally has no intention of hiding them, his first work, of course, is to try to achieve the most perfect appearance in his mind.

Zhou Qingyun said with a smile: "When I write the script these days, I always feel that there is a melody flashing in my mind, so I plan to try it and write it." ”

In fact, what Zhou Qingyun said was not wrong, but he didn't tell the truth completely, and Zhou Qingyun still felt that he only needed to know the secret that his dreams were special.

"You can also write songs, yes." Lin Qinghe was even more satisfied.

can write songs, doesn't this have a common topic with Lin Jiayue, two people with a common topic can get twice the result with half the effort.

This is the profound experience that Lin Qinghe summed up from chasing Jiang Xiaoyun back then.

It's just that this kid doesn't seem to have any feelings for his daughter, which is a bit difficult.

I have to do something to make the two of them intersect a little more, Lin Qinghe made up his mind in his heart.

As for why Zhou Qingyun wrote songs, Lin Qinghe didn't ask too much.

After all, as a director, there are indeed a lot of skills that need to be mastered, at least the level of music appreciation must be sufficient, maybe it is Zhou Qingyun's self-taught composition, which is not surprising.

........

At the dinner table, Lin Qinghe and his wife and Zhou Qingyun were still talking and laughing, while Lin Jiayue was eating with his head bored.

Jiang Xiaoyun looked at his daughter and frowned, these two people, one is not active, the other is sullen, how can there be a story like this.

Jiang Xiaoyun directly found a topic, planning to let Lin Jiayue, who was trying to fish, join the group chat: "Jiayue, you have solved that matter?" ”

Lin Jiayue glanced at Zhou Qingyun without a trace, and then looked at her mother, as if to say: There are outsiders here, and she doesn't want to talk about this topic.

Jiang Xiaoyun raised his eyebrows, completely ignoring Lin Jiayue's potential meaning: "What are you doing with your eyebrows, asking you." ”

She didn't treat Zhou Qingyun as an outsider, and Lin Jiayue's love scandal caused a lot of trouble on the Internet.

Jiang Xiaoyun didn't know if Zhou Qingyun knew about it.

Maybe it was because Zhou Qingyun didn't look at Lin Jiayue last time because Lin Jiayue was having a scandal at the time, so he stayed away from Lin Jiayue.

Of course, Jiang Xiaoyun knew that Lin Jiayue's scandal had been clarified yesterday, but she wasn't sure if Zhou Qingyun knew about it.

If you don't know, just say it to your face, so maybe Zhou Qingyun won't have a mustard in his heart.

But Jiang Xiaoyun didn't know, in fact, Zhou Qingyun didn't care about any scandals at all.

He didn't look at Lin Jiayue right, it was purely because this woman had made too deep an impression on him when they met in the previous two times.

Lin Jiayue pursed her lips and said with some annoyance: "The company has agreed to issue a clarification statement, and has explained it clearly to the media and fans, and no one will lead the rhythm anymore." ”

Jiang Xiaoyun glanced at Lin Jiayue, "Then why are you still looking sullen?" ”

Lin Jiayue shook her head, "No." ”

"Tsk, you're unhappy with all three words written on your face." Jiang Xiaoyun paused for a moment, and then asked jokingly: "Why, it is impossible to be hidden by the company." ”

Lin Jiayue glanced at Jiang Xiaoyun, silently took a piece of braised pork and handed it to her mother without speaking, and said helplessly: "Mom, I beg you, eat a few more bites, don't ask." ”

Jiang Xiaoyun was stunned, and Zhou Qingyun, who was listening to the conversation between mother and daughter next to him, also paused and glanced at Lin Jiayue.

"Is it really hidden?" Jiang Xiaoyun asked tentatively.

Lin Jiayue didn't speak, and lowered her head to eat.

Jiang Xiaoyun's heart was tight, terrible, it seemed to poke at the sore spot in her daughter's heart, "I'm sorry, Jiayue, my mother didn't mean it, I just made a joke......"

Lin Jiayue raised her head, looked at Jiang Xiaoyun, shook her head and said, "Mom, I'm fine, let's eat." ”